What do you want me to say to this? Desert Elves look like common elves with tanner skin and bigger ears for the most part. This was explained in game. There's isn't much different biology than from a common elf.
I used that quote to point out my point, which now I will explain line by line.
My initial point was "This event wouldn't have been so irritating if it wasn't so one-sided"
Then I suggest how to add something to balance it out: By showing MC isn't completely ignorant because she does care about her elf and actually learns from her.
Then you said "But he get educated!"
Then is say "You can put a line in between this time period to make it work"
To this you quoted your script to show lines outside said time period.
To this I showed the script to show the line could've, indeed, been included.
You took this fair criticism in the worst way possible for reasons I will explain below:
Yes dude, I do agree with her. I don't want slaves lmfao.
I said "emotionally" because she was packing far more emotions than "I don't want slavery" and you know it.
And since you put so much of yourself in her character, you can't take criticism about how you portrayed her. Don't worry, it happens to plenty of writers.
What are you talking about? You left the main point entirely to just insult me haha. She's anti slavery. Why would she get close to Kali, who's dad helps slavery, and MC, who owns a slave, without knowing who they are as people first? She doesn't want to get close to a slaver, she knows you aren't as bad as the others now.
"You left the main point entirely" Did you seriously not get it? Your point is "She now knows you aren't bad people" and then she downright calls you "bad people" at the end of the event. Its literally her last line: "We don't accept landowners."
When I used that, you say "well of course, she doesn't trust enslavers" BUT THEN SHE INVITES KALI
Its circular reasoning, hence I am telling you "you can't follow your own logic"
Also, all this began when I asked you, in an absolutely polite way (check out this part of my comment again) what do you mean "She now knows you aren't bad people"
She thinks MC is... Even after getting "eDuCaTeD" LMAO
Thanks for the passive aggressive comment. It proves how not upset you are.
It was actually a slight mistake, but thanks for being an asshat about it. It proves how not upset you are.
Seriously, this proves how not upset you are.
I take back my comment, you did read the words, but you didn't pay attention to the story.
You are totally not salty, bro. Especially since its clear you can totally take back your own words when used to show you were wrong.