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Steph is a ticking bomb and it has no off button...When it explodes it wipes everyone out and it's game over...
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I'm going to re-post my re-write of Chapter 1 here to try get more eyes on it (this threads so popular things get pushed down the pile constantly), not really sure if there is a better way to garner attention for my little project and get the much needed feedback on it but I guess for now I'll stick with this method.
The re-write focuses on fleshing out the dialogue more, adding in some humour and just generally cleaning up the dicey English overall.
I have also attempted to make re-naming Amelie "mom" more viable as an option so that it fits with the dialogue and narrative overall, for those who would prefer to have her referred to as such instead of "Aunt".
I'm also doing my best to make Stephanie's interactions a bit more wholesome and not quite as irritating at times, and although I feel like she'll always be that "annoying little sibling" archetype, I've added in some dialogue interactions that make her a bit more likeable I hope in some way? (even if its just based on pity/empathy or her general naivete)
Though Stephanie will of course always be a bit of an interference element in the narrative (I can't add in or change the images/renders used in the game unfortunately), I can only attempt to make her seem a bit more likeable in some way.
There is more humour sprinkled in the game throughout, I hope also a bit more meaningful drama elements in places with a little extra gravitas when needed.
Give it a try and let me know what you think, if enough people are interested to see it go further, I will modify the rest of the Chapters to fit in line with my changes to Chapter 1 and hopefully overall produce a much more well-rounded story with more engaging characters!
I've re-attached the game folder in a .zip format with the script.rpy in it for you guys to try out. Enjoy!
The re-write focuses on fleshing out the dialogue more, adding in some humour and just generally cleaning up the dicey English overall.
I have also attempted to make re-naming Amelie "mom" more viable as an option so that it fits with the dialogue and narrative overall, for those who would prefer to have her referred to as such instead of "Aunt".
I'm also doing my best to make Stephanie's interactions a bit more wholesome and not quite as irritating at times, and although I feel like she'll always be that "annoying little sibling" archetype, I've added in some dialogue interactions that make her a bit more likeable I hope in some way? (even if its just based on pity/empathy or her general naivete)
Though Stephanie will of course always be a bit of an interference element in the narrative (I can't add in or change the images/renders used in the game unfortunately), I can only attempt to make her seem a bit more likeable in some way.
There is more humour sprinkled in the game throughout, I hope also a bit more meaningful drama elements in places with a little extra gravitas when needed.
Give it a try and let me know what you think, if enough people are interested to see it go further, I will modify the rest of the Chapters to fit in line with my changes to Chapter 1 and hopefully overall produce a much more well-rounded story with more engaging characters!
I've re-attached the game folder in a .zip format with the script.rpy in it for you guys to try out. Enjoy!
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- Oct 2, 2023
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I have now re-modified Chapter 1 to make Amelie more viable as "Mom" and the girls as "sisters" if you so wish!
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any idea when final version might come?
Xeno said he would start working on ch9 from monday and its sunday today. but still no update ...
Xeno said he would start working on ch9 from monday and its sunday today. but still no update ...
I like her just fine. But the other 2 are evolving with time while she has remained pretty constant, which most people get bored with eventually. She is the one the MC has the longest-standing emotional connection with, so while the MC is working hard on Amelie conquest and enjoying being a little submissive to Stephanie right now, I expect him to end up with Kylie in the end.
Child-beaters: "Oh stop crying, I didn't hit you that hard."
Genocidal psychopaths: "Stop complaining, I didn't kill all of you."
Cowardly anonymous children on internet forums: "Don't be so sensitive."
It's really quite amazing how some people are never wrong and the fault always lies with everyone else. ("I'm not the outlier, YOU'RE the outlier!"
)
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You are kidding... ...right?
This update came out, what, two weeks ago or less? Probably the biggest and most heavily animated individual update I've ever seen for any game in all the time I've been playing them. I think it's a bit unrealistic to think there will be an update any time soon. Unless the dev has suddenly hired the "super team", that won't be happening.
She's fast turning into a little sex pistol. She could ending being the hottest little gun in the arsenal
bro, read my post again, I asked for final version not another update. In case you dont know it's a test version and according to xeno's last post he will start working on next chapter from tomorrow.
Now do u expect him to put test version as the final ch8 forever? I dont know what u r talking about...
You're right, I misunderstood your ask. I stand corrected. Truth is, through my whole playthrough I didn't experience a single bug or flaw. Not sure what the difference will be between the test version and the final one. Guess we'll see.
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There will be sounds and moans in the final version afaik.
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I had "Heart problems" at this scene...
But after that I calmed down a bit...
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Is it just me or did MC's wang get a "buff" this chapter?
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I don't know bro, I was focusing on Amelie's body...
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D'OH!!I don't know bro, I was focusing on Amelie's body...
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I'm so glad Xenorav made her pussy so beautiful and not hairy like somebody wished to seeI don't know bro, I was focusing on Amelie's body...
Hairy pussy not my fetish like in past times women had, brrrrr. Like I said here earlier only one detail of her body I hate- disgusting areolas and nipples. In everything else Amelie is Goddess
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Missing a scene with Lauren, which is the last one when she has sex, the rest is fine.Hi guys,
I made a replay mod for this game:
Gallery Mod:
Update date : 04.10.23
Game version : Heart problems CH8
PS : First time you play the gallery, input your name and the relations (click on the first thumbnail).
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I don't know why the MC is so hypocritical. He can do a whole lot of stuff with Kylee and Amelie (The person who's practically his second mother) but when it's Stephanie it's, "This is wrong!".
Just weird. Stephanie is basically him and he's Amelie in that situation.
Anyways, good game so far, putting this on the watchlist for sure!
Just weird. Stephanie is basically him and he's Amelie in that situation.
Anyways, good game so far, putting this on the watchlist for sure!