VN Ren'Py Heaven's Door [Ch. 2 v0.2] [AlterWorlds]

[DrBackshoots]

This second chapter put me in immersion to discomfort and frighten women to the point that they come out crying is very me.

Leaving that aside I liked it, I felt that this chapter flew by and what I am most curious about is the ending of the story, since we are going to die and what are we going to leave as a legacy?

 

[Pixillin']

This second chapter put me in immersion to discomfort and frighten women to the point that they come out crying is very me.

Leaving that aside I liked it, I felt that this chapter flew by and what I am most curious about is the ending of the story, since we are going to die and what are we going to leave as a legacy?

Babies

 

[Elduriel]

Babies

and single mothers

 

[MagicMan753]

do you think he will bring back the ex in the game?If dunno if it is good or bad if the dev do it.

I honestly hope so, I actually have no problem with her. I know a lot of people do, but I want her back. I know she won't be a main girl, but imagine maybe a good hate fuck, where we get really rough with her, that would hot, imo.

 

[Pixillin']

I honestly hope so, I actually have no problem with her. I know a lot of people do, but I want her back. I know she won't be a main girl, but imagine maybe a good hate fuck, where we get really rough with her, that would hot, imo.

I don't know how it would work - how she would track you down to a hotel in rural, small town Louisiana or how she would end up there by chance. Would be interesting if she fell on hard times and wound up dancing at the club though.

 

[asahibito]

NGL, game made me look up strip club laws in LA. Who says games can't be educational?

 

[imzahai]

It says trans/trap optional in the future tags. Wanna bet who it is? Right now I'm thinking either Pink/Aurora or Coral.

Kennedy

 

[imzahai]

NGL, game made me look up strip club laws in LA. Who says games can't be educational?

and??

 

[DrBackshoots]

Babies

I also want you to make it realistic and then screw up the harem and die alone.



I'm just saying

 

[608xperience]

And how the hell did he "watch her get plowed"?

They didn't have sex or even a HJ, Andrew never even took his pants off.

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The only reason that Andrew didn't have his pants off is because of the inevitable fallout that would have occurred had MC straddled the dude on the floor still having a stiffy while being punched out. This isn't hard to understand. It was solely done for art's sake.

 

[MiltonPowers]

The only reason that Andrew didn't have his pants off is because of the inevitable fallout that would have occurred had MC straddled the dude on the floor still having a stiffy while being punched out. This isn't hard to understand. It was solely done for art's sake.

Yeah, I didn't have a problem with any of it. I was responding to the dude claiming that MC was "watching her get plowed". (Which is pretty hard to do when he has his pants on).

 

[Justaphase]

The only reason that Andrew didn't have his pants off is because of the inevitable fallout that would have occurred had MC straddled the dude on the floor still having a stiffy while being punched out. This isn't hard to understand. It was solely done for art's sake.

I'm just picturing that now and it's not a pretty sight.

 

[MiltonPowers]

I'm just picturing that now and it's not a pretty sight.

Especially, if it's getting harder the more you hit him.

 

[Elduriel]

I'm just picturing that now and it's not a pretty sight.

"hit me harder daddy"

 

[Justaphase]

Especially, if it's getting harder the more you hit him.

"hit me harder daddy"

The MC was his true target, he wanted him to straddle his boner but those damn devs put pants on him!

 

[Raziel_8]

Leaving that aside I liked it, I felt that this chapter flew by and what I am most curious about is the ending of the story, since we are going to die and what are we going to leave as a legacy?

Who say's the MC is going to die in 1-2 years ?
The doc in the last ep said there are ways and in this update we had his doc told him he would do a chemo so the tumor shrinks to a size they can operate it.
And so far the MC clearly didn't try the therapie, seemd just all a bit much to him, also thanks to the hoe of ex fiance.

Especially, if it's getting harder the more you hit him.

Now that would be just creepy

 

[gralthan]

Did the dev change writers or something? I liked Bare Witness, quite a lot even though it clearly wasn't Shakespeare, but this one is actually painful to read.

 

[Pixillin']

Did the dev change writers or something? I liked Bare Witness, quite a lot even though it clearly wasn't Shakespeare, but this one is actually painful to read.

Nope. The average AVN is 'painful to read'. It's not a medium known for its great writing, and some of the worst is in some of the most popular games. With this one I can't say for sure until it's further along, but it's above average so far.

 

[gralthan]

Nope. The average AVN is 'painful to read'. It's not a medium known for its great writing, and some of the worst is in some of the most popular games. With this one I can't say for sure until it's further along, but it's above average so far.

I'm well aware. It is however surprising coming from a proven dev, just how much worse this game is to its predecessor.

 

[Pixillin']

I'm well aware. It is however surprising coming from a proven dev, just how much worse this game is to its predecessor.

I don't find it to be a step down from Bare Witness at all - in terms of the story, the characters or the dialogue.