VN Ren'Py Grandma's House [Part 4 v0.67] [Moonbox]

[Arpagaetlamme]

Why everyone want to change how Moonbox make his story ?
Realism is out of the picture since the beginning with how many love interest are present.

And search fonction always helps before making statement about the relationship.

Polly is part of the young harem along with Sophia, Mila and another one I haven't made.
There's going to be some solo routes. Fiona, Sandra, Betty etc. They will have some harem content but they won't be officially part of one.

There isn't really a full harem, it's mostly smaller harems.
Currently planned is the family harem, GILF harem, young harem and 2 MILF harems.

 

[OmegaLord]

No one is expecting absolute realism but it's a story that says one thing and does another, just does not work well. IF Thomas was just a playboy ass his actions would fit but he is suppose to be kind and caring yet has shown little and only to his Nana.
It's valid feedback and not exactly earth shattering changes to make it a more consistent story. I don't give feedback when I don't care about a project, I offer my view of possible issues I perceive with the story so far.

First not gonna bother reading the entire 374 page thread and honestly I'm new so trying to use the search to look for obscure things I don't even know exist is kinda hard and going through all of Moonbox's messages is not much better. (He is active and that is good but not gonna waste over an hour to see every single thing he has said here thus far.)
Next I'm going by what is in game thus far, MB can choose to change things up even if he said otherwise previously such as 10 months ago.

I do understand I caused some confusion with how I worded things with the categories. By Main Harem I mean the women Thomas is active with regularly. The side girls are ones that make sporadic appearances or are alluded to be, kinda filler while the Main ones are busy.

It's a good game just has it's issues like any game. I have not seen any one attack the game itself or Moonbox in the while I've been on this thread but do think people make valid points about issues with it.
If you don't care about actual story that is fine but others can and it seems Moonbox is focused on making a proper story driven game, just some errors and that is understandable and very easy to miss when your in the midst of it. No one is wanting a totally different game just want things to be as he has presented them in game just more tidy and true to what is said.

 

[Boobs Lover]

I did not had time before to play in game since 0.11 or 0.12. I could not decide who is my fav character (aside of Alison) but i choose already - Shizuka is best girl for me. Her shyness and clumsiness is so adorable i'm just able to say "aww so cute" when i see her.
Shizuka scaried of mc's P-P-P-Penis made my day
I think we're slowly heading to main dish, just need to wait two years and Nana will be fuckable character and then full harem will be fulfilled
Enjoyed last update and have no complains.
Keep it up!

 

[ramvivat]

Priya have interesting name.
in Russian there is a word pleasant(ПРИЯтный). where is the root priya(ПРИЯ). thanks for the new word.
most likely this name came from Sanskrit, which has a lot in common with the Russian language.

UPD:
the word paVEENA contains the word VEENA (Вина, VINA, guilt)
I wonder if the author chose Indian names with a secret intention or did he take them by chance?
pleasantness and guilt - as if they go hand in hand with each other like sisters - a transparent allusion to incest as a guilty pleasure.

thanks author. it is a pity that this moment is understandable only to those who know the Russian language (and, moreover, knows about the direct connection between Russian and Sanskrit) - it is incomprehensible to the English speakers because a direct connection is not visible.

I wonder if the author is Russian speaking?
if not, then I can congratulate you on the "Freudian slip"
it is possible that all people who speak different languages think in images in the same language. Otherwise, I cannot explain why a person who does not speak Russian and does not know about the connection between Russian and Sanskrit gave such a skillfully veiled hint that I thought he was a Russian speaker.

 

[ramvivat]

Pira

i think you mistype - it's Priya, right?

 

[ramvivat]

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what? no way! =)
Lucas* was made Pavina's cook-husband ahahahahah so he should be!!!

autor! take five! RESPECT!

*Lucas - manfu i first met in Dating My Daughter. usually plays antagonist roles.
and from DMD i name him as Lucas.

 

[Spatenklopper]

Side Girls:
... Aiko ...

