This game has one glaring issue, being the length. Usually I don't care about how long it is, but I know WHY it's so short and that doesn't excuse it, in fact it makes it worse. Are you ready for the Criss Angel Mindfreak? EVERY SINGLE LINE OF DIALOG HAS A UNIQUE IMAGE RENDERED FOR IT. There is no reason for that. This isn't a movie, this is barely a game. The only choices in the game don't seem to matter, and were probably added to avoid the "Kinetic Novel" tag. All that being said it's not terrible, just reading it is kinda boring to be frank. I tried this out forever ago and to see this is how far it's come in a year is not that promising.
The story is centered around MC, he has a graduation party and him and his friends invite girls over with every intention of getting laid. But his NOTSister is invited and neither one of them inteds on backing out because... Reasons? Can I just say, I have no idea how this would have sounded if it wasn't MC's ACTUAL family. They talk out loud about taboo and stuff, seriously can we as a society move past incest as a fetish? Jeez... But I digress. MC and Lily, the sister, go to the party and they all play a game to see who ends up sleeping next to who and MC and Lily sleep together and have sex. The rest of the story is Lily being horny and wanting it more, MC doesn't want people to find out, and his other sister finding out but secretly wanting it because they are just rich rednecks. I can't say anymore because that's all there is.
The Characters are Lily, younger sister that didn't want to be a virgin going to college and now just wants sex. Rachel the responsible older sister that also just wants sex but represses it because she's just pent up. Tasha, the mom with no content and no personality, she just leaves to and from work. The last character is Maya a girl you tutor that just wants sex. A good portion of the content is about Maya but as soon as they almost hint at anything about Lily and Maya having conflict, it disappears.
The banner image is a complete misrepresentation about what is in this game or what will even be in this before the end of the year. If you noticed something in the last paragraph, all the female characters just want sex none of it matters with who. There's no relationship building it's all just superficial and boring. Sure, the renders look nice, it's not the default RenPy UI, and it seems to be written by someone that actually speaks english. But boring writing is boring. It's not necessarily BAD, but none of it is good.
My advice to the Dev, if he reads this far before getting mad at me for a bad rating, write out more of the damn story and reuse images. If two characters are talking, one or two images each is enough to put the illusion in our head that it's a back and forth. Especially if the scene in whichever room is only a short conversation. Or, if you're going to keep doing this one image per line, either use some of that patreon money for a render farm or more computers because this game is coming up on TWO YEARS with barely an hour long story and you even have a character that visits JUST TO RECAP WHAT LITTLE HAS HAPPENED. That is just plain filler. And I don't understand what these "Acts" are. If it's set for every label, we as the reader don't need to know that.
Bottom line, looks pretty, but it's short and boring.
The story is centered around MC, he has a graduation party and him and his friends invite girls over with every intention of getting laid. But his NOTSister is invited and neither one of them inteds on backing out because... Reasons? Can I just say, I have no idea how this would have sounded if it wasn't MC's ACTUAL family. They talk out loud about taboo and stuff, seriously can we as a society move past incest as a fetish? Jeez... But I digress. MC and Lily, the sister, go to the party and they all play a game to see who ends up sleeping next to who and MC and Lily sleep together and have sex. The rest of the story is Lily being horny and wanting it more, MC doesn't want people to find out, and his other sister finding out but secretly wanting it because they are just rich rednecks. I can't say anymore because that's all there is.
The Characters are Lily, younger sister that didn't want to be a virgin going to college and now just wants sex. Rachel the responsible older sister that also just wants sex but represses it because she's just pent up. Tasha, the mom with no content and no personality, she just leaves to and from work. The last character is Maya a girl you tutor that just wants sex. A good portion of the content is about Maya but as soon as they almost hint at anything about Lily and Maya having conflict, it disappears.
The banner image is a complete misrepresentation about what is in this game or what will even be in this before the end of the year. If you noticed something in the last paragraph, all the female characters just want sex none of it matters with who. There's no relationship building it's all just superficial and boring. Sure, the renders look nice, it's not the default RenPy UI, and it seems to be written by someone that actually speaks english. But boring writing is boring. It's not necessarily BAD, but none of it is good.
My advice to the Dev, if he reads this far before getting mad at me for a bad rating, write out more of the damn story and reuse images. If two characters are talking, one or two images each is enough to put the illusion in our head that it's a back and forth. Especially if the scene in whichever room is only a short conversation. Or, if you're going to keep doing this one image per line, either use some of that patreon money for a render farm or more computers because this game is coming up on TWO YEARS with barely an hour long story and you even have a character that visits JUST TO RECAP WHAT LITTLE HAS HAPPENED. That is just plain filler. And I don't understand what these "Acts" are. If it's set for every label, we as the reader don't need to know that.
Bottom line, looks pretty, but it's short and boring.