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- May 29, 2018
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I'll apologise when you get my gender right.hehe, well hello there good sir, how are you this fine day?
now apologize for the shit you said, i'm waiting...
Always amusing when someone tries to act smug and gets it so very wrong.
So no, I won't apologise, i'm far too offended.
- Oct 22, 2017
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You can't have a harem (personally don't even care about that) and you can't have any other girl besides Emily at the end of the game. You can have sex with the other girls but in the end is Emily or nothing.So what you're saying is I can't have a harem?
- May 29, 2018
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I really liked Ashley until she revealed she's a prostitute which made me softly sob.
- May 14, 2018
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I really hope the ending without emily isnt a bad one, so the mc not getting with emily doesnt make everything go to shit and the characters can just go their own way
- Feb 21, 2019
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That was smooth. Thank you for the change of pace, that's refreshing.
And just for the record, private matters can be settled in private. Just so you know.
You are kidding, no? I mean it kind of make sense Samantha too old, Ashley is not the 'happy end girl' and any other introduction gonna be secundary, but this is a game (i think), some kind of 'scifi incredible shit' for us to get at least a end with other girl can happen. Or this is confirmed?
- Sep 28, 2018
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Dev said it.
Interested to see how that works out. Is it possible to not end with Emily (MC alone?) ? She is the closest one to "GF material" but im curious as to how that works out with Sam and Ashley. I dont think Sam would be interested, she is too old for MC. But I could totally see Ashley and MC be a couple, given some character development.
Now that u say it is confirmed, i get scared, after the end of episode 2, i can 'see' a lot of way how this game can have a 'bad end'. Only good thing though, the Dev have a clear line when this game is going so u can follow the ride with a worried face and happy smile.
- Apr 26, 2017
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Yes it is. Dev mentioned in one of the endings the protagonist finishes the game alone.
I was also hoping for Ashley since she was my favorite from the main trio. But let's see how the story progress on Emily front.
- Jul 5, 2017
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I am actually a bit turned off by Ashley AND Emily's behavior. Ashley because she manipulates and lies just to get reactions from her 'playthings'. Emily because of her tunnel-vision about 'how people should behave' and her extreme condemnation when you 'stray from the path'.
The cool thing is though that it is not behavior that is completely set in stone, since you can influence them a small bit with your own behavior. It will be interesting to see how far you can twist them, or, turn them around. This could get a quite dark, corruption continuation.....
The cool thing is though that it is not behavior that is completely set in stone, since you can influence them a small bit with your own behavior. It will be interesting to see how far you can twist them, or, turn them around. This could get a quite dark, corruption continuation.....
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I think that you misread them both.
Firstly she don't lie, secondly I'm pretty sure that she also don't manipulates people.
She's not a bad girl, just a tough one ;, she was made like that by her life. She started to sell her body when she was what, around 16 probably, and not just to some guy at school, she was part of a prostitution ring ; one with underage girls like her, so one ever more shady than the usual prostitution rings.
Then she was caught, and disowned by her family. You could have thought that they would be sorry for her, that they would have thought that they failed as parents and have to repair this, to apology for their lack of love and attention. But no, they disowned her, like if it was her fault if they were such shitty careless parents. And then she had to pass her time in jail. Girls aren't better than guys in this kind of places. Entering as an underage prostitute, if you don't fight back from the start, you quickly end being the assigned carpet eater for the whole block.
So, yes she's rough, it's her way to protect herself from the rough world she live in ; she fight fire with fire. But it doesn't mean that she's effectively a bitch. If you take care, she's rough but never mean, she always stop when she see that she goes too far.
If it wasn't the case, do you really think that she would have backed up during the diner, when she was so near to say that Samantha was a porn actress in her youth ? What Samantha could have done ? Her advice to stop before she really get in trouble was an empty treat. Talking about Samantha's past isn't a infraction to her probation, and Samantha's friend would not stop teaching to Ashley after all the time she invested in her. The only thing Samantha could have done is to force her to do her part of the chores, which would have just pissed off Ashley. A real bitch wouldn't have cared about that. Especially if she's a manipulative one that could have relied on Luis and the MC to take her place.
You have another obvious example in the scene at the hospital. Look at her face when Luis tell her that she gone to far. It's not the face of a bitch who don't care, but the face of someone who was scold and know she deserve it ; she even stutter when she try to justify herself. She's more awkward that Emily when it come to express her feelings. All her speech about the MC not being really hurt and acting like a baby , it's her way to express how much relieved she is to see that it's not as serious as she thought.
I mean, do you really think that even Luis can make her go all the way to the hospital without her full consent ? Obviously not. She came because she wanted to. She was worrying and wanted to see by herself how bad it was. And all her bitching when they came to find the MC asleep was her frustration speaking. She can't know shit about his condition if he's asleep, and she's not the one who'll take the risk to awake him, if he sleep he probably need it.
Yes she's the Queen B with Luis, but it's her way to show that she like him. She almost admitted it during the hospital scene, she act like that with Luis because he like it that way. She can't give him what he want because she don't like him this way, but she can still please him in another way. Therefore, that's what she do, because it's what she want.
As for the MC, she had a crush on him at first sight, but don't know the hell how to deal with it.
By example, she craved for sex when she waked up the MC in the episode 2. But what can have she done, except what she did ? She don't know how to ask for this ; people who goes to underage prostitutes don't care this much about feelings and foreplay, they don't ask, they order. Anyway she now rely on her tough personality to survive, she can't easily go out of her way, even for sex. So she acted as a pure domina... but I'm pretty sure that, when asked to keep her words and jerk you off, a domina don't put your whole dick straight in her mouth, then swallow.
Once again, it's absolutely not how I see her.
She live with a strong guilt. I'm sure that every single second of her live, she think that she betrayed her best friend by not understanding what she had to pass through, by not helping her before it was almost too late. Therefore, no, she don't want people to behave in what is the good way seen from her point of view. What she want is for them to not hurt the people she care for, this while knowing for sure that even words can hurt to death.
And yes, her condemnation is extreme, and it's fully understandable. They are as hard and extreme than the feelings she had when she heard that her best friend tried to kill herself. She fear less the possibility to be sent back in jail because she beat the shit out of someone, than the possibility to relive this feelings. So now she don't wait, she don't even care if the person are really hurts of not, she strike from the start to defend them.
That's also why she's worried when she arrive at the hospital. Samantha and the MC acting like if nothing happened... exactly like her best friend did, until the moment she tried to kill herself. Emily was worried that they are faking it like she did, worried about what it can imply. And once the MC explained that it wasn't that, then she let her anger speak, because once again she failed at protecting people she care for.
In the end, and seen from my point of view, they are far to be the flat characters you described.
How exactly can you corrupt Samantha, an former porn star who's already craving for you, and Ashley, a nymphomaniac former prostitute already craving to have sex with you ? The only one you can corrupt is Emily and, sorry, but as much as I want to bang her ass all night long, I want it to happen because it's what she really want ; unlike Luis, I don't mind banging my lil' sis, but still she's my lil' sis, and the game have to respect her.
All this said, Azrd your game is amazing and I really like your character writing, and in fact all your writing. I even fell in love with your use of {nw} and {p} to add dynamism into your scenes.
Keep going, your game is a pure gem like there's, alas, too few.
- Feb 17, 2018
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Fantastic character analysis. Most of this goes right in line with my thoughts on Ashley and Emily.