VN Ren'Py Grandma's House [Part 4 v0.55] [Moonbox]

[J.R.]

I've got better things to do than troll a goddamn porn forum at 5 in the morning
Read my post above

The whole world doesn't revolve around stirring drama on F95zone.com

Well, you are THE TROLL. First post was "bla bla bla - I liked the game - bla bla bla - and now I don't like it anymore - bla bla bla". The second post was already aggressive, the third showed you never liked the game anyway ("...apart fucky fucky sucky sucky but this almost feels like jumping the shark or something".

Well, it's time to put another one to the ignore list...

 

[kschn68]

Oh my. And even a poor troll, too. Contradicts himself in his own sentences.
And ignored, too

 

[KoGa3]

Well, seems that makes me the third one irgnoring that guy. Damn, wanted to be the first one!

 

[v1900]

So yeah I guess our daughter will be born special needs then, that size cock in a pregnant woman.

He just went ahead and widened that baby's fontanelle.

 

[Crimsonfiend76]

Been absolutely loving the game so far up until this point but I just gotta go on a little rant here

Isn't the entire fucking premise of this game that the MC is trying to fuck his Grandma??

So then why tf does this game have more side characters than a long running telenova?

And now you're randomly making the MC

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How is the MC supposed to be an eligible bachelor fucking every girl across town while he

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Not sure if its incredible padding by Moonbox so we'll never see Allison's bush get ravished till we're a grandparent ourselves OR
he just seriously can't help himself at this point

 

[MoonBox]

Been absolutely loving the game so far up until this point but I just gotta go on a little rant here

Isn't the entire fucking premise of this game that the MC is trying to fuck his Grandma??

So then why tf does this game have more side characters than a long running telenova?

And now you're randomly making the MC

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How is the MC supposed to be an eligible bachelor fucking every girl across town while he

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Not sure if its incredible padding by Moonbox so we'll never see Allison's bush get ravished till we're a grandparent ourselves OR
he just seriously can't help himself at this point

The premise is a grandmother and grandson discovering their feelings for each other.

It's not random, Tanya was always meant to come back pregnant, though I did switch up the timing so she would be visibly pregnant. I'm guessing you don't like pregnancy content, I do, that's one reason she's in there.
Second reason is you might have noticed there are quite a few similarities between her and Nana, that's to show that MC was always subconsciously into Nana and ended up attracted to someone very similar.

I don't see how having a pregnant girlfriend would slow him down in anyway.

I'm making the game the way I want to make it and that's not going to change. If you're not enjoying it, best to stop playing before you waste any more time on it.

 

[Crimsonfiend76]

Didn't know you had to have a 1 year old 24/7 active account to even think about posting an opinion on the prestigious and sacred thread of Grandma's House [v0.07] [MoonBox]

God forbid its just a regular guy giving his quick and honest reaction on a piece of media he just interacted with

Funny how nobody would've bat an eye if I said this latest update was the best thing since slice bread but point out something that has been criticized by numerous reviews and everybody loses their shit

Look man, no offense, no need to get hostile, you can have any opinion you want, but if you just took a couple minutes to read the OP and understand more about the game from the Spoiler and Dev Notes, in addition to 'reading the room' by just skimming through, I dunno, a couple pages or so, you'd understand why your 'opinion' is completely invalid.

 

[JJDrakken]

Look man, no offense, no need to get hostile, you can have any opinion you want, but if you just took a couple minutes to read the OP and understand more about the game from the Spoiler and Dev Notes, in addition to 'reading the room' by just skimming through, I dunno, a couple pages or so, you'd understand why your 'opinion' is completely invalid.

Just report the threads and ignore.

 

[MoonBox]

I know you don't honestly live in the real world if you think knocking somebody up (especially unplanned) doesn't change people, much less a guy that doesn't have his priorities straight (MC doesn't have a job and sits in front of his TV all day when not being a manwhore)

Becoming a father gives purpose, changes outlooks on life, causes major changes in one's priorities

You've already written the MC as some all encompassing, goody two shoes, male mary sue, savior type

Why wouldn't something as dramatic as a pregnancy affect the MC more than just getting his dick hard?

