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If all mechanics/charcters can be set in stone then you can add scenes and that way of content indefinitely
Others Harem Heaven [v0.2.1a] [FallstarGames]
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I download from android links and says " this App it not installed" anyone know what is the problem
You know you can edit your post instead of doing five ?
I agree with you on the adding content but, but pregnancy is waaaay too early.
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yeah just that we already have many games with scenes and such but not much mechanical depth so this can actually do it maybe like size me up tried to do
or the rogue trainer and the reboot
I am SO SORRY. I'm guessing renpy defaults to right click -> save game. I'll change it in the next update.
Hmm... I uploaded a fix for this a couple of days ago. It was an issue with the robe specifically, you could get around it by doing undress -> show me your bra first. On the start screen look at the bottom right, it should say version 0.2.1a, not 0.2.1
Yeah I've reached a point where there are so many things to add it's tough to decide exactly what's next. Right now I'm going to focus on adding events and activities that support a "0 love" approach, which was one of the things I really loved about Rogue Like.
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I'm not sure how open you are to taking suggestions, but if I may be so bold I'd like to give a few;
The small pictures that appear overtop of the primary picture should be moved out of the way so that they don't overlap as it covers up part of the scene and it would be more desirable to view everything without it overlapping.
More variations of the small pictures should be added, such as to depict heat/love milestones, length of event, reactions to actions taken by the player and so on. I'd also recommend adding a secondary large picture, such as to have two of them side by side to fill in the width of the larger square that the pictures appear in. In fact if possible, having the windows take on more of a comic page appearance would likely be better than the current overlapping, it wouldn't strictly be a comic page, just having them side by side and with new pictures simply attached to the side of the primary picture(s) for the event.
More actions to take throughout each of the scenes, which can easily play into the points system (authority, heat, etc..) of the game, such as telling her to touch herself in various ways, more options for the hug event such as kissing, groping, spanking and etc..
I'm not so sure how you'd feel about this but possibly even slapping her could be an option, (not full palm across the whole face, just with the the fingers slapping her cheek) either one type of slap or with various levels of strength and other variations, I think this action should require an incredibly high level of authority, or possibly a new masochism points scale? It would tie into general spanking as well, perhaps even a new spanking event. When thinking of it some more, I suppose something besides favors, like "guilt' or something along those lines could be added which would be more effective to use on her for actions that she currently deems to be degrading, with those same events becoming normalized to her as she does it several times, which would than require the use of favors to help convince her. The "Caught!" event is an already established potential source for "guilt", I suppose having the MC deliver products from the cafe in the rain could be an alternative source of these "guilt" points.
Exhibitionism could also be added, I assume that would work best once the "follow me" option becomes available.
Beyond that, adding more methods to collect favors, such as working overtime at the cafe, spotting her at the gym and so on.
I know you intend to have a shopping system eventually, so buying adult toys and the like could be considered eventually. Also items from the cafe which could act as gifts for the other two characters you intend to add.
I would also recommend that you get a Discord, and attempt to establish a community there, it would be very beneficial and you honestly should've done this sooner, you've got a high enough level of competence and quality of work to become incredibly successful with this, you've simply got to keep at it.
Good points, well taken. I should rethink the way the small images are implemented.
-There is support for 2 large images side by side, I reserve that for threesomes where you will be doing things to 2 girls at once
-I agree about the actions, I planned to have an option to tell jill to touch herself after 'closer look' when she's watching you masturbate
-sadism/masochism actions are definitely coming, I plan to go pretty hard with this
-making some types of leverage more effective for certain actions is a GREAT idea
-delivery in the rain is a good suggestion, makes more sense than my previous idea (having to cover a shift on short notice)
-I need to implement the shop soon, I want players to use money to boost love through gifts and buy consumables that temporarily boost sensitivity, heat gain, etc.
-Discord is a good suggestion, initially I figured nobody would join and it would be kind of sad but now I think it would be appropriate
Thanks for your input!
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I'm glad to see that you're open to suggestions, from what I've read here and there you seem to have a great mindset in terms of development focus. Of course your first impression has been massively successful given that you have a near 100% rate of 5/5 reviews. You're on a phenomenal trajectory that most devs could only ever dream of, simply continue as you are and you'll do great.
