VN Ren'Py Heliorise [v0.0.1] [JBReverse]

[Crosaith.]

the "well written story" in question:

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Heh hell yea dude! Her tits are tellin a great story!

Seriously though, getting to the action quickly doesn't mean the stories gonna be poor or uninteresting or a meaningless fuck fest. There's a ton of garbage games on this site that do the opposite.

Edit - Just got through the evil route. This's one of the fucking best new games I've played in a good while. Keep it up dev

 

[LionBear]

Thanks for sharing this

 

[Adoringfan]

The rebel option should be removed, or call it what it is, dad jokes and bad puns response. There was only 1 or 2 times using rebel actually did anything other than make me wonder why it was even added at all.

 

[The_Man69]

Good game

 

[Bucketbot89]

I've only just started this (about 5 minutes) and the British slang is already becoming annoying. Are they going to talk like that the entire time?

 

[BTungsteno]

I've only just started this (about 5 minutes) and the British slang is already becoming annoying. Are they going to talk like that the entire time?

yeap, at least when the MC is with Brian (the deadweight friend)

 

[Impetu]

Appart from the lingo looks really really really bloody noise xD

 

[Adoringfan]

yeap, at least when the MC is with Brian (the deadweight friend)

Initially I liked Brian, he seemed like he might end up being a wisecracking Artful Dodger type of character, but later he just gets used as a cheap way to make the boring mc look better. He goes from being a smart character, to being the butt of a joke in every scene. Complete massacre of what could've been a decent character, but I guess the mc needs all the help he can get, especially if he thinks being 'rebellious' is telling really dad jokes and using bad puns.

 

[576dev]

I've only just started this (about 5 minutes) and the British slang is already becoming annoying. Are they going to talk like that the entire time?

Developer is most likely Indian.

 

[Bucketbot89]

yeap, at least when the MC is with Brian (the deadweight friend)

I'm so sick of these annoying best friend characters.

 

[thegeo]

Alright yeah this ones a banger, very good first version and interesting story. Pretty Caribdis-coded in its style but hey it works, not the first of these games ive enjoyed

 

[Gexiz]

It has potential. Interesting storyline, fluid animations, and eye-catching characters

 

[MagicMan753]

Solid game, really like the game. Characters and girls are interesting. There are some grammar problems, but not end of the world. Like that there will be femdom in the future.

My one issue is the hair, someting about the color, it feels like multiple colors and different colors, like a brown, yellow, blonde all in one. I wish the color of hair was different, like a little bit darker of a shade, maybe, but this is a personal gripe.

Overall interesting story, want to check out more, but the hair might be hard for me, personally, but we'll see. Either way keep up the good work dev.