This just feel like its out of character and I think your writing is much more consistent and better than this imo



I'm not gonna lie this reads like a bad trope

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Why would the MC need more reminding of why he likes his Nana? Haven't you done enough to make that point very clear with every action and dialogue written so far?
So not only is the girlfriend barely a character, she's also just a very overdone plot device. Just great, Moonbox

Thanks for the response anyway
You took the time out of your day to address actual criticism instead of, for example, getting your mods to clean up any dissenting opinions or do like your followers and just scream "TROLL! TROLL!" all day like NPCs

I live in the real world. This game isn't set in it though. It's not a life simulator, it's a harem fantasy game.
It's been about 5 minutes since he found out she was pregnant, I think you're judging him a little too prematurely.

Tanya is probably one of the most fleshed out characters so far other than the family. Seems you just don't like her and it's coloring your opinion. I wouldn't call it overdone, it's not something I've seen often, if at all in other games.

New accounts that go straight to criticizing games often are trolls, you would have gotten the same reaction anywhere.
Though if you think mods give a shit about what I want, I'll believe you're new here.

Seems like this just isn't the game for you. What you see as flaws, I see as qualities. And in the end, I'm the target audience.

 

[Ramagar]

MoonBox you put a lot of thought into your game, before you started writing/coding/rendering in. A lot seem to make it up as they go and then wonder why no one enjoys their work.

Personally, I like what you are doing and can not get enough. There is just enough tension between everyone to make it believable and enjoyable. We all know that sooner or later the MC will hook up with most of them.

So keep up the good work.

 

[AlxTR]

MoonBox , You can update your OP from v0.07 Turkish translate

 

[MoonBox]

MoonBox you put a lot of thought into your game, before you started writing/coding/rendering in. A lot seem to make it up as they go and then wonder why no one enjoys their work.

Personally, I like what you are doing and can not get enough. There is just enough tension between everyone to make it believable and enjoyable. We all know that sooner or later the MC will hook up with most of them.

So keep up the good work.

I actually did zero planning and improvise everything as I go.
But that's why I enjoy it.

Here are my character notes for Nana, wrote them during the demo and haven't touched them since

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Appreciate it, glad you're liking it.

 

[MoonBox]

MoonBox , You can update your OP from v0.07 Turkish translate

Thanks, added.

 

[Ramagar]

I actually did zero planning and improvise everything as I go.
But that's why I enjoy it.

Here are my character notes for Nana, wrote them during the demo and haven't touched them since

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Appreciate it, glad you're liking it.

Well I think you did a good job of fleshing out the characters. You should see what I do with characters I have in my novels. Sometimes I think I do to much, other times not enough.

 

[JJDrakken]

Don't let the banned troll bother you MoonBox

Folks might like or not like your game, doesn't matter. You create what you want to create. Your taking your own time, resources, sanity, effort to do this. Youll always get your trolls or folks who dislike what you make or whatever. You do this for you.

You'll gather those who enjoy your work and that's what matters. Sure maybe even then some may voice a opinion on something, but it's still your work to do.

We are happy you do what you do, you know all personal convo's we've had and my desire to RAW DOG, Mama Mabel to point she is blubbering. But I also know you'll do what you'll do, I'll still respect what you do.

EDIT: MORE CUDDLE TIME WITH MOLLY!!!

 

[MoonBox]

Time for a preview.

The long awaited test results

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Extra NSFW, open at your own risk

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No words needed

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[Zodiark69]

Good shit Moonbox.

 

[Ramagar]

We are happy you do what you do, you know all personal convo's we've had and my desire to RAW DOG, Mama Mabel to point she is blubbering. But I also know you'll do what you'll do, I'll still respect what you do.

EDIT: MORE CUDDLE TIME WITH MOLLY!!!

I want to see them all with big pregnant bellies and often. But then I am just a greedy bastard.

 

[Dylan741]

Time for a preview.

The long awaited test results

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Extra NSFW, open at your own risk

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No words needed

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Uuungh! Stop melting my heart every time... I can only take some amount of sweetness and cuteness at time, not that much!

 

[Deleted member 4301037]

I actually did zero planning and improvise everything as I go.
But that's why I enjoy it.

Here are my character notes for Nana, wrote them during the demo and haven't touched them since

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Appreciate it, glad you're liking it.

I mean seems pretty spot on what more do u need? Haha