For your point on large images, would "medium" sized images be used? For example, rather than having two large images, you could have one large and two medium ones, both of which would be placed over top of each other and be equal in size to a single large image.
There is also a possibility of adding some sort of effect to overlay images, such as hearts and words to describe sounds and such, it would be similar to what you'd see in old comics, such as Batman punching some goon and the word "POW!" written near his fist to emphasize the action. Different varieties of these (such as increasing number of hearts) could help to convey greater intensity to whatever message you're trying to emphasize. Of course implementing something like this would be difficult as it would heavily rely on its appearance to be good enough for it to work, though you seem more than capable from what I've seen.
When it comes to the point on sadism and masochism, could you describe what you mean by that? Also would you consider somehow allowing the player to alter animations. For example with a slider, which could be used for speed, but also for strength/force of action, such as how hard spanking is made to be. Though I assume that the difficulty of this and working with Ai produced content might make this too much to ask.
When it comes to the shop, I honestly think you could get away with delaying it for quite some time. You could add it once you get the next character added to the game, even have them work at the shop or store as a way of adding a location for them to be present at whichever time of day you want. Delaying it would be especially acceptable if more sexual methods of building points is added.
Simply adding a greater variety of actions and variations of current actions that players may take to gain points, for example, the hugging event currently allows you to continue the hug, and to grab Jill's butt. By adding the ability to grope, spank, kiss, hair pulling, slapping and so on to this event, and then adding different intensities and variations to these actions (including current actions). You'd be able to stretch out how much content you'd get from each event with this method. In fact I would suggest that you increase the relationship level hearts up to 10 if you do seriously go down this route of adding many more options and variations.
You already have a system for how certain actions are locked behind heart/relationship level but you should consider adding in that variations of new and current actions are to be locked behind love and other point requirements for first times, of course with adequate negotiation a player could get past that but the further away from the requirement he is the harder it should be. This way you'd have two levels of requirements, the first to unlock the "base action" and the second to unlock a variation of that action, in fact you could have multiple rounds of points requirements for multiple variations. Certain variations could be tied to her at the time sexual stimulus, like erect nipples and wetness.
When thinking about the hug event some more, I think that when the player attempts to end the hug, that Jill actually takes the initiative to pull the player back into the hug and she asks to continue it more, that could be a method of hinting to the player that he could try his luck with her. I suppose other events could have something similar happen as well, for example Jill could grope the player character's arm at t he gym and comment on his body.
Possibly adding a "in the moment" heat level to show current sexual stimulus for the woman involved in the scene. It would be more about how effective the actions of the player are for the event currently being played, and would play into the her cravings, in a way a player would be rewarded for "training" her. Enabling players to have an easier time to seek out content for specific body parts that they're interested in. Of course that would reduce patience loss to whatever degree.
In fact you should consider replacing the current heat points with attraction points instead, to show how sexually attracted she is to the player, this could then be something that actually requires some amount of upkeep, by making it degrade over time. It could also take vigor into account, as its really just the player character becoming more physically fit, which itself should have its points degrade. You could also have different types of actions increase attraction for each of the women at different rates as a way to show difference in character and values.
Perhaps not attraction, or perhaps not to be changed at all, but I think it would be more reasonable that the current heat points (and all points in general) at the least require some upkeep, as it is now you can ignore her for days and suffer no losses to any of the points.
You could also extend the day with one or two more time slots, perhaps add other locations beyond the items shop, such as a grocery store, park, beach and locations to bring women out on dates. Looking at the map there seems to be a convenience store (I assume that is meant to be the item shop in game) and a trail into the forest as well. You could also reuse the living room and have Jill watching a movie or even just have her cleaning around the house. You could also add in days of the week as well to further expand on the amount of options you have to work with, including more complicated schedules and the ability to plan for dates days in advance.
I'd also like to ask, what are your plans on options for changing Jill's clothes? I see that the "Not Implemented" line, states that it involves "hair/clothes/accessory".
Realistically the Discord is going to be incredibly empty, most people don't comment much and you'd be starting with a brand new server on top of that. It's going to take quite a while to get it active, but simply using it as a primary source of sharing information, and direct communication would help promote more activity. You should also take every opportunity to promote the server that you get. For example, for every update, post the changelog in a comment, write a sentence or two and then add in that people should join the Discord server. You should consider making banners so that fans of the game here can use them and advertise the game for free, the one you have for the post with the download links should immediately be promoted as an option.
