Right, he knows the MC, but what I remember of the event (which isn't entirely accurate I'm sure) is that he accepted whatever pseudonym alias they were using and not whatever name he should have been given at the time the MC was introduced with the twins. So either the first meeting didn't give him the MC's name or he forgot it by the time he meets the MC the second time for Maria's event.
That's what I don't remember and felt like I had missed something. Considering he doesn't remember the hobbies his girls have, he could have easily forgotten the MC's name by this point. I simply don't recall.
When you met him in F&E's event you gave him your first name. When you talked to him in Maria's event you gave him a fake last name. Stuff like this is always on my mind. It allows for compatibility while also still telling a story.
Runey: another thing I find not right: I have all the elves in the Sanctuary and only after that (maybe 1 month later), I get the event (Kali 26 level) when Mr. Trenero got shot and I am asked by Mariella to use the extra $10,000 to build it and free some elves. That is a pointless discussion in the current game flow, but it would make a lot of sense if events are reordered and if I cannot build the Sanctuary until Mariella suggests it. Or, at least, to save the offside, I give a replica like I already done it and I will use the extra money to improve the elves wellbeing (or whatever).
Reordering would be unnecessary here, I could probably just change some dialogue around.
But it should still be written to make plenty of sense as it is. Things like this are constantly on my mind when writing story. Mariella wants you to help elves, so she gives you money. Even if you already have the sanctuary, that money can still be used to help elves. Or you could play it as your character saying "Fuck that, I'll do whatever I want with that money."
I don't want to come off as if I am pushing suggestions or bugs under the rug, but I'm pretty sure it all makes sense. I write these events in ways that can be interpreted in multiple ways depending on how you go through the story.
And some more issues:
- Android fells into the Hot Springs and gets into a comma that passes days later (because other forced events intervened in my case). However, first morning after (while in the comma) she performs her alarm duty as scheduled and her stats increase;
- I seem utterly concerned about her, however I am served some forced events totally unrelated to the apparently burning topic. This is unnatural;
- It is also weird for me to be able to sleep with someone while having an alarm set with another. I mean there are scenes when the girl I slept with wakes me up, or when I wake Kali up, that are immediately followed by a blowjob from another girl. It can be tolerated, but I'd rather believe it should be somehow exclusive (if I sleep with a girl, only her should do the alarm, any other should not appear)
I can only fix bugs when I am able to reproduce them. Please tell me how these bugs occurred so I can address them.
Your last issue isn't a bug at all. It is literally a feature. You decide who you sleep with, and you decide who is your alarm. If you want it to make more sense, make it make sense.
To add to the above:
- while Android is supposed to be in the comma, I also get the event when Kali tests on her the new android control app she developed;
- then the event with falling in the water repeats fully, this time with a proper storyline (I wake up concerned and go to check on her)
Thus I believe some kind of Visio chart (I am not good at games, but I can imagine this as a proxy tool) would be a must to keep the story consistent given the current size of it.
I can only fix bugs when I am able to reproduce them. Please help me out here. What level where they? How do I find these bugs?
The story should currently be consistent. If you notice any bugs, please report them. I need the proper information to find them.
