VN Ren'Py Healslut [v0.99b] [Davie Zwei]

[BBQLord]

Loving this so far. The choices, several characters, the foreshadowing of Kayden as a supreme bastard... Keep it up, dev!

 

[Goronthil]

This looks like something out of TFgames site. Which should change its name at some point to SissyTFgames, M2Ftfgames or something along those lines, since it's the only transformation you'll ever find on that site.

I admit, I don't get the purpose of the Male MC starting point when you can easily make the exact same game with a female MC from the beginning.

But TF already means TransFormation...

 

[AL.d]

But TF already means TransFormation...

Yes indeed, TF stands for transformation. I dont know why M2F, which is a very specific type of transformation among many others, has ended up hijacking the whole genre though. That was the point of my previous comment.

 

[Loqic]

Oooh! Interesting.. I just found out the dev also made 3 different HTML games before at

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that I actually played two of before and liked.
My hopes for good future updates just went up.

 

[Kiwo]

Actually good!

 

[thswherizat]

Cool concept, I agree that some of the sound effects are overused and get rather annoying to hear. Do any of the branch paths have any effects yet? Such as the read ToA or not seems to make no difference in the game other than a couple extra lines of dialogue.

 

[t727]

The Witch hunter and the guy from Riverun went to a ...

 

[Axcel McAver]

Not gonna lie. My favourite character for now is the little shit Wajit.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

I never knew how much I needed a game like this until I played it. Reminds me of one of those new world/game anime.

 

[Raerngaming]

The starting page with the name that should move down some or go down one size with the font it is readable but it is high up on the screen so that some of it is cut off, also the beta part should be moved up some or again try one size lower with the font it is readable but it is way down on the screen like the top part the bottom is cut off some if there is anything else past beta it does not show up on my screen at all. The music should be turned down some it is a bit loud. That is about it outside of where is says You that should be showing the MC's name.

 

[Faddie]

Powerful Order Online, the MMO this game is set in has the best acronym.

 

[dacris69]

Damn it ended when it became interesting; still very funny and that goblin is awesome.

 

[Dropdude]

A lot of people here complaining about the kink. Why play a game from a site you know creates content you dont care for? I like these TG themes, I dislike sissy games, so I only go for the games that interest me. If you think the kink is ridiculous or lousy why play games that contain it?

 

[vince638]

There has got to be a better way to do that theme.

Ruuen Rouga's Farfalla series comes to mind. Give it a read.

 

[fsap1]

Nice game, the goblin is pretty funny and that scavenger girl got me interested. The game ends very abruptly though and

 

[fitgirlbestgirl]

Oh wow, I thought the name sounded familiar. This guy made some of the best TF games over on TFGamesSite. They're mostly text based HTML games, but the writing is really hot. I especially liked

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.

Going to keep an eye on this one, the concept sounds fun.

 

[daviezwei]

i try it 2 times i dont like it

That sucks. Sorry to hear it.

So is this like Sword Art Online, where they're trapped inside the game?

Yes, sort of. I really liked Sword Art Online and I wish it would have gone in a different direction after the first season, but it just stopped being interesting for me after that. Kirito was so... stale.

Actually really liked it

Thank you!

So, is this a gender bender game?
I'd like to see the gender bender tag! This "transformation" one is too wide!

It is! Or rather, will be. I hope you can have patience while it gets there...

You need to tone down the annoying sound effects. But it seems promising otherwise.

Which ones were annoying? I'd be happy to make adjustments. This is my first time using Ren'Py so it's all new to me!

Very interesting. Not too fond of the "play a dude turned into/playing a whore" narrative frame, though, if my understanding of those tags is correct.

Yeah, doesn't sound like your kind of game. But the protagonist isn't forced to be a whore. Also, this is a sex-positive game, so if the protagonist chooses to to be a whore, it's honestly nobody else's business.

Let me guess. Superfake transformation where we actully possess a female body as a male who we most probably never even see (maybe once) and its just 99.9999% female protag who somtimes claims she suppose to be a guy? ..with zero transformation, no gender bending at all, just playing as a girl and due to supposedly being a hetero dude we suck cock the 2nd time after seeing an orc exposing himself instead of instantly?

Yep. Oh, wait... no.

That's some interesting project! I like it - for a demo version is very good - can't wait to see,when it will not be just a demo version and will start with the big updates! Great Work!

Thank you very much!

Not bad! I'm already a bit of a sucker for the isekai genre and the Proteus Effect was a fun interpretation of it until it went too heavy on the RPGM and puzzles instead of story.

We'll have to see where the dev takes it, but I like the humorous approach and characters. Ren'py is a massive plus of course. I hope it succeeds with a steady supply of meaningful updates in the future.

Thank you! I'm a real sucker for Isekai as well. The first season of KonoSuba is one of my absolute favorites.