 

[ramvivat]

I'm still interested in this aspect - what type of harem is in this VN?
Type 1 is when women all live apart but know about each other and who has their "husband" today
2 types - virtual, that is, the protagonist just has a lot of women scattered throughout the city and no one knows about each other (mass cheating)
3 types - women's dorm, as in "almost dead", with a dorm superintendent or a harem queen.

if the protagonist does not have that kind of money, that he says to himself that perhaps it is time to look for a job, because in 9 months he will become a father, then option 3 probably disappears. it remains either 1 or 2, moreover, I tend more towards option 2, which is more like a massive cheating.
But - another thing is that these are just my guesses.
I don’t ask for spoilers (although I’m not afraid of spoilers), it’s just that maybe I didn’t pay attention to some points, and if they point them out to me, it will be very good.

 

[stahalle]

I'm still interested in this aspect - what type of harem is in this VN?
Type 1 is when women all live apart but know about each other and who has their "husband" today
2 types - virtual, that is, the protagonist just has a lot of women scattered throughout the city and no one knows about each other (mass cheating)
3 types - women's dorm, as in "almost dead", with a dorm superintendent or a harem queen.

if the protagonist does not have that kind of money, that he says to himself that perhaps it is time to look for a job, because in 9 months he will become a father, then option 3 probably disappears. it remains either 1 or 2, moreover, I tend more towards option 2, which is more like a massive cheating.
But - another thing is that these are just my guesses.
I don’t ask for spoilers (although I’m not afraid of spoilers), it’s just that maybe I didn’t pay attention to some points, and if they point them out to me, it will be very good.

hmmm.... i would say a mix of option 1+3. some of them are going to be living with him and some don´t but all girls know that he is not exclusive with anyone. and for harem queen i don´t think there is going to be anything like that, but he already said that granny is always his number one.

 

[Arpagaetlamme]

If I remenber corectly, the family harem (7 LI) will be in 1 house, or eventually side houses.
I suppose there will be exception like Paveena and Priya, only Moonbox can answer exactly.

They will. This house isn't but they're going to move eventually.

Lol nah, not yet.
All the harem milfs will be living in the house and a few of the side milfs.



Appreciate the thought but I don't think it's possible.

It's stated in the game when 1 enter the LI, i.e. full comited and potential pregnancy, they will known of the existence of the others, case of Aaliyah and Jada for example
The side ladies, one time "shoot", don't need to known and no pregnancy for them.

MC doesn't cheat, once the relationships get serious enough, he'll talk to them about the situation.

No, you'll never have to choose between women or groups, you can hook up with everyone.
But one large harem creates too many alternate scenes since most women are optional, there's already about 25 women in this so that would create dozens of alternate scenes every time MC wants to get his dick wet.
So they are going to be split up into smaller harems.
There will be some cross-harem scenes though.

There's going to be some early pregnancy content with the ex-gf.
Most of the pregnancy stuff has been explained in the thread, just search for pregnant/pregnancy if you want more details.



Close but not quite.

1. It's mostly the sexual aspect of the relationship that will change based on choice. Like Shizuka will be MC's little cutie whether she's snuggled up against him or chained to a wall with a vibrator in each hole.

2. It's not one big harem, it's split up into smaller ones. Sometimes someone from harem A will join harem B for a scene (Ex: Svetlana joins the Daddy's Girls harem for a scene) but each main girl will be part of only 1 harem. The only exception so far is Nana who's part of the family harem and sort of part of the GILF harem.

3. Side girls are people like Aiko or Shawna, they won't be part of a harem, they just have a few scenes here and there.

The Queen is Nana, LI of the Family and Gilf Harem.

Lol, sorry to dissapoint but this is a harem game. That being said, the family will be a priorety and Nana will be a main focus, so she'll have plenty of scenes. But there won't be a solo ending for her, at least there isn't one currently planned.

 

[Uthuriel]

It's mostly the sexual aspect of the relationship that will change based on choice. Like Shizuka will be MC's little cutie whether she's snuggled up against him or chained to a wall with a vibrator in each hole.

Oh wow...

That's actually kinda sad to hear... Do we HAVE to do that? If we want to progress with her?
I'd actually rather make passionate love to her instead of sticking dildos up her holes.
I wish the BDSM content was for LIs like the cop or the martial arts trainer and not her.

 

[WICKEDp4th]

Oh wow...

That's actually kinda sad to hear... Do we HAVE to do that? If we want to progress with her?
I'd actually rather make passionate love to her instead of sticking dildos up her holes.
I wish the BDSM content was for LIs like the cop or the martial arts trainer and not her.

