StrawberryCheese83

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Pros:

- Finally, some (half-assed) choices to rein in Loren (kinda sorta). Hey, it s the bare minimum for a VN....better than blue-balling us Players with zero agency. Dream big: "Bone 'em? Yes/No" checkboxes. Please! But the last two updates options? Better than a poke in the eye with a wet noodle! :p
- Fewer forced scenes by the update....fingers, toes, and plot armor crossed it stays this way. :unsure:
- Story s heating up (pro tip: let Loren toss Levy and his bootlicker brigade behind bars at the end).
- Promising pivot: Loren s molding into a full-blown "cuckqueen" ....tables turning faster than her moral compass.
- Blessed relief: No cameo from her vomit-inducing father-in-law or his greasy gutbucket brother. Hallelujah!
- Dev mercy unlocked: Loren in actual clothes! She looks smokin', and miracle of miracles...tits fully contained. No wardrobe malfunctions this time. ;)


Cons:

- Some "choices" are just "rock vs. hard place" specials...like the police station: Jerk off the Fatman or kinda play lawyer s "Fleshlight"? I d kill to dodge BOTH, thanks.
- Plot-wise, Loren s sliding toward prostitution faster than she does on her knees. Praying for zero forced Levy gangbangs with his sycophant squad. But hey, "usual scene? Yes/No" options? That d be chef s kiss amazing! (y):giggle:
- Biggest buzzkill: Kirsten unavoidable... and her slimy hubby still pounding on Loren s door (or mobile) like a bad sequel. Gimme a choice to yeet BOTH! They re pests, and Loren s too dim to say "back off" without a flowchart.
- Loren s inner monologue: From unhinged to galaxy-brain deranged. She s terrified Thomas might "cheat" on her?! The town s reigning lie-and-fuck champion clutching her pearls? Peak hypocrisy....best running gag since "faithful wife" became a meme. Drooling over every swinging dick while "loving" hubby s fidelity? Gold! :KEK:
- Thought the point system rework meant replay value? Fresh save, dashed hopes of skipping FIL or Leo-Kirsten shenanigans... Nope! Back to square one. :censored:


All in all, solid update with a bumper crop of choices! Great work--keep it coming. Thanks! :giggle:(y)
 

Warsteel

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Cheating but no NTR... so the wife's cheating left, right and center... but the husband is too dumb to go get himself a piece, huh?
 

JEER0X

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- Biggest buzzkill: Kirsten unavoidable... and her slimy hubby still pounding on Loren s door (or mobile) like a bad sequel. Gimme a choice to yeet BOTH! They re pests, and Loren s too dim to say "back off" without a flowchart.

yes god yes, that bitch needs to disappear or get her ass kicked, it's so annoying that she keeps over-riding Loren's decisions and Loren does nothing about it, I want a choice to put the bitch in her place.
What happened to Loren being dominant to Kirsten? i put the leash on her but she just runs the game
 

ChaikaMwee

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Cheating but no NTR... so the wife's cheating left, right and center... but the husband is too dumb to go get himself a piece, huh?
What's wrong with that? I am not fond of any husbands that get cheated on by a smoking hot wife. Because the hot wife is all we need. Husband can be a background character forever for all i care
:LUL: Its not like the game has turned him into a deuteragonist, there is no effort in his character, writing or presence. Dev loves MC, we love MC. There is only one spotlight and its shone on the MC since Day 1. Let's hope it stays that way for a while longer.
 
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