I'm glad you agree! Yeah I'm just a hobbyist here, and in my opinion the last thing a hobbyist needs is an unmanageable and overly ambitious first project. Having finished this simple first VN really gave me a good push and confidence for my next VN, and even that one has its own hiccups!Love the work done for this! I 100% agree with your approach! I think build smaller VNs with a set plot in mind and continue writing. You will only get better with time! I often think over ambition is the killer of a lot of a projects and with this approach you will be able to be proud of the work completed!
All the best!
Thanks for playing, I hope you enjoyed the story!