This is my #1 pet peeve with all these games, there's too much dialogue. Now don't get me wrong, this game is actually pretty good, the dialogue for the most part is interesting, and not too long. But of course there's the inconsistencies. If he wanted to change things, he should either change the part that doesn't make sense, but rather than waste time doing that, just take notes for the next game and end this one sooner than later. Not every game needs to be 100 hours long. Just make the game, finish it, and move on to the next. Most games I end up holding ctrl for 5 minutes because there's just THAT much dialogue.