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What? But that's not generic, it's NTR. What you want is something outside the genre. Well-done cruelty is part of the genre, and that's what makes HC games stand out more than usual, in addition to their great production, all the ways in which the cuck is humiliated and dehumanized to the end. It makes no sense for Johnny to have any happiness or victory, he exists to be stomped on. What you want would exist if the game had multiple endings, but here it's a solid, closed NTR.I feel like it would be a waste of time to do that though right? Like I get it, it sounds good on paper but then what is the point of the grandma dropping good advice, of the girl actually caring about him and saying he is special, like why try so hard on a story to make it a generic fuck u to the mc at the end anyway? I'm not saying he shouldn't be cucked at all, I do think you can have a story where leading up to the end his mind is in the wrong place for a few chapters and she says she is giving up on him and the last day she will have sex with the winner, he loses it and is about to give up, but then he mans up and does something improbable to win her back. That would be him being special and a full circle to the story where the mc and mom can move on with their lives finally. If you want the gf to suck his dick, slowly become addicted to his cock, and say she loves it to motivate him, perfect use of NTR while pushing the story forward, but if he loses in the end like all the build up would be for nothing.
All I am saying is, I feel like there can be a great balance here.
I would even be ok if he doesn win her over but she secretly becomes addicted to his cock and fucks him behind the MC's back, that would at least be a bit better and I could see it going that way as well, I don't know. Rambling on I know, I just think this is a good story that surpasses most of the generic NTR slop that goes around and I would hate for this to just end in a generic way and not try something different.
You're thinking too simplistically. The idea of a good NTR is to show everything falling apart for the cuck, which is why he needs heroines who like him. This is called plot construction, so that in the end he loses everything and the reader feels more for the story since they followed the whole construction. Your idea is that everyone should be mean to him from the beginning, because it doesn't make sense for them to like him and then betray him in the end? lol.
Also, the new update will likely answer your questions about why Grandma and Lesley are nice to Johnny.
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