Ayup ^^;

There has got to be a better way to do that theme. Maybe a shy and nerdy girl taking her slutty ingame persona to influence her real life, or a guy liking the ingame attention so much he wants to change in real life... I don't know, I'm out of good ideas today. x)

I'm definitely not opposed to creating an alternate start/path where the protagonist is a nerdy girl coming to turns with her slutty ingame persona and having it influence her real life, as it will the current protagonist. If you're interesting in gender-bending, stayed tuned. The IRL aspect of the story will embrace that theme.

Took a chance on this and I'm pleasantly surprised. Good, non-awkward writing. The 3D models seem commonplace but somehow they seem touched up and a bit nicer looking in this. And I'm kind of happy that the main character isn't some garbage douchebag and seems like a fairly ordinary MMOG player who's having a unique adventure. I even got a bit attached to the rest of the new party. Each character seems to have personality and I'm curious to see where the leader's abuse of one of his party members will take the story.

Thank you for your kind words. Kayden is a... complex guy. We'll see how that affects the story...

Oh a good beginning

I really like the renders, they are quite unique (a little cartoon) and this give some good fantasy-like vibes.

I'm really curious to see where this is going (this dungeon will be pretty fun ^^), And I like the Isekai plotline (it's rare in porn games).

The sound effects are good and the music are acurate with the situations, for now we only have one sex scene (or I missed one somewhere...) but it's really good man

Keep going it's a really good job here !

P.S. : and thanks with this raid party they're great : the team leader seems darker than he wants to show, a futa, a lesbian demon, a slave, for the wizard I don't know he seems confident in his ability (maybe too much ).

Thank you so much! I did indeed contemplate a lot on each of the party members and I'm very confident all of them will be interesting in one way or another!

Mmm, it's short so far, but the writing quality is decent enough - I only have minor quibbles with the plot so far, and the humorous style usually got a smile out of me. I do have to say that I think that the author tends to overuse bold and italics, however - it seems like every sentence has something either in one or the other, and it becomes distracting. And... Am I the only one who thinks the font choice might have been a mistake?

I also like what we've seen of the characters so far; even Wejit's managed to get himself off my "just let him die" list, contrary to my usual impulse. At this rate, I'm looking forward to future updates.

I appreciate the feedback and I entirely agree! I've seriously toned down the bold and italics for the next release. I'm also glad that you found Wejit somewhat endearing... I really worked to 'humanize' him despite his Goblin nature.

Interesting concept... Needs a meatier plot that just "You're a naked slut now > Start slutting about", which basically looks like the way it is going, unfortunately.

If it had interesting plot elements like corruption, transformation, different story lines depending on actions, it could be quite interesting.


I hope it doesn't end up being another cookie-cutter "You're a slut now, start sucking dicks" game... Example of what i would *like* to see would be a storyline somewhat similar to "The Last Demonhunter" ... Where you could unlock different playable stories based upon actions in game...

Like being captured and turned vampire, and you now unlock a mini-game with a bad end, where you capture and turn your teammates, etc...

Oof. I tried for the "you're a naked slut now > confusion > start slutting about" but I guess I missed the mark. But seriously, I don't intend for the story to devolve into a "slut now, start sucking dicks" game. I haven't played "The Last Demonhunter" but I will look it up.

 

[popober]

@daviezwei Wow. Way to be presumptuous. My issue isn't actually about being turned into whore or whatever, I don't care about that. I've played a ton of those games here.

My problem is that it's a guy, which messes up my projection. I feel no connection whatsoever playing a full girl, but I can't help but relate when it's originally a guy, making the experience awkward.

I wouldn't be here if I was any kind of prude.

 

[RedPillBlues]

@daviezwei If you plan on sticking around you can PM any staff and ask for the Game Developer badge. Also can relate

My problem is that it's a guy, which messes up my projection. I feel no connection whatsoever playing a full girl, but I can't help but relate when it's originally a guy

Usually in stories like these I tend to skip the story and just go for the lewds, shame because the story is pretty interesting. Don't let us influence you though, make the game you want, a game with passion behind it will always be better. However if you do consider an alternate beginning with a nerdy girl coming to terms with her sexuality, that gets a +1 from me.

 

[daviezwei]

If you weren't yet tired of constantly being shittalked in games like team fortress, overwatch and various MMOs for not healing the imbecile who runs away from the party to fight the rest of the enemies alone, then boy oh boy have we the perfect game for you!

So what is this game going to be about, exactly?
"show bobs or vagene or report!!!1!!!" or "lmfao fucking n00b can't even suck 3 dicks at once? lol" or something along the lines?

Yes. Show bobs and vagene or I will wipe the group.

Holy fuck, game was funny as hell.

Goblin best npc ever.

Thank you!

I for once enjoyed the game, rlly looking foward to this one, not into this str8 content but hell...it does looks cool so far.

Thanks! And just so you know, there's plenty of gay/lesbo action ahead.

