So the art seems really good. The writing.. white font over busy images is a bit hard to read, and the intro has a bit too much text (that would be better learned as the game carries out) but I like that its not afraid of saying sexy things. The topic is hot and certainly up my alley. And I stopped playing a few screens in, upon meeting the neighbor.
I have no problem with patreon. I support some devs on there, rotating through to support each for a little bit 'cause I'm not a 1%er. No shade on that. But when so much content and choices is blocked to patreon only, and right off the bat.. I mean, I am grateful I didn't have to get further before it happened, where I'd be quitting with a lot more annoyance. But also yea... no.... no thanks. Me, personally, I support devs so they'll keep building something awesome, not to get access to stuff others don't. And since I rotate out whom I support / when I support? Games like this mean I can't see updates for long periods of time (I won't load mid-game just to suddenly get story compatibility issues and censored content), meaning I don't play updates, meaning I forget I even care about the game... Eh. (Its kinda funny that part of what's locked out is the stuff where you get denied / censored - which, I imagine people into that kink might get off on being paywalled?)
You do you, the game is probably great, and your call how you release it - its your work. Best of luck.
