VN Ren'Py Heliorise [v0.2.0b] [JBReverse]

[Crosaith.]

the "well written story" in question:

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Heh hell yea dude! Her tits are tellin a great story!

Seriously though, getting to the action quickly doesn't mean the stories gonna be poor or uninteresting or a meaningless fuck fest. There's a ton of garbage games on this site that do the opposite.

Edit - Just got through the evil route. This's one of the fucking best new games I've played in a good while. Keep it up dev

 

[LionBear]

Thanks for sharing this

 

[Adoringfan]

The rebel option should be removed, or call it what it is, dad jokes and bad puns response. There was only 1 or 2 times using rebel actually did anything other than make me wonder why it was even added at all.

 

[The_Man69]

Good game

 

[Bucketbot89]

I've only just started this (about 5 minutes) and the British slang is already becoming annoying. Are they going to talk like that the entire time?

 

[BTungsteno]

I've only just started this (about 5 minutes) and the British slang is already becoming annoying. Are they going to talk like that the entire time?

yeap, at least when the MC is with Brian (the deadweight friend)

 

[Impetu]

Appart from the lingo looks really really really bloody noise xD

 

[Adoringfan]

yeap, at least when the MC is with Brian (the deadweight friend)

Initially I liked Brian, he seemed like he might end up being a wisecracking Artful Dodger type of character, but later he just gets used as a cheap way to make the boring mc look better. He goes from being a smart character, to being the butt of a joke in every scene. Complete massacre of what could've been a decent character, but I guess the mc needs all the help he can get, especially if he thinks being 'rebellious' is telling really dad jokes and using bad puns.

 

[576dev]

I've only just started this (about 5 minutes) and the British slang is already becoming annoying. Are they going to talk like that the entire time?

Developer is most likely Indian.

 

[Bucketbot89]

yeap, at least when the MC is with Brian (the deadweight friend)

I'm so sick of these annoying best friend characters.

 

[thegeo]

Alright yeah this ones a banger, very good first version and interesting story. Pretty Caribdis-coded in its style but hey it works, not the first of these games ive enjoyed

 

[Gexiz]

It has potential. Interesting storyline, fluid animations, and eye-catching characters

 

[Rayne]

is femdom avoidable?

I wouldn't know what to say.

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Spoiler: That's how the game ends

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Femdom aside, the game is very good. I have nothing to do for the next few hours, so I'll take the opportunity to write a long review.

Thanks for the info, you saved me from download the game and get a bad experience.

Regarding some tags

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And I would say the game has a high potential to get into the top positions on the site.

 

[Uzhirian]

I'm assuming this is a typo, and it's awesome. Even makes sense in the context haha

 

[Juerhullycin]

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And I would say the game has a high potential to get into the top positions on the site.

talk is cheap and how its going right now we will get more shit for plot reasons before the story ends

 

[Rayne]

talk is cheap and how its going right now we will get more shit for plot reasons before the story ends

Well, there is hope here because I wouldn't call the scene from the beginning of the game and the end femdom because it happens in the head (essentially in his imagination) of MC. And yes, judging by everything, in the next update he will most likely gain his powers.

 

[52637]

I almost got into the game. Then MC blathered on for five fucking years with inner monologue I gave zero fucks about, and Brian is the most annoying, immature fuckboy retard. Eighteen year-olds don't go around speaking out loud about hunting for boobies. Get a fucking grip, Dev.

 

[MagicMan753]

Bad news, the sister is put on hold, no incest. He said on Itch.io. he found out about strict rules, he may try to figure something out. I hope he does, cause I love the sister.

 

[fisty123]

Bad news, the sister is put on hold, no incest. He said on Itch.io. he found out about strict rules, he may try to figure something out. I hope he does, cause I love the sister.

Feel like the dev might take the safest route and make her not the sister, it has not been confirmed in the game they are related by blood making it an easy out, with the I will still treat you like you are my sister path. Which will upset many fans on this site.

 

[sergerserj]

Good start. So far, so good.

BUT - too much path's, in future development it can become one big plot mess. Same with free roam part - without hints it just brainless clicking grind, which ruining storytelling. Just remove sandbox and make standard novelle - game starts looks more solid.