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VN Ren'Py Hearts on Parole [v0.3.3] [Magnum]

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MagnumStories

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Next question MagnumStories : Are you wanting feedback on grammar/spelling/idiom usage/etc.?

Or do you have a translator/spell checker/someone who will come in later to clean all of that up?
I mean if I have typos and such yeah I appreciate being corrected. Sometimes though things are intentionally weird or look odd for character/story telling purposes. Though if you'd want to contribute on that front the discord server is the place for it
 
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Any chance that the foreign languages could get subtitles?
If the languages are apart of spoken dialogue, I've made the creative decision to leave them untranslated for a more immersive experience. But any internal or personal dialogue will have the translations.
 

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Hey so I'm just gonna throw these out here since the itch page is still down and I still see people complaining about the models. Every character has received improvements since the last update drop and will be implemented in the full rework which I have been working on. There will be tweaks and adjustments of course continually. But what you're seeing are pretty much the characters moving forward. If the girls or style aren't for you, fair enough, but I love them all. View attachment 5148095 View attachment 5148097 View attachment 5148098 View attachment 5148099 View attachment 5148100 View attachment 5148101 View attachment 5148103 View attachment 5148106 View attachment 5148107 View attachment 5148109 View attachment 5148111 View attachment 5148112
I like what I see so far, and I am interested in playing, how far away are you from releasing the full rework? Just curious if I should wait for that or just play the most recent update?

Thanks!

P.S., Please feel free to ignore that small penis obsessed idiot, dude literally spams every forum (no joke) asking devs to change their game just for him, because evidently he can't enjoy anything that doesn't cater to his fetish.
 
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I like what I see so far, and I am interested in playing, how far away are you from releasing the full rework? Just curious if I should wait for that or just play the most recent update?

Thanks!

P.S., Please feel free to ignore that small penis obsessed idiot, dude literally spams every forum (no joke) asking devs to change their game just for him, because evidently he can't enjoy anything that doesn't cater to his fetish.
It's gonna be a minute. Rendering takes the most amount of time for me. I work a full time job and do this on the side. While the rework will include some altered scenes and dialogue, the story is pretty the same. So I suggest playing now, grind through my godawful original renders (they get better as you continue) then give the rework a play once it's finished.
 
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Crimsonfiend76

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MagnumStories

Considering she has a positive response if you chose the top option, perhaps this attraction point deduction is a bug or mistake? I'm using the Universal Choice Descriptor mod and it's showing me this below, so in case this is a bug here's a friendly heads up.
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I noticed the same thing, didn't seem like that was intended... to subtract a point for making that comment, so I just used URM to add the point instead.
 

Crimsonfiend76

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Loved the update, I am curious how the harem will be developed... especially with some of the more complicated characters like Phebe and Regina for both professional and marital reasons. I also like the setup of where we might be heading with references to a sleeper agent being activated.

Can't wait to see more dev!

Also, I love all our parolees + Sierra, Jujen in particular... :love:
I assume Luli and Phebe and even Regina will be slow burned, but there should be a nice balance with some of the other LIs like Ryan and Rachel being fast-tracked into quickly developing relationships. (y)
 

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Loved the update, I am curious how the harem will be developed... especially with some of the more complicated characters like Phebe and Regina for both professional and marital reasons. I also like the setup of where we might be heading with references to a sleeper agent being activated.

Can't wait to see more dev!

Also, I love all our parolees + Sierra, Jujen in particular... :love:
I assume Luli and Phebe and even Regina will be slow burned, but there should be a nice balance with some of the other LIs like Ryan and Rachel being fast-tracked into quickly developing relationships. (y)
The Harem is gonna be interesting. I'm not even sure right now how it's all going to mesh, especially with every LI being optional. Im a very organic writer where a lot of things tend to happen as im writing as opposed to being extensively planned ahead of time. Rachel's big scene at the end of the update for example was not at all planned
 
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I considered early on, to write my own code to rename the MC, but I liked the original name so much, I decided against it.
 

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So, if you've been around the discord, you may've seen a girl I kept calling #11 and If you played up to v03, there was a pretty heavy hint another girl would be joining the cast. It hasn't been much of a secret. Hell I've been posting her around quite a bit. But, she deserves a proper introduction, wouldn't you say?

Everyone. meet Wyndolyn Wyntergreen. She'll be seeing you in the not so distant future 1000090717.png .
 

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So, if you've been around the discord, you may've seen a girl I kept calling #11 and If you played up to v03, there was a pretty heavy hint another girl would be joining the cast. It hasn't been much of a secret. Hell I've been posting her around quite a bit. But, she deserves a proper introduction, wouldn't you say?

Everyone. meet Wyndolyn Wyntergreen. She'll be seeing you in the not so distant future View attachment 5263282 .
WOW, is it just me, or does this render look really fucking good? Damn Magnum, good job (y).
 
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I will admit that the renders in this game are not the greatest, but the story is so good, that it is easy to overlook that they are not perfect. Perfection in art is relative anyway.
The render of "Wyndolyn Wyntergreen" (posted above) looks great.
I also love the slang in this game. While some may consider it a flaw... I consider it an asset.
 
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