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Still a lot of pronoun swapping happening. Lenovic, please consider running everything by a proofreader for english. In the Enlish language, pronouns are gendered, and swapping them leads to some very awkward intimate moments. (Or an indication of some trap/swap interactions, take your pick.)
Just as a quick non-sex scene example:
Female:
She/her
Male:
He/His
Not good to mix them when discussing the same subject, again unless you mean to hint at a trap character.
Shortly after the "fight" scene, we also get this 3 line commentary on Thalia, presumed female character:
Just as a quick non-sex scene example:
Female:
She/her
Male:
He/His
Not good to mix them when discussing the same subject, again unless you mean to hint at a trap character.
Shortly after the "fight" scene, we also get this 3 line commentary on Thalia, presumed female character:
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Hmmm... to be honest, this isn't content that I'm interested in adding to the game. Buuuuuut, nothing has been decided yet. I was thinking about adding pregnancy when the game was nearing its end.
Thanks for the English tips. I think I'll make fewer mistakes now.
I can't promise I won't make more mistakes because since I do everything, I'm sure I'll make mistakes here and there.
I like your game a lot. There are some minor animations and size issues but overall it´s a good game with a well made story setup. I like the mc´s race visual. Very well made.
But i got the impression that u had been rushed to create 0.8.
There seem to be more mistakes than in previous game version. Especialy when it comes to translation and size scaling.
But i realy like the alpha Version of your game. Well done.
But i got the impression that u had been rushed to create 0.8.
There seem to be more mistakes than in previous game version. Especialy when it comes to translation and size scaling.
But i realy like the alpha Version of your game. Well done.
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No worries! Taking a look at the game files, I can see you are writing it initially in english. So it seems to be your focus. (The tl files are for non-english translations in your folder structure, the original scripts are all in english.)Thanks for the English tips. I think I'll make fewer mistakes now.
I can't promise I won't make more mistakes because since I do everything, I'm sure I'll make mistakes here and there.
Definitely consider going to one of the other sections on this forum to enlist the help (or hire) a proofreader to help polish up the dialog.
Other than that, another commenter noted that several of the scenes are extremely dark. And while that fits with the concept of the time (medieval, no interior lighting in general) it does make it nigh impossible to see what is happening in some scenes. Rendering it with a little bit more ambient light would go a long way towards your players enjoying the visuals you took the time to create.
Yes, the translation file structure works the way you said. First English, and from English the translation to the other languages.
I'll see what I can do to find a proofreader to help me.
About the dark scenes, It took me a while to understand what was happening. After a while I discovered that it was my monitor's fault. I have a monitor with a VA panel (it has a lot of contrast but low color accuracy) so I was seeing dark scenes perfectly. But I know that most people have monitors with IPS or TN panels. So I'm trying to make the dark scenes more light.
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