VN Ren'Py Heart Problems [v0.10] [Xenorav]

[redsus123]

mannn, this game is something else - models are fucking amazing - one of the very very few games where I like every female character I have seen (played till Ch5)

my highlight of this is the kissing - so few games have animated kissing scenes and they are so well done

how often is this updated with a new chapter?

anyone know any other games with some hot kissing stuff?

 

[Obranyi]

mannn, this game is something else - models are fucking amazing - one of the very very few games where I like every female character I have seen (played till Ch5)

my highlight of this is the kissing - so few games have animated kissing scenes and they are so well done

how often is this updated with a new chapter?

anyone know any other games with some hot kissing stuff?

7-9 months. VERY fast

 

[jI11jaCksjAkk]

I can understand Kylee saying "omg" as "oh em gee" but "tho" is lazy. It's a nitpick, sure, but when your game relies on text it might be a good idea to type the whole thing out just for the sake of enjoyment. If it fits the character then 100% use it (as said, like Kylee) or when appropriate (such as the texting scenes) but in dialogue? Come on.

Not saying the game is ruined and I'm too posh for bad grammar - just pointing out that it's lazy and if the dev is putting time into beautiful renders they could at least tidy up their writing... especially when they have 4,820 Patrons supporting them. The excuse that it's a porn game is really keeping it down. Porn games can have stellar writing. Shit, I love how Amelie is written here. We all do, clearly. I'm just hoping later chapters have less typos and shortcut words.

But that's the thing - I don't think it is lazy. It's just the way dialogue is written in 2023. Since texting became the predominant communication method, writing has become abbreviated anywhere it can be. I still automatically put 2 spaces after a period before starting the next sentence because that's how writing was taught back in the day, but I also understand that hardly anyone does this anymore and I don't consider it lazy to use just a single space. Times change, language changes with it. C'est la vie.

 

[boobmanlord]

A visual novel with subpar grammar because texting became popular..? I'll stop here because it's clear we won't agree with one another. The good thing is that I'm on chapter 6 and I've spotted less grammatical errors (or "choices") than before. I think chapter 4 was rushed because the writing mistakes were very noticeable there.

I'm also enjoying the progress of Amelie and MC to the point that I'm ruining my sleep schedule. This damn game... I want to experience more of Amelie's story. I'm really not looking forward to reaching the end and waiting for the next update like I said before. That chapter 8 is approaching quickly at my pace.

 

[mytaca]

A visual novel with subpar grammar because texting became popular..? I'll stop here because it's clear we won't agree with one another. The good thing is that I'm on chapter 6 and I've spotted less grammatical errors (or "choices") than before. I think chapter 4 was rushed because the writing mistakes were very noticeable there.

I'm also enjoying the progress of Amelie and MC to the point that I'm ruining my sleep schedule. This damn game... I want to experience more of Amelie's story. I'm really not looking forward to reaching the end and waiting for the next update like I said before. That chapter 8 is approaching quickly at my pace.

Dude, he's not even a native English speaker, my brother Xen is doing you a favor by translating this game so well, because it's not his, or anyone else's, obligation to be an expert in English grammar.

Furthermore, if there is any grammatical error in my answer, don't correct me, I don't have the slightest respect for this language

 

[boobmanlord]

I know he's ESL. Please don't assume I'm complaining about the writing as a whole. I caught the game late and experiencing things now, sharing what I'm going through. Chapter 4 was very rough compared to the previous ones. It's valid to point that out. Appreciate everything Xen is doing otherwise I wouldn't be putting off sleep to play for like the 4th night in a row. Anyway, I won't ruin the thread further about grammar.

 

[kdy18]

But that's the thing - I don't think it is lazy. It's just the way dialogue is written in 2023. Since texting became the predominant communication method, writing has become abbreviated anywhere it can be. I still automatically put 2 spaces after a period before starting the next sentence because that's how writing was taught back in the day, but I also understand that hardly anyone does this anymore and I don't consider it lazy to use just a single space. Times change, language changes with it. C'est la vie.

This way we will master Morse code.