I have to strike a balance between being really explicit and letting the player imagine what isn't being shown, so I'll have to consider this carefully. I do think that 'reaction' small images (like the one that's just Jill's shocked wide eyes) should fade after a few seconds, and wouldn't be too difficult to implement. Likewise I can use the 'plap!' 'squish!' onomatopoeia emitter that's already built to trigger overlay effects like floating hearts or temporary blush or sweat drop. I think that would be a great addition.
At the moment, I just know that I want escalating side-actions, so the player must decide for themselves how far they want to go instead of me telling them where they should stop. Jill might never appreciate having someone spit in her mouth, as an example, but I feel like the core fantasy of this game is being allowed to push those boundaries and see what you can get away with. As for analog actions like a 'spank force' slider, the overhead of something like that would be very high, I think I'd have to do what I did with the 'paizuri' scene and just have a set of discrete options like 'light' and 'hard'. As a player, that would probably be enough for me.
You're right, that approach (just adding more sexy actions) would be more in line with the expectations I've set up. I don't know if I could do 10 heart levels but there are 6 currently planned. If the progression feels like it's not granular enough I can add more, though.
There already is a 'first_time' difficulty bonus applied to many of the actions, but I should definitely make the actual dialog vary more to reflect that. As for Jill changing the end of the hug, I am realizing that I've implemented the 'stat checks' in a way that makes it so the beginning of the interaction can vary a lot but then ending is always the same. You're right, the ending should be subject to change based on certain conditions, especially if she is really horny.
You're right about the mid-scene reactions, I think I'll add something like the negotiation blurbs "It's not very effective..." for the scenes with repeating actions "Jill seems to like it a lot" etc. and change her patience loss accordingly. I have to keep heat the way it is for now, I think, but I'll look at it again once I get Jill's orgasms working.
These suggestions are great as well. I think having Jill occasionally be in a different room than expected would help with immersion, as long as it doesn't interfere with anything the player might need to do. I'm going to add a lot more locations, especially with the new characters (Like the university) and dates are definitely coming as well.
As for the wardrobe options, right now I'm just modeling them after Rogue Like, so you'd be able to alter her daily outfits by swapping out/adding/removing clothes, suggest a different hairstyle, tell her to change her pubic hair, and when she's totally corrupted I'd love to add BDSM gear or body piercings or more slutty makeup.
This is good advice. I've noticed that basically every developer besides me has a banner for their game.
I'm glad you have such detailed feedback, you're helping me see the game from an outside perspective so I can catch things I would otherwise miss. Sorry if I didn't address all your points, I did my best to cover everything.
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Right now I feel the grind was too much. every action give too little love points. only fix sink and choose not to get favor worth doing. also plz give us new way to get favor. I thought fix sink was 1 time event. it broke the next day after fixed. like wtf. just buy new damn sink if it broke that easily. new way to get favor could be help clean the house. massage before bed or helping at the café etc. maybe you need 3 favor points for 1 use to balance the game.
The game really great. usually I avoid Ai CG game but I saw this game MILF and well why not. the game need more content but I understand. the game was new. hope you success with the game. keep it up.
The game really great. usually I avoid Ai CG game but I saw this game MILF and well why not. the game need more content but I understand. the game was new. hope you success with the game. keep it up.
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I partially disagree with the idea that players should use their imagination, having something to see to be paired with the use of the imagination would naturally beat out just the use of the imagination. In fact it would be best to provide players with as much content as reasonably possible, perhaps even to go so far as to give them some level of control over what they see, such as a slider that allows them to slide a block of images left and right, or options to resize images, replace images and etc...
Either way it would be best to have as many images on screen as possible, for example, you could have the main images in the center of the screen, small ones along the top and medium ones (or more small) along the bottom. Think of it as having three different sized rows that cover up the near entirety of the central segment of the screen/UI. To enable this more effectively you should consider resizing things to get more space for images available. You could easily get away with reducing the size of the text box, especially as most lines take up at most 1/3 of the space, even reducing font size a bit would help. Reducing the size of the two side sections (the parts that track her outfit and points) would also help, I assume that the currently incredibly empty segment on the left, which tracks vigor is planned to depict the status of a second woman during scenes. But trimming things here and there would allow for great space to work with for scenes.
