Person_With_Pencil
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You sir and/or madam are a gem! Thanks! I'll get right on that.
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Suprserpent
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Stephanie's lust for the MC is so perfectly animalistic. She's incredibly forward but so innocent at the same time. I always look forward to her scenes. Honestly, though, I thought by the way things went at the start of the game, she would become your sub. Either way, it's perfect.
In case you didnt notice, there's no audio in chapter 8 and Xeno said he bought an pack to add sfx/music into this
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It's actually quite difficult to judge your work. You'd have to play both versions next to each other at the same time to see the difference.
Crazy thought: If you release a test version with the original dialogue and the new dialogue above each other on different lines, then we could REALLY give easy/thorough feedback.
I, for one, am interested in seeing the rewrite, because texts along the line of 'I think the Father Davie is having drinks with his buddies' is just 100% terrible.
It's actually quite difficult to judge your work. You'd have to play both versions next to each other at the same time to see the difference.
Crazy thought: If you release a test version with the original dialogue and the new dialogue above each other on different lines, then we could REALLY give easy/thorough feedback.
I, for one, am interested in seeing the rewrite, because texts along the line of 'I think the Father Davie is having drinks with his buddies' is just 100% terrible.
Dear xenorav, if you release an update like 8.5. How nice would it be if you put the expected sex scene between Amelie and MC in this update and not make us wait for a year?
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Person_With_Pencil
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I've actually created a Thread in the Mods section for this Re-Write which includes some screenshots of the dialogue in question as examples, and ofc the script file for those interested in downloading and sampling it. (The thread is still currently awaiting approval by an Admin?)
It's quite difficult to really give the full picture of just how much of a change has been made overall, but I think the images at least convey the general idea. The MC is livelier and more humorous overall and each of the characters are still themselves I'd like to think, just dialled up a few more levels in terms of vocabulary and personality.
I think the original writing served well in some area's but just wasn't saying much in others and I saw the potential for some far more interesting and fun interactions than the original VN script was giving us.
Once the Mod Thread is approved and goes public I'll reference it here and link it for you and others to check out !
Thanks for the responding and giving feedback, it's honestly always appreciated! Oh! And as I come across strange dialogue like the example you made, it will definitely be squashed haha.
your not alone kylee and steph, am not fan of amilie personaly.
your not alone am fan of kylee and steph, am no fan of amilie and i think i got lil annoyed of the over hype of her in the tread.
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gentlemanclub
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I don't think Amelie is overhyped. A lot of the fans here tend to enjoy Amelie. Everyone have their own taste honestly.
I think what Xenorav should've done is branching and add equal amount of contents for the characters since there are a handful of main love interests. But I am guessing he most likely wouldn't since he didn't plan the game to be a choice based game. This fucks up a lot of things for the fan because now the fans of their own girls fight over who's contents should be implemented next.
Bombmaster
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true, Amelie path is a slow burn going into morally complicated territory. A good n@n-mommy vibe. People dig.
Alas Kylee is flavorless path, the first one to bed and that's it, tuned into a pseudo "tsundere" going hot and cold getting eclipsed by Stephanie eager crazy crush vibes.
Sure some people find her annoying but her role is more developed than her sister.
The feud between sisters is fun, and kylee serves this purpose I guess.
Her friend (Kylee) and boyfriend could turn into a more spicy route. But I don't think Xenorav is going that way. Sadly.
Alas Kylee is flavorless path, the first one to bed and that's it, tuned into a pseudo "tsundere" going hot and cold getting eclipsed by Stephanie eager crazy crush vibes.
Sure some people find her annoying but her role is more developed than her sister.
The feud between sisters is fun, and kylee serves this purpose I guess.
Her friend (Kylee) and boyfriend could turn into a more spicy route. But I don't think Xenorav is going that way. Sadly.
i wait for shower fuck ecene with amelie . doggystyle xeno
Badjourasmix
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Kylee is super hot but her path is meh, I am way more interested in stephanie and Amelie.
next update will be all for the brat stephanie, i can smell that coming . we will not even see amelie's ass 
Obranyi
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We will see her ass for sure, we won't fuck hernext update will be all for the brat stephanie, i can smell that coming . we will not even see amelie's ass
Acsuka
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next update will be all for the brat stephanie, i can smell that coming . we will not even see amelie's ass
When will be ready with sounds and others chapter 0.8?
Amelie is the essence of this game so far. Finish this game with an epic spreading of this essence!
Amelie is the essence of this game so far. Finish this game with an epic spreading of this essence!
Fate stay
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personally, it feels like he is gonna take couple of weeks for the final version if not a month. I dont understand, how can he contradict his own "patreon post" ?
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In between these 2 scenes. Comes the one with Kylee, then Lauren having sex and finally Stephanie. Near the beginning of the game.
been a while, i finally got around to downloading the update/mod(s) and have the exact same problems. the gallery being sized in a way that i cant get to a majority of the scenes is especially irksome. did you ever get an answer?