VN Ren'Py Heart Problems [v0.10] [Xenorav]

[Neeo.]

Nah, coding is the easiest part of creating a visual novel. I know because i've done it.
It's just that devs probably prefer to leave it for the last phase because by writing a script you can already relax and take a break from previous tasks. Those breaks can be the reason why players thinks that coding is the hardest thing.
The most difficult & time consuming work in my opinion is - Renders.
You really need experience, knowledge and talent here.

Creating high-quality renders is one of the most complex tasks, requiring a very powerful computer for 3D rendering, in addition to the animations.

 

[Thraximon]

This moment especially stood out to me when I played HP for the first time. The whole fucking (pun intended) conversation that takes place between them during this one static render, oof! That's the best case of dialogue-heavy static render I have ever seen in any AVN. In most of the AVNs I have played, this tactic comes off as lazy storytelling. But here, it totally takes the scene's energy to the next level.

It's moments like these that remind me how Xenorav is an absolute master when it comes to building and sustaining erotic tension. And I guess, that's why, he is unwilling to seek help from anyone for any part of this novel. He has a very specific vision for each and every aspect of this novel, which he doesn't think anyone could do justice to it, apart from him. And that too, either for free or a meager sum.

I certainly hope we get to see something similar in the coming chapter when Amelie and MC have their first time. And I might be in the minority here, but I'd definitely miss these moments of hesitations, reluctance and interruptions (the game of blueballs, basically) between the MC and the women around him. These added so much depth, believability and tension to an otherwise simple and linear story.

 

[FREAKY ALEX]

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This moment especially stood out to me when I played HP for the first time. The whole fucking (pun intended) conversation that takes place between them during this one static render, oof! That's the best case of dialogue-heavy static render I have ever seen in any AVN. In most of the AVNs I have played, this tactic comes off as lazy storytelling. But here, it totally takes the scene's energy to the next level.

It's moments like these that remind me how Xenorav is an absolute master when it comes to building and sustaining erotic tension. And I guess, that's why, he is unwilling to seek help from anyone for any part of this novel. He has a very specific vision for each and every aspect of this novel, which he doesn't think anyone could do justice to it, apart from him. And that too, either for free or a meager sum.

I certainly hope we get to see something similar in the coming chapter when Amelie and MC have their first time. And I might be in the minority here, but I'd definitely miss these moments of hesitations, reluctance and interruptions (the game of blueballs, basically) between the MC and the women around him. These added so much depth, believability and tension to an otherwise simple and linear story.

I THINK CREATOR HAVE WATCHED GOOD AMOUNT OF MOVIES AND TV SHOW , YOU CAN FEEL THE ENVIOURMENT OF INCE FAMILY AND ITS PUSHES THE BOUNDERIES SLOWLY UNLIKE OTHER FAMILY WHERE CHARACTER DOING ALL THER FAMILY MEMEBER ALL AT ONCE WITHOUT THE PROPER CONVERSATION LIKE UNDER 1 HOUR MOST AVN DOES BECUASE MOST AVN ARE NOT GOOD WIRETERS AND DIRECTORS , AVN NEED GOOD DIRECTORS AND SCRIPT WRITERS TOO LIKE TV SHOWS AND MOVIES .

 

[Ranxerox]

I THINK CREATOR HAVE WATCHED GOOD AMOUNT OF MOVIES AND TV SHOW , YOU CAN FEEL THE ENVIOURMENT OF INCE FAMILY AND ITS PUSHES THE BOUNDERIES SLOWLY UNLIKE OTHER FAMILY WHERE CHARACTER DOING ALL THER FAMILY MEMEBER ALL AT ONCE WITHOUT THE PROPER CONVERSATION LIKE UNDER 1 HOUR MOST AVN DOES BECUASE MOST AVN ARE NOT GOOD WIRETERS AND DIRECTORS , AVN NEED GOOD DIRECTORS AND SCRIPT WRITERS TOO LIKE TV SHOWS AND MOVIES .

No need to shout..!

 

[fatoldnugly22]

The biggest thing is that as much as we players are eager or hungry to get updates as quickly as possible, xenorav is not as hungry. Since he is the developer of the game, he will not be as interested as we are.

I wouldn't even say that this is true either.

