V16 feedback.
Note: none of this is stuff I expect to be fixed, changed or presented as the proper way, just my suggestions / feedback in the event you want it.
Caliber city:
-- I dig the new areas and I especially like seeing some of the minor characters earlier in the story. Giving the MC a bit more personality / history is nice even if it removes the "insert player as PC" (but since this has become far more VN since it's inception, not really much critique).
-- Navigation needs better wording. "Continue" tells you jack shit about what you're continuing and you use it not once, but twice. Yet for each area you move onto, you use "return to X" to go backwards. Maybe this is a nitpick, but I think "move to X" would flow better than just using "continue".
-- Police bot was amusing, but not sure if it fits the theme that an object of enforcement also works part time for tourist questions and amusing quips.
-- Making money seemed nice, I used no cheats this round to see what money issues I would run into and focused solely on what the city offered to offset my early income. However with my knowledge of the game, not sure if it mattered. I bought the initial required story items as prompted, bought the bar and as I was saving up for the 2nd floor was given story money, which I then unlocked everything else. Waited 2-3 (focused on maxing out all girl's exhibition) in-game weeks, bought all costumes / hotel upgrades / elf at once for every girl and still had money left over.
Hotel changes:
-- Being able to call the girls back to their room from the lounge. Kudos.
-- Love the night-time outfits. Would request when you have time and energy to add those as an available costume option when you sneak into their rooms. Bit dis-jointed when you visit, see them in one outfit and even their nude option doesn't match up. Nitpick though, since I know that requires re-rendering scenes with the changes.
Minor bug:
-- Sleep with had no menu options after the twins were high enough in affection to join the list. Not sure what the cause was, after a while it repopulated. My initial thought is it was tied to the event with Maria's brief absence but I'm honestly not sure. It didn't work, then a few days later it did. /shrug
That's all I've encountered so far, but I'm still working my way to catching up to v16 since this was a fresh run.