As for the use of multiple large images being limited to just threesome scenes, that seems like a purposely and, forgive me, a foolishly wasted opportunity. Simply put this is a game that is predominantly for heterosexual men, and men are stimulated most strongly by visuals, therefore providing a greater quantity of eye candy is the best course of action.
For example, when having Jill watch the player masturbate, you are given a currently unavailable choice to have her kneel down, it would seem reasonable to assume that you would be given a multitude of options for this. Such as to have her remove clothes, sticking out her tongue, blowjob and so on. More specifically to my example, you could also instruct her to masturbate. So naturally having at least one image that would depict a blowjob, or simply the player character stroking towards/onto Jill's face, with a second image depicting her kneeling body, of course to fully show off her curves and her own masturbation would be significantly more ideal than simply one image. You could also have an image of her backside, zoomed in (or not) on her butt showing how wet she is from an alternative angle to the kneeling pose I mentioned before. Of course considerations for details, such as blushing and wetness would further increase event quality.
Although with that being said, depending on the player's imagination being put to work, is still a good idea. Though allowing it to work to "animate" some in game scenes (alongside imagining entirely new content) in whole or in part on your behalf, would be better, you simply need to provide a greater variety of those scenes, especially key scenes that maximize the sexual appeal of the target woman, though of course actual animations remain preferable.
When it comes to the layout of images, my mind keep going to another game, called "Starmaker Story" and how they handle their scenes, which actually has some level of similarity with your game. Although what they do is to have the images appear, take up space, spread out as more appear and then once too many are on screen the oldest image is removed, and then images begin sliding to the left as more pop up and the eldest of the on screen images is removed for a new one to take up space. With that being said having a focus to maximize player choice and customizable options would be far more appreciated by the player base, and would be seen as a pillar of quality, you've already made a strong impression in terms of quality and such, so to further that even more would increase your odds of success significantly.
Honestly if I were you, I'd try to squeeze in as much variety of content as you can for the sake of applying as many genre tags to the game as possible, within reason of course. With each tag acting as a chance to draw in more players seeking out content for their specific kink, though all to varying degrees tied to the popularity of that genre/tag/kink, so of course you'd have to figure out the priority list with that in mind.
For example, the player character could urinate onto the woman, or he could instruct her to go to the showers at the gym and do sexual things with her there as a form of exhibitionism. Another example, would be to have her smell the MCs groin (scent tag), kiss his groin through his pants, and then his underwear, and then bare, with variations for whether or not the MC has an erection or for whether or not he just received a blowjob/had sex (same with her appearance too). Another example, content of degree of "sloppiness" for blowjobs, increasing amounts of spit/saliva, including for kissing, with small windows showing off her mouth with varying degrees of "dirtiness", then you'd have images of these scenes to promote the game and be used to draw in more players. Of course you emphasize that all content is optional, in fact just have "OPTIONAL" written over top images that depict more niche fetish content, that way people against certain types of content aren't pushed away. I agree that its best to disregard the idea of sliders, it would likely overcomplicate things unnecessarily. You should also update the preview images in the first post of the thread every so often.
As for the content you plan to have in the future, I'm not sure how exact you want variations of images (for example, with or without piercings/tattoos) to remain the same. I'm not sure of the limitations of the AI you're using, but it could be that you end up unable to recreate an image with a variable in a way that resembles the base "unaltered" image. This is to say that you might have to create all variations and such at once for a scene in order to maximize your odds of ensuring that all variations of images look similar enough to each other, assuming that you're aiming for having all versions of an image to be ~90% the same with the ~10% being just the player's choice to customize and other small details. Do you happen to edit the images manually in any way, and if not, do you plan to in the future?
I think you could very easily fit in 10 and likely more, there is such a wide variety of options that you can work with. For example, you could have the player character get no sexual actions with the women for the first relationship level, you could just have spying and MC's dreams as a form of getting sexual content in the game (for example Jill in the shower, at home and at the gym - or her masturbating in her room after the first "Caught!' event and enough heat points). Than you have the 2nd or 3rd relationship level be when the player is able to start to grope the women to varying degrees, one woman is more opposed to being groped on her breasts, the other more for her ass, you mentioned a religious girl who should be opposed to both. If the woman is more opposed to one part being groped, add that to the 3rd relationship level, if she is more accepting of that part, have that added to the 2nd level. Than allow the negotiation system to be used to allow players to try and get past inhibitions, and whatever other liberties you decide to add to that. Such as slapping, spitting, spanking, groping and so on.
