Really enjoying the writing and pacing so far, I like that the MC is sharp but not overbearing.
The one concern I have is that the game at times is really bright and looks very flat, as a result, it's visually uninteresting due to the lack of contrast (imo) despite the very enjoyable story and dialogue. For example, the bed sheets are white, the floor tiles are white, the characters themselves are pale, the font is white (this is normal, anyway, but it compounds) everything adds up and makes the game look extremely bright and kinda visually painful on certain scenes.
This can be remedied by adding a vignette effect (nothing too crazy, just a little) and changing the shader to something more interesting that has more shadows (if my memory serves me right, in koikatsu, deep sharp shadows and backlit rim lighting are decent ones to start with). As well as just using more colors in the environment, like changing the bed sheets to dark grey or a similarly contrasting color so that Eleanor stands out during her scene.
I'll be keeping an eye out on this, because I have to reiterate, it's very enjoyable to read and I think it has a lot of potential!