This game is soooooo cool! But i can't say i like sex scenes very much. I hope they would be better I'm sure that this game is for everyone but i feel a lack of mmorpg's slang, you know

Edit: i wonder if there is a path of submission? with whom?

How can I improve the sex scenes?

Going for submission? Stick with Roopah and Kayden mainly. Also there will be various others you can submit to.

ISEKAI SAIKYOOOOO!!!!!!!!

いいえ?!

This would never happen. Simply put, even the absolute most support-minded class would have to have some solo capability, if only to get to the levels where you are permitted to group up.

It happened here. First!

I played this without submitting to any sex (for now), and actually enjoyed the story.

Thank you!

I like the idea of the game. It is fun to play and has potential. Hopefully there will be more.

Thanks!

It has the potential for some hilarious situations. Imagine having to blow the tank, or give him a reach around, while he's kiting a mob

That would be horrible! I hope to include something like that.

I remember his old games and was suprised by the quality of the writing. Glad to see he is back at it!

Thank you so much!

Transformation games are usually a miss with me since they usually beg the question: Why am i not controlling a female MC from the get go?

Concept could be about a shy or nerdy female MC finding their inner bimbo and would be way more believable then a otherwise straight dude who suddenly transforms and at first thing you notice, he's already sucking cock like his life depends on it.

Yeah, but that just takes out the M2F fetish entirely. I'm certainly not opposed to it, though. Also, is that what you feel happened with this story? Sudden cock sucking?

Eh, in Final Fantasy XI, white mages and bards had rather limited solo capabilities, unless you went well out of your way to prepare for it (it took me aaaages to polish my weapon skills, given that I literally never used them outside of hunting for crafting materials). There's probably some other extremely group-focused MMOs that have a similar philosophy as well, though I wouldn't be familiar with them.

Besides, the main character did have some solo capability they were unaware of - a powerful charm spell to gain a minion with.

I'm more confused by how being a beta tester apparently pays well enough to support the main character, but doesn't warrant the company pulling a couple of strings so that he can actually do his job... Though not confused to the point where it detracts from the story.

Those are good points! And yes, I glossed over the whole beta-tester being an actual job. But the protagonist lives in a shithole and thinks microwave noodles are great meals. It seems at least plausible...?

Love it!

Thank you!

more content plsss <3

Inbound soon!

Loving this so far. The choices, several characters, the foreshadowing of Kayden as a supreme bastard... Keep it up, dev!

Thank you! I will!

Oooh! Interesting.. I just found out the dev also made 3 different HTML games before at TFGames that I actually played two of before and liked.

My hopes for good future updates just went up.

Excellent! I'm so glad to hear it!

Actually good!

Thanks!

Cool concept, I agree that some of the sound effects are overused and get rather annoying to hear. Do any of the branch paths have any effects yet? Such as the read ToA or not seems to make no difference in the game other than a couple extra lines of dialogue.

Which sound effects are annoying? (Also there are some details on those choices on the tfgames.site thread)

Not gonna lie. My favourite character for now is the little shit Wajit.

That little shithead! I can't believe he's weaseled his way into your heart.

I never knew how much I needed a game like this until I played it. Reminds me of one of those new world/game anime.

Thank you! More to come!

Powerful Order Online, the MMO this game is set in has the best acronym.

POO. Play with it now.

Damn it ended when it became interesting; still very funny and that goblin is awesome.

Thanks! More coming soon.

Nice game, the goblin is pretty funny and that scavenger girl got me interested. The game ends very abruptly though and

Oh, I see what you did th

Oh wow I thought the name sounded familiar. This guy made some of the best TF games over on TFGamesSite. They're mostly text based HTML games, but the writing is really hot. I especially liked No Money Down Blues.

Going to keep an eye on this one, the concept sounds fun.

I do make the best games. Thank you for saying so! haha

Wow. Way to be presumptuous. My issue isn't actually about being turned into whore or whatever, I don't care about that. I've played a ton of those games here.

My problem is that it's a guy, which messes up my projection. I feel no connection whatsoever playing a full girl, but I can't help but relate when it's originally a guy, making the experience awkward.

I wouldn't be here if I was any kind of prude.

And so... doesn't sound like your kind of game? I'm sorry for being presumptuous, but I think I was pretty spot-on with that assertion. You don't care for a game where a guy is (virtually or no) turned into a girl.

And I'm not saying you're a prude, only that you seemed offended that a guy-turned-girl would go off sucking dicks than a girl-turned-whore would. If that's not the case, then I do sincerely apologize. I read your message wrong.

Usually in stories like these I tend to skip the story and just go for the lewds, shame because the story is pretty interesting. Don't let us influence you though, make the game you want, a game with passion behind it will always be better. However if you do consider an alternate beginning with a nerdy girl coming to terms with her sexuality, that gets a +1 from me.

Thanks. The alternate ending/path depends on the support I can garner. I'm working hand-to-mouth right now and creating these games because it's a passion of mine. If I had more time, I'd very gladly accommodate that route!