You could also make use of "candid" content, such as viewing Jill's ass while she is walking on a treadmill, washing the dishes, cleaning in the house and etc...
I think it would be best that you have two options to get content from women, the first is to gain enough love and relationship level, the other is to negotiate, with negotiations coming off as more demanding and forceful. The distinction between the two should be more obvious via dialogue and such. Even facial expressions, whether or not she looks the MC in the eyes and other small details. This should reflect in how the women refer to you, for example though love Jill could call you "Baby" or some sort of other soft name, but through authority and domination she could call you "Master".
As an extra idea I just came up with, certain vigor milestones should increase the amount of semen that the MC releases when he orgasms, and there could even be items to buy that increase the amount even more and even further beyond realistic human limits, which I believe high vigor (200 seems like a reasonable maximum) should allow for a very large amount of semen to be released. This would play into the fact that Jill seems to have fertility issues, which I assume is what was hinted at during her pregnancy dream, and play into a breeding fetish as well of course, which is likely where things are going for Jill if I had to guess.
Another idea would be to have the reward scene for gaining a favor, such as fixing the sink to change depending on relationship level, for example, a better hug, kissing and beyond.
Yet another idea would be to have your vigor capable of outlasting her own endurance, so she gets too tired to continue an action, and as a result can get a "guilt" point that I mentioned before as an alternative to favors, it could also be used more effectively in the moment to negotiate for another sex scene in order to compensate the MC's blue balls.
What I meant by my point of first times was that the variations of some actions (for example but grab to groping) would have another level of requirement in order to enable groping. I heavily suggest that you add a request system, for example you could have Jill ask the MC to grab her but, and if he does than she could get more points out of it.
As for the point on mid-scene reactions, you should try to make it feel like Jill really does have a mind of her own and that she can even take initiative to start actions herself, rather than it being entirely the player's input. You could even have a system that allows the player to punish her if she tries to take over and initiate a scene.
I'm glad to see that dates are planned, there is a lot that can be added by simply having a well made dating system, and an attached award system as well.
I would suggest having her wear butt plugs, internal and external vibrators, piercings, tattoos and so on. Keep in mind on my point from before on the limitations of the AI in case it is relevant when it comes to pose/outfit/appearance variations of scenes.
The vibrators could be a method of stopping heat loss should you add in heat point degradation.
I'm glad that we seem to be on the same page for a lot of things, and especially happy to see that you've got such a productive, effective and open mindset on top of a high level of quality. And I don't mind that you didn't get to all my points, I write mountains and mountains of text like some sort of multi-armed animal haha. But you really should hold onto the idea of valuing outside perspective and be open to taking in other's ideas.
I HEAVILY AND EXTREMELY suggest that you go over all the advice you've received and write down well organized notes on all the points you pick out. Than make reference to those notes and think about different parts every time you work on the game, this way you'll amplify your odds of coming up with good ideas. Remember to always write down your ideas, if possible to collect reference images for those ideas, add to your notes every time something comes to mind, rather than removing parts of notes and ideas simply add it to another set of notes that you can return to in the future, every step you take in this regard is going to help you much more than you realize. So many good ideas are forgotten, so recording them as they come is something that you must actively do as consistently as you can. Simply being exposed to something from the notes might trigger an idea that creates something that ends up being quite popular.
You should even write down notes on things you've already taken into account and made changes for from the play base.
Also once you have a Discord server established, add a chatroom (or whatever its called on Discord) that allows players to make suggestions. I know there is a type of room you can make where users make make a post, and then that post gets its own individual comments rather than just a single page of comments that goes on forever. And be open to having discussions on the suggestions that players make, the back and forth and exchange of ideas can help you think of something new too. In fact you could also make your personal notes that you've taken and make them public on the Discord, and allow people to make comments on it as well, a whole other chatroom just for that seems reasonable. I suggest you make use of the chatroom type that allows for individual posts and for those to get comments, have your notes pinned and locked at the top for others to make reference too, and then allow them to create their own in order to make comments on it. In fact having the same style chatroom for bug reports is a good idea.