I look at a lot of these like people that go to book clubs: You can read a book in 1 day or less if you're a speed reader, but that doesn't mean the writer/author can make a book in that amount of time. It just isn't feasible to do. Take IT by Stephen King for example. When I read it it took me 1 month to read a book that it took him roughly 3 years to write it. Sure it may not have been his ENTIRE focus, but we shouldn't look at things like this as "GIVE ME MORE! I'M STARVING FOR MORE!" which is usually a good thing, but to turn and say that "he isn't as hungry"? That's just doing him a disservice. We can't demand to have more things done with our things we enjoy simply because we've worn the skin off on a hand or 2 too many times; we've got to be a bit more realistic when it comes to something like this.

Furthermore, from what I hear it's rendering that takes the longest. And if you're rendering things in at least 720 if no 1080p or even 4k? Then you may be able to get through it faster. But either way, I've never been one that has demanded some project I enjoy or help fund moves faster simply because I enjoy it or pay for it doesn't mean it goes at my pace. But then you have devs that absolutely seem to be milking the system and the people that are holding onto their own Sunk Cost Fallacies for whatever reason (Looking at you Lust & Passion and Braindrop)

Support what you wish, support whomever you wish, but when someone had their income from their passion project ripped away and they're trying to get back to it? Yeah...that's not exactly someone that I look at as "not into it". Ripping your life at the seams and coming back to still put it out means that we need to be a bit more supportive and less damning.

...just my half a cent

 

[Milfloves]

Last 4 yars MC rubbing Amelia, how he control?

 

[christopher1122]

Hey guys, what's the purpose of this arrow on the left side of the game? Clicking it doesn't do anything

you gotta drag it

 

[jaisingh]

Sam

MC is rubbing against Amelie but Amelie is not allowing MC to enter her penis. Amelie is still shy to talk freely and have sex with MC. I want Amelie to act like MC's girlfriend from the upcoming update.

Same here bro

 

[Milfloves]

MC is rubbing against Amelie but Amelie is not allowing MC to enter her penis. Amelie is still shy to talk freely and have sex with MC. I want Amelie to act like MC's girlfriend from the upcoming update.

MC her adopted son

 

[_Doux]

MC is rubbing against Amelie but Amelie is not allowing MC to enter her penis. Amelie is still shy to talk freely and have sex with MC. I want Amelie to act like MC's girlfriend from the upcoming update.

From what I got from that bathroom scene in Chapter 10, it feels like Amelie still thinks sleeping with the MC would be kinda disrespectful to his parents. She almost said something like that, but couldn’t bring herself to actually say it. I think that’s the last thing holding her back, she’s been over her marriage with Dave for a while now. Just my two cents though.

 

[_Doux]

I don't understand what you mean. I don't want to see this teasing anymore. I want Amelie to act like MC's girlfriend or wife. I want to see them have some naughty and nasty conversations.

Where are you from? But yeah, I get what you mean. Guess we’ll find out where it goes next update.

 

[NVXEroX]

To keep this thread alive

So, as we all know, Xenorav already mentioned that the main event with Amelie will take place in the next chapter, since there’s not much else happening for now.

So, what would you all like to see after the main event with Amelie?

For me, the first thing would be to remove Stephanie from the story—maybe send her abroad to study or something like that.
And honestly, kick Mia out too.

That would leave Amelie, Kelly, and the MC—a perfect setup for a fantastic threesome.
Maybe later on, we could even get another milf introduced… or perhaps the MC’s mother could make an appearance.

That’s what I’d love to see until this masterpiece reaches its full potential.

 

[Neeo.]

From what I got from that bathroom scene in Chapter 10, it feels like Amelie still thinks sleeping with the MC would be kinda disrespectful to his parents. She almost said something like that, but couldn’t bring herself to actually say it. I think that’s the last thing holding her back, she’s been over her marriage with Dave for a while now. Just my two cents though.

What this suggests is that Amelie is still confused about her feelings, including those towards MC. She promised to take care of him at all costs; she's like a second mother to him. With their new relationship, and still being neglected by her husband, the temptation to still feel desired becomes stronger. She almost says she likes it, but holds back because her personality is stronger; she's not like Lauren, who is more direct and eccentric.

