I do like the progress being made with this, the story developing with the elves, and some of the key characters involved. Honestly, after the revelation with or however you spell the second girl's name, it makes me wonder if we're not going to end up buying both. I could see that happening, and it'd be funny, and fun at the same time.
With Ashley, I'm getting an interesting "corruption" vibe off her, and can't help but wonder if her sister might involved in that as well.
There's a couple things I've noticed, though I can't place why this is, when it comes to certain characters:
1.) Ashley stands the potential to go full on Yandere... which could make any future plot interesting.
2.) For some reason, I get some curious Fetish type scene impressions from Kali, above and beyond what she does now. I mean I fully suspect at some point she's going to get caught smoking and bent over and spanked, or fucked, or both for it.
3.) The "Twins" or "Clones" depending on your point of view, seem to be heading down a direction where they're actively trying to 'steal' the main character from each other. Sure, they may agree to share, but it wouldn't at all surprise me if one, or the other, start trying to take all the MC's time. Sexual frustration from one or both being the result.
4.) I have a sneaking suspicion that Nia is going to end up another Lin like character, though she would never admit it. So a Tsundere?
There's other minor things involving various characters, but these are just the generalizations I feel.
As to suggestions, I would like the option of the girls being hairy as opposed to shaved or bald. Maybe the option to, if the girl cares for the MC enough, to dictate what their pubes look like. IE: natural, trimmed, bald. Maybe that's just me.
More interaction with Kali's sister would be nice. That's likely planned by the developer.
