Runey
Maybe small errors, etc.
That's great! And...where is she? (This is said by MC but the receptionist talks to Ashley as if she said it.)
That's never been a problem, trust me. (When Maria is talking to Ms. Mana, this seems like a weird statement since the last 2 visits to her is it being a problem)
all I want is someones nut : someone's (Kali telling Lucia what to say)
the cat'ss out of the bag : cat's
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Still wish I knew what the benefit to the color/amount of stars on traits meant or if it mattered.
Small edit to Kate date scene, maybe have MC at the end tell Kate he can take the flowers and put them in the hotel since she doesn't want to keep them.
Will you ever include lock outs on things? Example 2B locks MC out of interacting with her for a while, but Lin 3some and Dungeon/camera, or other events make her come and act normal, I understand wanting players to have fun with their favorites, but it also breaks immersion.
As an aside, the secondary buttons in some rooms, hana/faeries/etc. Would be nice if the button didn't look the same as the leave button.