RPGM Completed Henteria Chronicles: Chapter 1 [Up.6 Fix 2] [N_taii]

[Lexam]

Well, I did give author my opinion about Update 4 and 5 I was a bit disappointed by not seeing more "extreme" ending in Non-NTR, heroines could be a bit more corrupted by demons, I found some "similar" works in a doujin format in japanese, and I thought you guys may like it while waiting for the endings, if someone wants more hit me up, I'll provide more links ^_^

chaccu is NTR/Corruption god (Heroine changing through the experience is just 10/10)

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(Seijo no Kenshin by chaccu)

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(Walpurgis by chaccu)

and one Pixelated very good NTR game worth mentioning

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(さよこ～星に願いをかけた夏～ by FAGS)

 

[The_fallen_dragon]

Did you play all of the 6 endings?

There was only about 1 ending I didn't get but yes I played all of them unless they made new ones... and none of them actually had him go back to that town and massacre them.

The closet one I even remember and granted I played the game like 2+ years ago if I remember correctly, was after he beat the main villain, depending on whether or not you use the copies to fight him, you basically have to fight ex-girlfriend afterward and basically she nukes you and you die.


I do remember hearing that there was a later ending added where after she kills the mc, she kills herself but I didn't bother to go back to find it.

 

[ssj782]

There was only about 1 ending I didn't get but yes I played all of them unless they made new ones... and none of them actually had him go back to that town and massacre them.

The closet one I even remember and granted I played the game like 2+ years ago if I remember correctly, was after he beat the main villain, depending on whether or not you use the copies to fight him, you basically have to fight ex-girlfriend afterward and basically she nukes you and you die.


I do remember hearing that there was a later ending added where after she kills the mc, she kills herself but I didn't bother to go back to find it.

Didn't one of the endings cause the end of the world? It bleached feelings or something, causing no one to WANT to have more children and making the world die slowly. I remember there was one child born, but I think it was the only one.
To me, that means he got revenge on everyone on the planet by taking away their drive to do anything aside from exist.

 

[The_fallen_dragon]

Didn't one of the endings cause the end of the world? It bleached feelings or something, causing no one to WANT to have more children and making the world die slowly. I remember there was one child born, but I think it was the only one.
To me, that means he got revenge on everyone on the planet by taking away their drive to do anything aside from exist.

Yea, but that's nowhere near the same as getting direct revenge. Literally no one actually knows that was the MC doing let alone the people that tortured and abandoned him like his sister did. Which is someone I wanted to directly see receive penance! To be honest tho the only one I even felt sorry for was the ice princess. Not even the NTR, just she got the worse out of all of them.

 

[zebucetiva]

Great update, it's a little sad to realize that we are reaching the end of the story.

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[Deleted member 361485]

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(さよこ～星に願いをかけた夏～ by FAGS)

Whew lad. I remember that one. Very few of us know about it - fair warning, this one hits HARD especially at one particular scene, only for true ntr bros If only this guy or ntrpg guy could make more games faster...

 

[Deleted member 451676]

Well, I did give author my opinion about Update 4 and 5 I was a bit disappointed by not seeing more "extreme" ending in Non-NTR, heroines could be a bit more corrupted by demons, I found some "similar" works in a doujin format in japanese, and I thought you guys may like it while waiting for the endings, if someone wants more hit me up, I'll provide more links ^_^

chaccu is NTR/Corruption god (Heroine changing through the experience is just 10/10)

You must be registered to see the links

(Seijo no Kenshin by chaccu)

You must be registered to see the links

(Walpurgis by chaccu)

and one Pixelated very good NTR game worth mentioning

You must be registered to see the links

(さよこ～星に願いをかけた夏～ by FAGS)

Looks great. Translations would look even better.

 

[dark -ryu]

Looks great. Translations would look even better.

https://f95zone.to/threads/translation-request-sayoko-the-summer-of-wishing-to-stars.18220/
->Look at this Forum

 

[Deleted member 451676]

https://f95zone.to/threads/translation-request-sayoko-the-summer-of-wishing-to-stars.18220/
->Look at this Forum

Have these translation request threads ever paid off?

 

[dark -ryu]

Have these translation request threads ever paid off?

