EridianX

Newbie
Jul 24, 2018
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Not bad so far, but i've noticed part way through chapter 3 i think? The grammar takes a major hit. Like tho instead of though. Se instead of see. A couple broken sentences, and saying he'll instead of she'll a few times. Nothing major that would make it unbearable, but it's really noticeable. And like i said i'm only around i think the end of chapter 3 maybe 4 so there is still a good bit to go.
 
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