 

[Frostiiii]

Was practicing Daz work using my version of Amelie (as close as I can get). Thought I'd share! Hail to the queen!

 

[Obranyi]

Was practicing Daz work using my version of Amelie (as close as I can get). Thought I'd share! Hail to the queen!

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Very nice work Continue please to make new ones and share with community

 

[Fate stay]

Was practicing Daz work using my version of Amelie (as close as I can get). Thought I'd share! Hail to the queen!

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Amelie with hairy pussy

 

[kadgilek]

xenorav must return to his old work . when he was worjing there the update renders were faster

 

[sineraser]

This game is great, one of my favourites and Amelia is absolutely wonderful creation of digital art

 

[jI11jaCksjAkk]

I'll stop here because it's clear we won't agree with one another.

Fair enough - we definitely don't see I2I so I agree to disagree.

My final note is that you made multiple claims of bad "grammar" but only presented examples of word choice and/or alternative (modern) accepted spelling variations (below). So out of curiosity I googled "grammar" and thought the Wiki page on it was fairly interesting, and you might find it interesting as well. There are parts that support my POV (ha ha) and other parts that support yours. So suffice it to say that grammar is a complex topic.

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[Loumax]

Was practicing Daz work using my version of Amelie (as close as I can get). Thought I'd share! Hail to the queen!

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Hi! What content/assets did you use for the breast?

 

[Frostiiii]

Hi! What content/assets did you use for the breast?

Howdy! Her breasts are a Breastacular base, however I combine them with a handful of other assets, scripts, and shells (I can't remember them on the top of my head). If you're wondering about the morphing--that's a custom weight painting addon I built (not user-friendly).

Happy creating!

 

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Thank you for your continued support, really apreciate it!
I'll be posting some Halloween wallpapers tomorrow.

• Writing = 50%
• Code = 10%
• Images = 7%

This is her dad? I mean Dave?

 

[JackMiejov]

and hope ya don't mind some futa .

Call it a hunch, but I don't think many players or users browsing this thread are here for futa.

 

[anbxxx96]

is there any weekly report?

 

[Frostiiii]

Some ideas for the scenes. I would be glad to see something like this from you in the future.

1. Considering your Amelie's body, she would look perfect in a scene like this.

2. Yoga is also good, but such cycling is a combination of pleasant with useful.

3. Just as a variant of one of the successful poses.

Woah!! This is super detailed and cool! I like the 1st idea alot, and also like the idea of yoga as well! I think I'll take a stab at them soon! I'll use a male character this time, I've learned my lesson here!

A few suggestions.

Don't use horse cocks.
Your Amelie model is just awesome, so let the scenes with her be awesome as well and realistic sized.

The cock I used is actually very similar in size and shape to MC from game. But I'll try to find a good middle ground for realism.

Your Amelie's breasts and ass are beautiful, but when you create a touch to them in your art, they become like a deflated ball for European football. Do you have the opportunity to fix it? Make them more solid?
Because there is a feeling that Amelie is now deflates like some kind of rubber doll.

This is basically due to me still learning weight painting. However unless they have breast/butt implants, there is obviously a rather "ball-like" give for many breasts/butts on the anatomy spectrum. Again... just something I'm trying to find a middle ground of, as I prefer to simulate realistic bodies and not rubber dolls. Main game also has examples of this squeeze effect.

Also be careful with facial expressions. Sometimes art looks much better without them at all than with them)

Yaaaa... I'll admit 2nd expression isn't my best, again... working on it!

An important detail in such scenes is the rotation of the female character's head, which should not exceed 45 degrees.
Otherwise it will looks not good. Like some broken neck.

Don't think either render broke this rule. But if you've ever backed a car up before or turned around, you'll know a human can rotate their neck and torso in conjunction to look behind them...

Good luck. Be sure to share your masterpieces with us)

As long as everyone is cool with me sharing them, I'll keep making/sharing them as I practice!! Fanart is a great way to learn, and there is sadly no forum for it for this game.

 

[d0n1br@]

They say: "Where is the week report"?

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Relevant, as at any other time.