Although this update still has flaws: the story in the final part is like "it's just work", characters' decisions in the final part werre not really logical, and Akira got highly praised by the thugs but his actual ability was disappointing. However, personally this is a good update overall. The first 2/3 parts are really interesting and make me throbbing about what will happen next. We also get to see the heroines - Noriko and Asami actually doing something, which is a good development. Especially Noriko, who in the love route of Yasuka all she did was to grumble and was not cooperative, even when her mother was in danger. It would be better if Yasuka had more of a role in this update, but it is not as bad as the flaws above though. (BTW this review is made by a person who only played the love route of Asami and Yasuka, and the maledom route of Noriko)