Runey
Typo in the first of Lin's new events, at the pizza place with Jia.
"Jia, I had no idea you liked humans! I was routing for that handsome alari up until he got stabbed..."
should be
"Jia, I had no idea you liked humans! I was
rooting for that handsome alari up until he got stabbed..."
And in the same event
"The food arrives only moments later. As you eat, the four of you make small talk, all while Jia continues to be act around Jack and he continues not to notice."
Not sure what, exactly, but 'to be act' should probably be something else.
Edit: And another in that event.
(She's just going to use me, like all the others... and for what? Some pointless revolution that I'd in end up dying in...)
should drop an 'in' near the end
(She's just going to use me, like all the others... and for what? Some pointless revolution that I'd end up dying in...)