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My man, you give great advice, but maybe let the man cook a little more. Your comments can get a little too directive, "you should do this and that, oh and don't forget to write down my ideas and start a discord".
I don't mean to offend, and again you give solid advice but this is a 0.2 and you are talking about like 1.3 stuff.
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I suppose that I was being overly direct, I tend to get a bit mixed up with my wording once I really start to write out lots of paragraphs, though I hope that my part on taking notes and such absolves me at least in part of being overly dictatorial haha. My part about writing down ideas and notes from others was mostly so he could have a source to draw inspiration from, and of course gaining the benefits of group brainstorming rather than solely the ideas of one mind.
Either way I have complete confidence in this Dev, the trajectory for this game seems phenomenal compared to 99% of the usual stuff uploaded to this site. I mean this game could literally become a pillar of Ai porn games and proof that such games can actually be made to a high quality.
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Finally something well made while using AI.
Keep up the good work, looks really promising
Keep up the good work, looks really promising
It's okay, I understand it's all coming from a good place. After I release an update I always take a minute to think about if everything is moving in the right direction and this has been very helpful to me. For instance, you actually reminded me that when I was designing the game in the first place, negotiations were supposed to be an alternative to love/hearts and you were only meant to have to negotiate the first time you got permission instead of every time (and 'demand' was called 'force' and it was basically a rape option). Also, the point about adding more candid/spy/teasing/sleep content is well taken. I think build-up like that is really valuable not just for sexual tension but story and character development as well.
I keep a lot of notes centralized in a wiki-style program called obsidian, but the game is just very complex and it's easy to lose sight of smaller things and forget about them. I'm gonna take some time to process and decide what's actionable and what is out of scope, but I want you to know I appreciate being forced to sit down and think about these things via your suggestions.
That goes for anyone else who has constructive feedback. I want this to be a community-oriented project and I've always planned to add support for modded scenes and clothing layers and stuff so that everyone is able to get the experience they want, even if it wasn't a part of my original vision.
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I'm glad to see that you're taking everything very well and with an open mind, and even more so that you've already gotten well organized notes established. I'm even more glad that some of the things I and others said have been useful to you several times now, I like to think of it as great evidence that your stance on taking suggestions is the right course of action. I know I've already made plenty of recommendations but I'd like to add a few more things;
You can and should simply ask for ideas and other opinions whenever you get stuck on something, this is to say that rather than passively taking suggestions, that you actively seek them out in times of need. And in the event that the Discord gets enough members, you could even have polls.
You should play through the game while you're thinking about stuff that you can add to the game, the actual visuals of seeing the game itself on screen really does help you think of things better. This is actually how I came up with some of the ideas I've suggested previously.
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One of the reasons I like this game and am following the process, is the dialogue and teasing aspects of the game. Granted, it is still early with the 0.2.1 build, but I am a sucker for small tidbits and details and I think the dialogue has room to become very captivating with future updates. The facial reactions to the teasing and voyeurism, including the sly glaces and reactions of Jill are enjoyable and pull me in for the ride. Such as the illustration and description when we decide to select to imagine Jill staring back us during the jerking scene... Bedroom eyes with a subtle lower lip bite? Whoo boy.
I used to be a storywriter for a defunct comic studio years back and I can say one of the few aspects of building a character that I enjoyed creating the most was the dialogue. Especially building a seductive character, and in our case can be very titillating if done correctly. For example, if our Jill goes heavy in the teasing, like a whisper in the ear and finger tips crawling slowly on our MC's neck, arm, thigh, during a jerking scene, that teases the audience as much as the MC with a select choice of diction. I'd say letting the audience be blue balled, teased, just enough to be waiting for the word to release, can be especially powerful to hook the audience and leave us wanting for the next update.
In a landscape populated with games with AI-art readily accessible, my opinion on the matter is that the writing has to be well crafted, not perfect per se, but at least a cut above the rest. The pen is mightier than the sword that is AI.
You got this Fallstar, keep on rolling with the punches. If the 3 heart event is just as smutty at the 2 heart event with a steamy escalation, I bet you'll hook folks to their seats and make us crave the next update.
I'm already wondering what new additions of options will be available for the next update...
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