Blue5591

Newbie
Apr 18, 2022
20
38
That came out really good. Only a few typos, but everything else was well done. I left with intrigue so that's definitely a huge plus. As annoying cliffhangers are, they're pretty effective.
 

Jams7900

Newbie
Jan 10, 2020
39
100
I know they're the done thing but this site is really beginning to jade me on cliff-hangers. Finally getting to a good bit of story with Sirius and then it's over, having slogged through so much teen drama and slice-of-life felt a little unsatisfying. The good writing was definitely a saving grace slightly offset by the impressive feat of a Dick Van Dyke level murder of an English accent done in text.
 

HELIO CESAR

Active Member
May 30, 2018
968
2,173
you've been an orphan with no family. But on the day you come of age, a mysterious letter arrives - you have a sister. She lives in the world's largest city
Scams used to be believable :sleep:
thanks mate, good luck with the game!
 

Look-see

Engaged Member
Aug 19, 2018
3,117
5,809
is it weird that i think Hellaine shows too much skin? for a sister character she leaves little to the imagination. kinda wish the wrapping was more thick so i could appreciate it more when she gets content.

feel sorry for the random dead girl in the business suit. from what little i could see her model seemed pretty great and now we'll never be able to have her. if your gonna kill off random women dont make them hot.

lucies seems sus. in the sense that dev migh try sissification content with him:LOL:

like the animations so far. and the humor is good.

not sure how i feel about the ending. more annoying than intriguing.
 
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JenMistress

Engaged Member
Oct 1, 2019
3,250
3,874
Well, that is quite the introduction to the game, I must say. So much I am wondering about where it is going, but I know I will certainly be looking forward for future releases. Thank you so very much for this!!!
 
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