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Hungover00

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Oh wow, the 'back button' (or line) is way too thin on the phone. That's going to be really annoying quickly Dev.
 
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Currently, the watersport scene does kinda occur, whether you skip it or not. However, this will be addressed, and we'll need to create some additional renders.
Just in case you didn't know, or if you want the characters to bring it up later, pissing on Jellyfish stings as treatment is a myth .
 

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Who's up for adding a scene where MC punches the bartender in the face after this whole "fiasco"? The bartender references in the gloryhole will be completely removed, but it might be fun if, for instance, MC caught him spying on Millie at the beach and reacted on impulse!

Yes / No?

I hope this will reignite your interest in both Natalie and Sandra.

Filip,
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MC cucks the bartender. Bam
Can you ignore the lesbian?
 

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MC cucks the bartender. Bam
Can you ignore the lesbian?
As already he said a little above, there will be lesbians and you will have the option of not seeing them in action, but just not seeing them, not that they don't do their things. It also says that they will be curious about fucking a guy and that bis will become straight, but if what you are asking is if it is avoidable and not just omittable, it seems that the answer is no.
 

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Who's up for adding a scene where MC punches the bartender in the face after this whole "fiasco"? The bartender references in the gloryhole will be completely removed, but it might be fun if, for instance, MC caught him spying on Millie at the beach and reacted on impulse!

Yes / No?

I hope this will reignite your interest in both Natalie and Sandra.

Filip,
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Not sure how/why the bartender deserves to become a bad guy, or what is gained by MC getting violent at the wedding. Makes me think less of him as well. I think that sort of thing should be earned by the story, either by genre, or having proper character development and history to justify it. Especially since, in the proposed situation, the MC was also being a voyeur towards Sandra, so...
 

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Well, this was an interesting start, and the way it ended, dang, talk about embarrassment, but curious as to where this goes. Sounds like I will be finding out in a couple of months. Only thing that kinda worries me is the the "freeroam" they talk about. Hopefully it would be pretty straight forward, but anyways, thank you so very much for this game thus far.
 

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Without giving away too many details, some characters will identify as lesbians initially, and MC will come across some explicit content in pictures. However, the choice to view this content will be entirely optional. My plan involves some characters initially identifying as lesbians but later becoming curious about bisexuality. Additionally, some characters will be bisexual from the start but primarily lean towards heterosexuality. In Hardenville, no one will remain exclusively lesbian.
Thank you for clarifying this point.
Ok so skippable but the action comes anyway humm ..

I think that in the characters menu you should include their sexual orientations so that people who do not like lesbian stuff can avoid them in the future.( if we have the choice of each Li’s ).

Modifications for the scene "gloryhole" is welcome.
But don’t miss the kiss full of sperm between the 2 Li’s...
An option or Sandra says no would be good (likes "no it's too much") . Except that Sandra is a lesbian too..:rolleyes:

I’ll wait for 1.01 to make a definite opinion on the game.

In short, the more options there are, the more players you will bring to your game.
 

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better wait a while...there are some unsolved questions how this will turn out at the end...BI-LES-CUCK-FEM.-/MALE.-DOM-HET-INC-SHARE-and maybe the bad word at the end NTR?!oh oh and maybe SANDBOX(FREEROAM)?? so many questionmarks...yeah better wait,DEV.-good luck till then...
girls looks are beautiful he looks a lil. like a duche but is okeeey and what´s with those reddish dots on their faces? hmmm?freckles are cool freckled girls rock,yummie....however, daddy waits, better ,for a while more....bye
 

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I don't know if it's too late or not, but I feel like some of the characters looks should be changed. A lot of the girls kind of look to have same-ish facial structure that I can't immediately identify who's who. Also, Millie's freckles should be changed because it kind of looks like she got allergy reaction or something since some of her freckles are red.

Overall very promising start though. It's fairly well written so far and character interaction is enjoyable. I especially like how characters are not prude.

Who's up for adding a scene where MC punches the bartender in the face after this whole "fiasco"? The bartender references in the gloryhole will be completely removed, but it might be fun if, for instance, MC caught him spying on Millie at the beach and reacted on impulse!

Yes / No?
I'm going to say No on this just because it doesn't benefit MC's character at all. Unless the bartender is going to play larger role in the future as villain type character, I don't think he even needs to be referenced at all.
 

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Hello. Says that choices matter... Is that means that it is possible to play monogamy route? Incest and lesbian avoidable?
 

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Only gripe so far are those Freckles are a little heavy handed. Look more like a Pox than Freckles in some of the renders.
 
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Hey guys!

I appreciate your enthusiasm. I'm committed to making this VN game the best it can be. While the Prologue is quite linear and doesn't offer significant choices, it serves as an introduction to the characters in Hardenville.
Hi, I need advice about the relations please. Who is step* and who are the other families? It's a little confusing.
 
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Hi, I need advice about the relations please. Who is step* and who are the other families? It's a little confusing.
Hey,

The relationships are built around safeguarding step-relations; some are directly linked, and some are optional.

The relationships are established on Tom is MC's dad, Millie, Ariel, and Jasmine are MC's stepsisters, and Johanna is MC's stepmom. Hannah and Sandra are meant to be MC's "step-cousins". However, whether you choose the step-road or not, it won't make any noticeable difference in the script. Emma's household is not connected to the MC whatsoever.
 
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Right now, I've been getting some great suggestions for making improvements. I've come to realize that the "bartender" situation was a bit too close to NTR, which could make some folks uncomfortable with Natalie and Sandra. I never meant to distance those characters. Since it looks like many of you share these concerns, it's a good move to take a step back and make a few small adjustments.

These tweaks won't change my plans for the rest of the season. My goal is to ensure most players have a fantastic time with the game. However, I want to stress that I'll be sticking to my original storyline plans. I've got plenty of unique ideas up my sleeve to make this game stand out from other VNs.

Filip,

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Hi Dev, please do not change your vision of the game for a bunch of boys pretending to be men. It is always obvious when a dev caves to peer pressure and changes their game. It can kill the passion you have for your story, and that will be clear in the writing. Also, changing it will not suddenly make all the complainers turn into Patreon subscribers. Make the game you want to make and if that means some crybabies on a pirate site don't like it, well boohoo for them.
 
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