VN Ren'Py Hearts of the City [v0.2] [Dx Games]

[Overlord070]

Wanna see small penis? Just look in the mirror

Your pfp really adds to the comment.

 

[labbu]

Wanna see small penis? Just look in the mirror

i looked and its good

 

[Skylaroo]

Quite a disappointing start. I think the writing has far too much inner monologue.

 

[Cpt.SumTingWong]

Looks good, Can't wait for NTR to be added in later Ep.

 

[Mechanical_Borange]

Why do the preview images go up to filename number 442 while there are only 188 images in the game? Those images weren't in the game files. Are we being bamboozled?

 

[srip]

wow the mom model is so hot

 

[SupremYoda]

Hello,
There is no NTR content in this game.
Thanks.

 

[FiddleStyx]

Ill put this game on watch but the moment they start sucking someone else's dick im out.

 

[Aristos]

wow the mom model is so hot

Yes! She looks great for her 30 years of age.

 

[Ali ibn Hassan]

" step into the shoes of a young man living with his landlady and two roomates "

Thnks fr shrng

 

[J0K3RXXX]

It looks promising.
Thanks for the share.

 

[yoyomistro]

Goddamn, I know the dev sucks at English, but why'd they ask AI to make their creeper game have sigma zoomer right-speak? If you wanna make your MC conflicted about being a creeper, you can have that without the self-righteous monologues and dialectics. I like the creeper content, sucks that the cringe dialogue forces you to skip through most of the writing to get to the content.

Just write your script in your native language DX_Games , then run that through ChatGPT and ask it to translate it in as natural language as possible. No one is gonna wanna read through this foppish slop. Other than that, seems OK so far.

 

[DX_Games]

The question here is rather that it is not there now, but will it be added later?

No

 

[KingsAvalon]

Gotta give props where it’s due the character models and lighting setup are looking sharp.

 

[labbu]

just an suggestion don't like all the comments also only those comments that you may or will implement in the game

 

[loikl]

Two games without ending and both with ntr... yes, this game is sure to end very well.

 

[DevilGizmo]

Love it

 

[Woodstock_1983]

There are lots of grammar issues. Here's a few examples. What is Motherent? and why is personal perSonal?

 

[MiltonPowers]

There are lots of grammar issues. Here's a few examples. What is Motherent? and why is personal perSonal? View attachment 4909989 View attachment 4909990

They are to do with the relationship defining feature (I noticed them a few other times too).

It's looking for Mom/Son etc to change them, but finding them in the wrong places too.

It changed personal into perSonal.
And moment into Motherent.

 

[Adolfwanker]

was the dialogue written by AI? ive had multiple llm rp with very similar text style