VN Ren'Py Her Desire [S2 Ch. 10 v0.20] [Wack Daddy]

[LGM]

Not a bad game. Pretty fun.

Would be a much more pleasant read, though, with a proofread. It's mostly a lack of vocative commas (and some others) and kind of mixing up the rules for plural and genitive; plural should not use an apostrophe, genitive should use one. Also, "a while" and "awhile" mean slightly different things. Oh, and "to" and "too" get mixed up sometimes, too.

If you tell Mr. Wilson that you'll stop seeing him at the second choice in Chapter 7, meaning you have c7s1wilsoncancel and c7s1wilsonreactpos set to True, he still shows up in Season 2 Chapter 3.

 

[Wack Daddy]

Not a bad game. Pretty fun.

Would be a much more pleasant read, though, with a proofread. It's mostly a lack of vocative commas (and some others) and kind of mixing up the rules for plural and genitive; plural should not use an apostrophe, genitive should use one. Also, "a while" and "awhile" mean slightly different things. Oh, and "to" and "too" get mixed up sometimes, too.

If you tell Mr. Wilson that you'll stop seeing him at the second choice in Chapter 7, meaning you have c7s1wilsoncancel and c7s1wilsonreactpos set to True, he still shows up in Season 2 Chapter 3.

Thanks, I'll look into this.

 

[uhtredviking]

This is absolute art. (specially with all the context of the pool scene)

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[Javi72]

The end of the chapter is malevolent

 

[sagerock820]

I don't know what cliffhanger everyone is talking about.

 

[Acsuka]

I don't know what cliffhanger everyone is talking about.

Most famous: Sylvester Stallone

 

[Maviarab]

Most famous: Sylvester Stallone

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[Acsuka]

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Jesus, dude this will be my new wallpaper...

 

[BadWolf71]

Wack Daddy I didn't post this image that I noticed until I was certain. I noticed that MC's Blonde pube patch is missing in the latest update. When playing the update I thought something was off on her look until I played the earlier update. Her hand was covering it in the hot tub game so I didn't notice it until the Wilson scene.

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It may not be much, but to me that little blonde patch adds to her sexiness. I'm not complaining, I just wanted to let you know so you can be aware of it.

 

[Emi_was_here]

Had a couple of updates to catch up on but the rest of the cabin scenes were really hot! and I liked the threesome with the Wilsons. Are there any plans for a Naomi scene in the next few updates?

 

[Microtom]

Wack Daddy I didn't post this image that I noticed until I was certain. I noticed that MC's Blonde pube patch is missing in the latest update. When playing the update I thought something was off on her look until I played the earlier update. Her hand was covering it in the hot tub game so I didn't notice it until the Wilson scene.

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It may not be much, but to me that little blonde patch adds to her sexiness. I'm not complaining, I just wanted to let you know so you can be aware of it.

I'd love a bigger patch. Something like this:

 

[BadWolf71]

I'd love a bigger patch. Something like this:

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I see we like the looks of the Blonde patch

 

[Dilemmauser]

Does anybody have a v 16 save file. My save files got deleted.

 

[Hungover00]

Does anybody have a v 16 save file. My save files got deleted.

And you're just going to invite internet strangers into your computer, rather than hold down CTRL for a bit?

 

[afterlights]

Well, she is her son's friend's girlfriend. She's not going to just jump into bed with Amber after meeting her once. That would be boring.

But, but... it's Amber! How can that kind of resistance be possible?

 

[Master of Puppets]

Well, she is her son's friend's girlfriend. She's not going to just jump into bed with Amber after meeting her once. That would be boring.

OK, sure. Why does that have anything to do with if Amber is fucking her son or not?

 

[BadWolf71]

Wack Daddy if you ever decide to voice the MC, I would like to recommend voice actress KittenVox. If anyone plays Fallout 4 & uses the mod Companion Ivy, she's Ivy's voice. KittenVox has voiced other VNs & Games and I think she would be perfect for MC/Amber.

Just my thoughts,

Bad Wolf

 

[DanThaMan]

Wack Daddy if you ever decide to voice the MC, I would like to recommend voice actress KittenVox. If anyone plays Fallout 4 & uses the mod Companion Ivy, she's Ivy's voice. KittenVox has voiced other VNs & Games and I think she would be perfect for MC/Amber.

Just my thoughts,

Bad Wolf

You do realise that would cost a fortune, right?

 

[Bigsmoothy]

The scene of her having fun with her son was fantastic with her hubby on the phone, the kind of cuckoldery this can provide is next level to the development of the story .

 

[Bigsmoothy]

You do realise that would cost a fortune, right?

The impact of sound is not voices....heels walking..?...,doors closing....,slippery fkning and sucking sounds will always rule the day.