pettyparade

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Sep 28, 2024
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Kinda amazing how MC just suddenly looses all concept of consent as this goes on like it'd be one thing if that was an effect of what Stephanie had been doing in his sleep but it's not written that way. MC just starts ignoring multiple no's and literal pleas to stop lmao

Some great renders, animations and some wildly hot scenes, but def hope this author can work with some proofreaders and editors in the future to tighten things up and try to round out the plot a bit better.
 

MrMax

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Sep 30, 2017
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Kinda amazing how MC just suddenly looses all concept of consent as this goes on like it'd be one thing if that was an effect of what Stephanie had been doing in his sleep but it's not written that way. MC just starts ignoring multiple no's and literal pleas to stop lmao

Some great renders, animations and some wildly hot scenes, but def hope this author can work with some proofreaders and editors in the future to tighten things up and try to round out the plot a bit better.
Yeah that's one of the issues of this game:
1) Bad writing
2) Eternal blueballing
3) Dev is wanted by Mossad and has to go dark for months at a time
 

Pervy Sensei

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May 1, 2019
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I don't think the writing is that bad. I mean, editing is definitely required for spelling/grammar/style, but the substance of it is overall fine and accomplishes what it should. Each of the characters tends to act out in the way that makes sense for their character, and there's something somewhat believable about the way events play out. Even the way MC and Amelie are really pushing it and in danger of being too obvious and getting caught, makes sense given that they're clearly starting to lose self-control of themselves. It's not bad storytelling, for the kind of story it's trying to tell and the needs of the kink genre it is aiming to satisfy.
 

pogchampione

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Sep 13, 2023
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This prolly still has the best renders out of any of these DAZ 3D games I've seen. It's weird how in 3D nsfw space its really common to have skin indentation, ripple physics, etc but 1/1000 of these DAZ games have it, let alone alongside more stylized proportions and presentation like the blush effects here. Really solid, hopefully dev escapes from the Mossad agents and can update next year lol
 

radbaz31

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Feb 23, 2023
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Yeah that's one of the issues of this game:
1) Bad writing
2) Eternal blueballing
3) Dev is wanted by Mossad and has to go dark for months at a time
the writing is so good
the blueballing .if you want oh hi u have a big dick we have sex ..go watch porn
he is not slow considering he is making a one in life masterpiece ...ppl will complain about everything
 

Axeleen

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May 1, 2018
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Hi guys, i just started playing chapter 9 from my old chapter 8 saves, and the MC has a name of "None" now. I guess the dev changed the variable for the MC's name... Does any of you know how i can set that variable's value without starting back from the beginning ? Thanks a lot in advance

PS: I can't even activate the console via the shift+O in this game it seems :/
 

Axeleen

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May 1, 2018
348
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Hi guys, i just started playing chapter 9 from my old chapter 8 saves, and the MC has a name of "None" now. I guess the dev changed the variable for the MC's name... Does any of you know how i can set that variable's value without starting back from the beginning ? Thanks a lot in advance

PS: I can't even activate the console via the shift+O in this game it seems :/
Ok, nevermind I got it. Putting the process here for other people who might have the same issue:
  • Go to the game's root folder.
  • Navigate to the "renpy" folder, then the "common" folder.
  • Open the "00console.rpy" file in a text editor.
  • Find the line `config.console = False` and change it to `config.console = True`.
  • Save the file and relaunch the game

  • Open the game
  • Press `shift+O`
  • type `mc = '<your name>'
And that's it.

What a shitty codebase that cannot correctly persist game variables from a version to another...
 

MaxRichard

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Oct 7, 2023
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the writing is so good
the blueballing .if you want oh hi u have a big dick we have sex ..go watch porn
he is not slow considering he is making a one in life masterpiece ...ppl will complain about everything
The writing is fucking atrocious bro. Kicked out to an empty studio apartment as punishment? Weird, but ok. Maybe the dev has something great planned. Just kidding! Guess what, you come back home a day later! LMAO it's one of the worst written AVNs I've ever seen. "one in a life masterpiece" is just plain trolling

MC's seduction skills are just letting his dick slide out, groping, sleep molesting and dry humping

I'll still play it for the renders but the writing and plot are comically bad. It's disrespectful to other devs who actually write decent stories to call the writing here good
 

The Senior Perv

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May 4, 2022
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The writing is fucking atrocious bro. Kicked out to an empty studio apartment as punishment? Weird, but ok. Maybe the dev has something great planned. Just kidding! Guess what, you come back home a day later! LMAO it's one of the worst written AVNs I've ever seen. "one in a life masterpiece" is just plain trolling

MC's seduction skills are just letting his dick slide out, groping, sleep molesting and dry humping

I'll still play it for the renders but the writing and plot are comically bad. It's disrespectful to other devs who actually write decent stories to call the writing here good
I agree. Sure, I like the visuals and lewd scenes, which are amazing compared to other visual novels I have played, but the writing being good? a masterpiece? Nah, it's just your typical incest adult visual novel, except the love interests are the aunt and cousins instead of the "landlady", the older "roommate" and the younger "roommate".
 

kripthug

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Aug 16, 2024
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It's sad for subscribers who pay monthly and there are no weekly updates or monthly updates, especially those on patreon, and then suddenly the game is removed from patreon.
 
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