StrawberryCheese83
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- Jan 13, 2021
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Pros:
- Finally, some (half-assed) choices to rein in Loren (kinda sorta). Hey, it s the bare minimum for a VN....better than blue-balling us Players with zero agency. Dream big: "Bone 'em? Yes/No" checkboxes. Please! But the last two updates options? Better than a poke in the eye with a wet noodle!
- Fewer forced scenes by the update....fingers, toes, and plot armor crossed it stays this way.
- Story s heating up (pro tip: let Loren toss Levy and his bootlicker brigade behind bars at the end).
- Promising pivot: Loren s molding into a full-blown "cuckqueen" ....tables turning faster than her moral compass.
- Blessed relief: No cameo from her vomit-inducing father-in-law or his greasy gutbucket brother. Hallelujah!
- Dev mercy unlocked: Loren in actual clothes! She looks smokin', and miracle of miracles...tits fully contained. No wardrobe malfunctions this time.
Cons:
- Some "choices" are just "rock vs. hard place" specials...like the police station: Jerk off the Fatman or kinda play lawyer s "Fleshlight"? I d kill to dodge BOTH, thanks.
- Plot-wise, Loren s sliding toward prostitution faster than she does on her knees. Praying for zero forced Levy gangbangs with his sycophant squad. But hey, "usual scene? Yes/No" options? That d be chef s kiss amazing!

- Biggest buzzkill: Kirsten unavoidable... and her slimy hubby still pounding on Loren s door (or mobile) like a bad sequel. Gimme a choice to yeet BOTH! They re pests, and Loren s too dim to say "back off" without a flowchart.
- Loren s inner monologue: From unhinged to galaxy-brain deranged. She s terrified Thomas might "cheat" on her?! The town s reigning lie-and-fuck champion clutching her pearls? Peak hypocrisy....best running gag since "faithful wife" became a meme. Drooling over every swinging dick while "loving" hubby s fidelity? Gold!
- Thought the point system rework meant replay value? Fresh save, dashed hopes of skipping FIL or Leo-Kirsten shenanigans... Nope! Back to square one.
All in all, solid update with a bumper crop of choices! Great work--keep it coming. Thanks!

- Finally, some (half-assed) choices to rein in Loren (kinda sorta). Hey, it s the bare minimum for a VN....better than blue-balling us Players with zero agency. Dream big: "Bone 'em? Yes/No" checkboxes. Please! But the last two updates options? Better than a poke in the eye with a wet noodle!
- Fewer forced scenes by the update....fingers, toes, and plot armor crossed it stays this way.
- Story s heating up (pro tip: let Loren toss Levy and his bootlicker brigade behind bars at the end).
- Promising pivot: Loren s molding into a full-blown "cuckqueen" ....tables turning faster than her moral compass.
- Blessed relief: No cameo from her vomit-inducing father-in-law or his greasy gutbucket brother. Hallelujah!
- Dev mercy unlocked: Loren in actual clothes! She looks smokin', and miracle of miracles...tits fully contained. No wardrobe malfunctions this time.
Cons:
- Some "choices" are just "rock vs. hard place" specials...like the police station: Jerk off the Fatman or kinda play lawyer s "Fleshlight"? I d kill to dodge BOTH, thanks.
- Plot-wise, Loren s sliding toward prostitution faster than she does on her knees. Praying for zero forced Levy gangbangs with his sycophant squad. But hey, "usual scene? Yes/No" options? That d be chef s kiss amazing!
- Biggest buzzkill: Kirsten unavoidable... and her slimy hubby still pounding on Loren s door (or mobile) like a bad sequel. Gimme a choice to yeet BOTH! They re pests, and Loren s too dim to say "back off" without a flowchart.
- Loren s inner monologue: From unhinged to galaxy-brain deranged. She s terrified Thomas might "cheat" on her?! The town s reigning lie-and-fuck champion clutching her pearls? Peak hypocrisy....best running gag since "faithful wife" became a meme. Drooling over every swinging dick while "loving" hubby s fidelity? Gold!
- Thought the point system rework meant replay value? Fresh save, dashed hopes of skipping FIL or Leo-Kirsten shenanigans... Nope! Back to square one.
All in all, solid update with a bumper crop of choices! Great work--keep it coming. Thanks!