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- Apr 19, 2020
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Seems like a serviceable college game, decent renders and decent animations.
I will say i am beyond tired of the "I'll bet you're wondering how i got here" time skip device.
It's overused and trite, plus in a VN that ostensibly giving the player some agency you are saying to the player they have no choice but to end up in the scenario you show.
if you can't grab the player's attention without a salacious scene from two weeks in the future then you need to rework your story
I will say i am beyond tired of the "I'll bet you're wondering how i got here" time skip device.
It's overused and trite, plus in a VN that ostensibly giving the player some agency you are saying to the player they have no choice but to end up in the scenario you show.
if you can't grab the player's attention without a salacious scene from two weeks in the future then you need to rework your story
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I know I'm butting into a discussion here, but you can't say "having the same stereotype MC in every game would be boring" while defending the stereotypical hung pushover surrounded by thirsty women. That's most of the MCs we get for this type of game, at least as far as I've seen.
Personally, I think
would qualify as variety in the current AVN space. Unless you mean that that MC type is boring in and of itself, which I disagree with but it's a take I can respect.
I'm not saying writing an MC like the one in this VN is wrong in any way but it's hard to view it as anything other than overdone, especially when combined with the over-saturated college setting.
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Good start, kinda short, but very high quality.
The icon ui however I'm not a fan of, there's even space to have names next to the icons, I was looking for the load button and it was the film strip button, which was odd.
Brenda is WOW what a milf! Deborah is pretty Yummy too!
The opening future scene could be concerning I guess, but we'll see how that develops.
Looking forward to more.
The icon ui however I'm not a fan of, there's even space to have names next to the icons, I was looking for the load button and it was the film strip button, which was odd.
Brenda is WOW what a milf! Deborah is pretty Yummy too!
The opening future scene could be concerning I guess, but we'll see how that develops.
Looking forward to more.
- Oct 26, 2017
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My point is whole is variety.
Besides, this is all mute. People are going to write whatever they want, and that's the way it should be.
- Sep 3, 2017
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Not a bad start. You could benefit from a proofreader as there's some Engrish going on, unless you're setting it so the game is taking place in Eastern Europe somewhere. I've seen far, FAR worse though, so it's not a big deal.
Starting the game off with 100% music is a bad idea though. Lots of folks play with headphones, so I can see that causing some eardrum pain. And speaking of music, I recognized some BaDIK tunes.
Starting the game off with 100% music is a bad idea though. Lots of folks play with headphones, so I can see that causing some eardrum pain. And speaking of music, I recognized some BaDIK tunes.
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kinkbr :
Just a suggestion - unless you plan on leaving the name as is, you might at least want to update the title on the current pages. I don't think I'd necessarily go to the trouble of actually updating the game to correct the name alone, but a short note that you realized the problem and it will be corrected with your next update might stop every tenth post from commenting on the grammar issue.
Just a suggestion - unless you plan on leaving the name as is, you might at least want to update the title on the current pages. I don't think I'd necessarily go to the trouble of actually updating the game to correct the name alone, but a short note that you realized the problem and it will be corrected with your next update might stop every tenth post from commenting on the grammar issue.
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Users of this forum are so funny man they see good renders and it's already a masterpiece, then the game has an update with questionable content and they all say that the game is shit.....
- Jan 23, 2021
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From kinkbr Development thread.
It's pretty obvious. it's also called creative license, like 95% of the user names here.
- Jul 25, 2022
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Exactly, good renderings serve for an initial impact, then if the game doesn't have a good story, good gameplay becomes shit for many kkkUsers of this forum are so funny man they see good renders and it's already a masterpiece, then the game has an update with questionable content and they all say that the game is shit.....
- Feb 25, 2020
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That's why its good when the dev lists all future tags at the start.Users of this forum are so funny man they see good renders and it's already a masterpiece, then the game has an update with questionable content and they all say that the game is shit.....