 

[Sony676]

Personally, I’d really like to see Amelie consciously take that step in the next update and clearly express it — something like, “I want you to fuck me. I need you.” Please, not another “accident” where the MC slips in and she gives in just because it feels good. For me, it would have much more meaning and be far more erotic if she made that decision with a clear mind, simply because she desperately wants it.

What would follow is the longest and most intense sex scene in the game so far (with different positions, please), both eventually collapsing into sleep from exhaustion, and in the morning Amelie wakes the MC with a blowjob and immediately gets back on top once he wakes up. That’s the kind of scene I’d love to see.

 

[Neeo.]

The story will progress as xenorav wrote it. I just said what I like. I've been watching the teasing for so many years, so I'm hoping to see something new. I said what I like as part of that, and my second choice is for MC to have a threesome with Amelie and Lauren.

I don't know if it's just me, but I much prefer a threesome with two MILFs than anything else.

 

[Neeo.]

Personally, I’d really like to see Amelie consciously take that step in the next update and clearly express it — something like, “I want you to fuck me. I need you.” Please, not another “accident” where the MC slips in and she gives in just because it feels good. For me, it would have much more meaning and be far more erotic if she made that decision with a clear mind, simply because she desperately wants it.

What would follow is the longest and most intense sex scene in the game so far (with different positions, please), both eventually collapsing into sleep from exhaustion, and in the morning Amelie wakes the MC with a blowjob and immediately gets back on top once he wakes up. That’s the kind of scene I’d love to see.

I also wish it were more mutual; so far, the MC is the one driving the most. At least if she's aware of what she wants and not just trying to "compensate" the MC, it will be much more erotic and unique.

 

[Sony676]

I also wish it were more mutual; so far, the MC is the one driving the most. At least if she's aware of what she wants and not just trying to "compensate" the MC, it will be much more erotic and unique.

After such a long time and so many updates in which the MC has respected Amelie’s wishes and boundaries — while she’s simultaneously opened up to him more and more — it would be the absolutely logical development, one that makes perfect sense to us as fans. Having her do it just so she doesn’t lose or upset the MC, though, would really not sit well with me.

The MC is ultimately the reason Amelie has become increasingly open and passionate — because he makes her feel desired and loved. The moment Amelie fully realizes that the MC loves her devotedly and not just “idolizes” her because he finds her sexually attractive, that’s when she’ll agree to have sex — and want it herself. It’s already started to click for her in some ways; it just needs that final push, which will surely come in the next update.

 

[Neeo.]

After such a long time and so many updates in which the MC has respected Amelie’s wishes and boundaries — while she’s simultaneously opened up to him more and more — it would be the absolutely logical development, one that makes perfect sense to us as fans. Having her do it just so she doesn’t lose or upset the MC, though, would really not sit well with me.

The MC is ultimately the reason Amelie has become increasingly open and passionate — because he makes her feel desired and loved. The moment Amelie fully realizes that the MC loves her devotedly and not just “idolizes” her because he finds her sexually attractive, that’s when she’ll agree to have sex — and want it herself. It’s already started to click for her in some ways; it just needs that final push, which will surely come in the next update.

Even more so knowing that the MC really has a crush on her, she kind of thinks it's just physical attraction, but it's not.

 

[Sony676]

Even more so knowing that the MC really has a crush on her, she kind of thinks it's just physical attraction, but it's not.

The classic double-edged sword — she wants 110% certainty, but that simply doesn’t exist in love. Her relationship with Davie crashed and burned, she took on the MC almost as a replacement for that family role, and yet, in a very short time, genuine feelings emerged — ones she tried hard to resist. For a woman her age, who’s already built a family with two children, that’s a huge shift.

I’m really curious to see how exactly Xeno will handle this final hurdle between her and the MC, because update after update, Amelie has stubbornly held on to the idea that everything’s fine except for vaginal penetration. The MC could, of course, prepare something deeply romantic for her that exceeds all her expectations (maybe even something symbolic, like a ring?), but we’ll see.

In the end, I only have two wishes: Amelie has to want it herself, and I hope there’s no cheap, half-baked portrayal that’s brushed off in a single sentence. That said, Xeno has never disappointed me in that regard so far.

 

[Sony676]

Uncle Davie will pour water on our wet dreams. He's already starting to suspect MC and Amelie . I don't know what kind of incident the idiot will cause.

Davie becomes a sex therapist for Amelie and the MC.