Restaurant and hotel.. - not bad, but at the same time it is a bit boring.
I think this idea is good for later scenes, but for the first time you need something that will be remembered for its unusual combination of conditions.
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Great! Now we've got the Romantic Route (which TLDR - kidding, I've read it all).Nah, this is porn, stop with all the soppy shit.
What would I like to see?
I want to see Amelie being neglected by the MC for a few hours and get jealous because of Mia.
The MC returns while everbody's at home and Amelie quietly confronts him alone. She asks "Did you have fun with your girlfriend?" in a subtly agitated way.
The MC kisses her while pinning her against the wall before leading her upstairs with everyone anaware.
The foreplay starts before they even reach the top of the stairs losing clothing as they shuffle across the landing towards the bathroom.
You can hear the muffled moans of Amelie while she bites on a bathroom towel trying her best to keep quiet. The MC goes hard at Amelie, who's using the sink as support watching the MC's reflection through the mirror.
Romance? Since when has the MC been romantic? Let's kick off the Amelie fuck fest with a bang not a whimper.
And we've also got the Corrupted Route (which IMO is not depraved enough tho.)
I think they make the rest 60% content of the novel for CH11. Let's fking go!!!