Ren'Py Hard Days [v0.4.0] [VNAdults]

[VNAdults]

To throw in a comment or three...

Excellent work on the MC. Really well done. You've got a couple of nice scenarios approached from atypical perspectives.

Three things, two minor, one potentially more problematic: 1) personally I really dislike seeing a woman smoking. I can get over it, though. 2) Forced scenes. Even though you have included some, what I would call cosmetic choices, you're bordering on a kinetic novel. It's your game and I would advise making it the way you want. But expect some resistance from players/readers if you continue down this path. 3) Translation and editing. Some of the words could have better choices. You're using the word bitch so often it's becoming meaningless. I think here in the US the words slut, or maybe skank, or whatever could be used at times instead. Not in a mean way, but lightheartedly between friends. I would recommend trying to find substitutions every so often.

Hello... Although in the game there are choices, the main story continues, it depends on what you choose it leads you to different dialogues, but it all comes back to the main story, I don't know exactly the label kinetic novel if it would be correct or not. I have in mind a little later in the game, to have two routes with two endings, although it is not definitive yet.

As for the English words, it is true, I am not familiar with the language to know how to fit different adjectives, I only know the most "usual" ones, although the intention is to get someone to review the English translation of the whole game, when it is a little more advanced.

Thanks for your comment!

Hello dear developer And friends
Should we expect a slowburn game like ms denvers? Or is MC an easy girl who quickly accepts emotional and sexual relationships?

I have not tried ms denvers, the pace of the game I think is normal, to be a porn game, I try to have enough sex content and have coherence, I like the games to be agile, and I like to focus the stories about sex, I do not like complicated plots or stories too complex, so I focus my games on sexual themes, no big dramas or parallel stories away from that.

The story is simple, the MC has desires, and the game focuses on those desires, how she lives them and how she feels. It starts off somewhat soft, to get to know the characters a bit, and everything gets darker and more sexual, it's relatively fast paced I think.

Greetings, and thanks for commenting.

 

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Hello... Although in the game there are choices, the main story continues, it depends on what you choose it leads you to different dialogues, but it all comes back to the main story, I don't know exactly the label kinetic novel if it would be correct or not. I have in mind a little later in the game, to have two routes with two endings, although it is not definitive yet.

As for the English words, it is true, I am not familiar with the language to know how to fit different adjectives, I only know the most "usual" ones, although the intention is to get someone to review the English translation of the whole game, when it is a little more advanced.

Thanks for your comment!






I have not tried ms denvers, the pace of the game I think is normal, to be a porn game, I try to have enough sex content and have coherence, I like the games to be agile, and I like to focus the stories about sex, I do not like complicated plots or stories too complex, so I focus my games on sexual themes, no big dramas or parallel stories away from that.

The story is simple, the MC has desires, and the game focuses on those desires, how she lives them and how she feels. It starts off somewhat soft, to get to know the characters a bit, and everything gets darker and more sexual, it's relatively fast paced I think.

Greetings, and thanks for commenting.

I didn't mean complicated stories, I also completely agree with simple stories and focus on relationships

What I meant by the question was whether the game is a slow burn or not, I mean that being a slow burn means that the mc should resist a lot and not be an easy girl who accepts sexual relations quickly. Your answer was that the speed of the game is average.
thank you

 

[Zongor]

Great game VNAdults!! Love the sexy smoking scenes..pls keep them coming bro! At last we may have another game other than Timestamps to look forward too.

 

[gabich69]

Amazing game VNAdults !! I like the story and the characters so far. When can we expect Chapter 3?
I'll keep an eye on this game and on this topic for sure!!
Good luck

 

[VNAdults]

Amazing game VNAdults !! I like the story and the characters so far. When can we expect Chapter 3?
I'll keep an eye on this game and on this topic for sure!!
Good luck

Hi, I can't tell you exactly when chapter 3 will be made public, but if all goes well, probably by October.

Greetings

 

[the green warrior]

Hi VNAdults !!!
is there ntr in the game?
if so, can we avoid it?
Are there in plans for new characters from loren's husband's family to appear?
or maybe a friend or friends of her husband?

 

[VNAdults]

Hi VNAdults !!!
is there ntr in the game?
if so, can we avoid it?
Are there in plans for new characters from loren's husband's family to appear?
or maybe a friend or friends of her husband?

Hi, yes, there is ntr, the main character has sex cheating on her partner. In the game you can choose some situations, but cheating is inevitable.

To tell the truth, I don't really know the definition of ntr yet XD.

There are still some characters to appear, inside and outside the husband's family.

 

[the green warrior]

Hi, yes, there is ntr, the main character has sex cheating on her partner. In the game you can choose some situations, but cheating is inevitable.

To tell the truth, I don't really know the definition of ntr yet XD.

There are still some characters to appear, inside and outside the husband's family.

In your answer ,you mention that cheating is inevitable.
The husband will also cheat on his wife and we will not have the option to avoid it?

Anyway, your work is excellent!
Keep going!
Your work is really worth supporting!

 

[VNAdults]

In your answer ,you mention that cheating is inevitable.
The husband will also cheat on his wife and we will not have the option to avoid it?

Anyway, your work is excellent!
Keep going!
Your work is really worth supporting!

In principle, there is already a choice where the husband has already had a little slip, in the main story, yes, there will be two scenes where the husband cheats on the mc, but it is not definitive yet, during the development I will change some things, I have the main story thought but open to changes, as there are things that do not go as you want and I have to go rectifying some things.

 

[imadumb]

Your other novel was amazing, i'll definetively come here again later to see how u new work is doing

 

[Zoltan Redbeard]

It's good to see that the Steam page of the game has already been set up:

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[VNAdults]

It's good to see that the Steam page of the game has already been set up:

You must be registered to see the links

Yes, the store page is approved, I'm waiting for Steam to approve the demo of the game, to start promoting it a little bit.

There will be a demo on Steam until the final release, which is still a few months away, long months XD

PS: Setting up the Steam page with demo and all, it's a titanic work, it's incredible the amount of things that have to be done to make everything work!

PS2: Soon there will be a new update

 

[diego go]

ansioso pela atualização

 

[Desastrousman]

I'll wait for more lesbian content

 

[Shilton]

Thx for share

 

[VNAdults]

New day at Hard Days:

- Day 3 complete!
- Normal and compressed version (Android version uses compressed renders)
- 455 new renders, in total almost 1,000 renders!
- 21 new animations only for day 3!
- Added music and sounds in all chapters!
- English translation corrected by "Bouli" in all chapters! (Thanks a lot for the help!)
- Some adjustments in the lust system (still in testing)
- Minor bugs fixed!

Many thanks to boulimanus for his help with the translation!

PS: The game will be published on Steam, if you add it to your wishlist, you do me a big favour! Thanks, I hope you like this new chapter!

 

[Desastrousman]

Is there a way for me to focus on the lesbian path?

 

[DanLong]

hmmm ... looks interesting! I am glad that the tits are not exaggerated

 

[Kadajko]

Another game in which the choices do absolutely nothing and the horny point system is useless. All the choices boil down to: 1) Do you want to see more sexual content? 2) Do you want to see less sexual content? Just make it a kinetic novel, this game being interactive makes it worse, not better.

 

[testaccount2312]

true.. The further into the scenario the less influence on decisions.