moonblackhen

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I love the new message backlog. Makes typo hunting much easier. And speaking of typos:
1) Typo1.png
"that depths" should be "the depths"

2) Typo2.png
The comma after the first "pain" is not needed.

3) Typo3.png
"passed" should be "past"

4) Typo4.png
In Lily's line "get" should be "got"

5) Typo5 two typos.png
- "it's influence" should be "its influence"
- "dissappeared" should be "disappeared"

6) Typo6.png
The period after "Then" should not be there. Either it should be a comma, or nothing at all

7) Typo7.png
"then" should be "than"

8) Typo8.png
"things" should be "thing's"

9) Typo9.png
I can't tell if this is a typo or some joke I don;t get, but... shword? What?

10) Typo10.png
"it's" should "its"

11) Typo11.png
"then" should be "than"

12) Typo12.png
"I''m" should be "I'm"

13) Typo13.png
In Tia's line "it's" should be "its"

14) Typo14.png
"badd" should be "bad"

And that's all the typos.

Any idea when Krystalia will be back in her little domain? I assume it will be after another point of no return?

Also, why did Carnalia ignore Joshua's home? That would have been the second place I would check, after the Cathedral.
 
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Any idea when Krystalia will be back in her little domain? I assume it will be after another point of no return?

Also, why did Carnalia ignore Joshua's home? That would have been the second place I would check, after the Cathedral.
Thank you, as always!

Krystal will be back in a chapter or two. MC has caused a bit of a problem, on a celestial level. As for the home, bit of a spoiler the home is just a front. He's never actually there. His mansion is elsewhere, and it'll be a later destination.
 
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