One person uploaded a machine translation on this forum (mega)-> better than nothing

 

[scoopwoop41]

bro this game is so good. amazing job n taiii. i can feel the creative energy in your work, it's art. you have great creative writing and dialogue all throughout the game. now it's time to wait for the 5th update so i can play through the endings. i can't waiiiitttttttt. i feel like i'm waiting for a season finale of my favorite tv show lol.

 

[kuki0078]

One person uploaded a machine translation on this forum (mega)-> better than nothing

nah i'd say in that kinda circumstance especially since the dude in that thread says "half assed MTL" , nothing is actually better than something but obviously this is just my opinion, so if you can get off to broken ass english then hats off to you

 

[htmpgh]

Thanks for the new game, OP.

 

[Deleted member 451676]

This game could really do with a text skip feature. The backstories and flashbacks are very noticeably long on repeat playthroughs. I would also have loved to see more non-sexual interactions between the characters. It would be interesting to see more of how Eleanora acts around Ezekiel change progressively in casual scenarios. Like a dinner or something. Perhaps a bit more of that for the next game?

 

[Lexam]

" This game could really do with a text skip feature. The backstories and flashbacks are very noticeably long on repeat playthroughs. I would also have loved to see more non-sexual interactions between the characters. It would be interesting to see more of how Eleanora acts around Ezekiel change progressively in casual scenarios. Like a dinner or something. Perhaps a bit more of that for the next game? "
I second that, Update 4 and 5 felt more like a couple of h-scenes and flashbacks without showing attitude changes in heroines More story = good

 

[N_taii]

bro this game is so good. amazing job n taiii. i can feel the creative energy in your work, it's art. you have great creative writing and dialogue all throughout the game. now it's time to wait for the 5th update so i can play through the endings. i can't waiiiitttttttt. i feel like i'm waiting for a season finale of my favorite tv show lol.

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it! : )

Thanks for the new game, OP.

I don't know if it could be considered "new" at this point, but you're welcome^^

This game could really do with a text skip feature...

I second that, Update 4 and 5 felt more like a couple of h-scenes and flashbacks without showing attitude changes in heroines More story = good

I actually tried implementing a skip text feature in-game since Update 1, and there should be if you press CTRL, but the way it is right now, this feature doesn't work great unfortunately. Afaik, the only thing I could do to change that would be to change every text bubble individually, which would mean a tremendous amount of work.
But yeah, the skip text feature has been on my to-do list for month when planning my next game, even before I started thinking about the story. So it is definitely going to be up and working with the demo version, that's for sure.^^

As for the rest, it's going into my "player recommendations" folder.^^ It was a bit complicated to balance out non-h and h-parts without it being too boring, but it should be easier now that the second game has less heroins and I can develop the story more for each one of them.

 

[MrAakmr]

I thought I'd leave my thoughts on this game here as well, just in case it improves your next one which I'm also looking forward too.

I think this is a good game overall, but I think my biggest issue with it (that I don't think I've seen mentioned at least) is the sense of time in the game.
I don't know how others feel with it, but to me it feels like the entire game occurs over a handful of days (maybe a week) and this impacts how much I feel the characters should change, as in the changes in the heroines in the last update in particular feel like they occurred overnight basically, but they were fairly dramatic personality shifts.
Looking at NTRPG2, that felt like it occurred over months (it did use time skips though) and I'm really not sure how to address this without just adding more scenes into the game.

Overall, thoroughly enjoyed this game and looking forward to the endings and anything else you have in development.

 

[N_taii]

I thought I'd leave my thoughts on this game here as well, just in case it improves your next one which I'm also looking forward too.

I think this is a good game overall, but I think my biggest issue with it (that I don't think I've seen mentioned at least) is the sense of time in the game.
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Overall, thoroughly enjoyed this game and looking forward to the endings and anything else you have in development.

Thanks!

I think what you felt with NTRPG2 is due to the fact that the game had proper days organised into a full week (as far as I remember). So it could tell you to sleep from monday until friday and players would feel like almost a week had passed, whereas my game doesn't have that and when you sleep you only feel like one single day has passed, which is probably why it felt shorter.
This is just a hunch though. Still, I'm going to try and implement actual weekdays within the game (edit : I meant within the next game) so maybe it'll feel like the games streches over a longer time span.

 

[Noobeginner]

Can you add link for nopy as well?

 

[N_taii]

Can you add link for nopy as well?

AFAIK, you need an invitation to be able to create a nopy account, and you can’t upload anything without an account first^^