Pretty sure it's optional, "the snuggled up OR chained to a wall" isn't used coincidentally imo. Stop worrying to much about not done yet events, mate.

 

[Uthuriel]

Pretty sure it's optional, "the snuggled up OR chained to a wall" isn't used coincidentally imo. Stop worrying to much, mate.

I sincerely hope so. Seeing her chained up to a wall... well I have no problems with BDSM if it's light. But with HER, that just feels wrong to me, abusive even.

 

[Spatenklopper]

But with HER, that just feels wrong to me, abusive even.

Inhuman, cruel, satanic and so on..
Anyone even considering such a thing should be skinned alive!

 

[WICKEDp4th]

I sincerely hope so. Seeing her chained up to a wall... well I have no problems with BDSM if it's light. But with HER, that just feels wrong to me, abusive even.

I agree on that. She is a victim of trafficking, tbh every scene with her is kinda sweet and sad because of her past. There is some time needed to "heal" that bruises.

 

[Uthuriel]

Inhuman, cruel, satanic and so on..
Anyone even considering such a thing should be skinned alive!

I don't want to skin MoonBox... the game is amazing.
I just hopes he reconsiders.
I just don't think she's the right LI for that kind of content. BDSM in itself is nothing bad.

I agree on that. She is a victim of trafficking, tbh every scene with her is kinda sweet and sad because of her past. There is some time needed to "heal" that bruises.

Agreed. She needs a lot of love, tender care and closeness.

 

[ramvivat]

it's somehow not gentlemanly - to let out of your paws such a submissive whore like Lily. well, if only she was as fat as her sister Petunia - but no, she's very pretty.
author, correct this defect. put Lily in at least an additional permanent harem roster. I will miss her. =)

she so dutifully calls the MC Mr. Miller that I even wanted to give her a candy and give her a ticket to the carousel.

author, please, please PLEASE =)))
I will be very jealous if she calls another, for example, Mr. Smith - it will be like a knife in my heart.

 

[JJDrakken]

Jeebus H Pickles....this is turning into WVM thread(Mental state of it).

-grabs a hose- Go away...

 

[OmegaLord]

I think with Shizuka we have already seen what type of situation Shizuka is gonna be in with Thomas. She is gonna be his pet and she will be "rewarded" when she is good.
We have seen the groundwork for this laid with her demanding to call him "Master" as well as how she wanted head pats just like Molly then later on the belly rubs.
Let us not forget how she was with Liz as well.

I'm personally not opposed to this if this is the plan. But if it's a darker BDSM situation like Karen I can't see or want to see.
It is also being driven from Shizuka's point rather than Thomas' which makes a big difference to me, I just hope she stays more like the little sister type until the more intimate moments. I love how adorable she is learning all these new things and hope her submissive desires does not become her full time thing. Would not be opposed if it gets used as a means for Thomas to teach her to be more assertive himself.
Such as he pushes her to ask/demand things but given how she grew up it does not sit right with her so she can't play with "Master" and instead Thomas uses the dildo's to still make her feel good instead, trying to reinforce it's good for her to push things about herself.

It could be Moonbox is utilising how she has had no freedom till now to make her enjoy being the "pet" type with Thomas, It would be a sort of comfort to her as it feels familiar yet she is just pleasing her "Master" by doing things he encourages her to do.

But hell I maybe reading way to much into it as well.

 

[Erogenerator]

If someday this game is completed with the currently quality it will be the best vanilla harem game of this site

PROS
-The MC is not a pussy good boy or a creepy perv or an asshole (those three are the mcs in all ero games)
He is a Normal and charismatic guy

- Variety of characters all type of beautiful girls

- The inc*st is not forced like many games it is step by step and have logic cause the relationhips between cous*ns are the most common (in japan is legal) and the relationships with a*nts are the second most common
If the sist*r appears in the future the relationship will not be forced because the distance and time has broken the F*mily strings, the relationship with nana will be the most difficult but the author is aware of this and he goes slowly step by step, and little scenes building the relationship

- Very Good renders

- Beautiful Vanilla Story

- Constantly and regular big updates (1 year and the game had more content than some completed games)

CONS
None
(Animations are not needed because the sex scenes contains good renders and hot dialogues, id prefer the animations added after the game is completed only if the author want)

If you Have money Support the author, He deserves that and much more