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I've been thinking, it would be interesting if there were some people to join me and we acquired the redlover tier on Patreon to be able to enjoy the updates and support the creator, what do you think of the idea?
 

Tico7533on

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MoonBox :

Caught a couple of typos, or rather, the same typo, but in two different places. First in the scene with Kitty Cat and the bowls, and then at the end card ("You're reached the end of the update"). Both of those have an instance where it says 'You're', when it should be 'You've'. Because 'You're' means "You are" for short, and 'You've' means "You have" for short. Figured I'd let you know, and keep up the good work.

As for what I said last time, since I love Jamila, I didn't have too much of an issue with their first time together taking some time to go through. But, with that being said, I can see that for someone who maybe doesn't care for Jamila, that scene might have been a bit dragged out. And for me, as well as the MC, things would probably have been like that, due to the build-up of anticipation, and then its final release upon eachother, and in my opinion makes it more realistic, but I can also see how for some, it went on a bit long for their taste. Hope you're doing alright, and like I've already said, keep up the good work, bro. Best regards, from Tico.
 
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Zakalwe76

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MoonBox :

Caught a couple of typos, or rather, the same typo, but in two different places. First in the scene with Kitty Cat and the bowls, and then at the end card ("You're reached the end of the update"). Both of those have an instance where it says 'You're', when it should be 'You've'. Because 'You're' means "You are" for short, and 'You've' means "You have" for short. Figured I'd let you know, and keep up the good work.

As for what I said last time, since I love Jamila, I didn't have too much of an issue with their first time together taking some time to go through. But, with that being said, I can see that for someone who maybe doesn't care for Jamila, that scene might have been a bit dragged out. And for me, as well as the MC, things would probably have been like that, due to the build-up of anticipation, and then its final release upon eachother, and in my opinion makes it more realistic, but I can also see how for some, it went on a bit long for their taste. Hope you're doing alright, and like I've already said, keep up the good work, bro. Best regards, from Tico.
couldn't put it better about the situation with mc's 1st time with Jamila - the built up anticipation on both parts could only result in that sex marathon - they simply couldn't have enough of each other.
 
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