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sadfuck
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Higurashika
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Wack Daddy thanks for the game! The scenes you make are really good! But the scene with Brody/MC/Chloe feels a bit weird because of one particular thing, when MC thinks "Brody touched his daughter, his daughter sucked him" when it should be "our daughter". I find it hard to believe that she would think about Chloe as "his daughter".
TonyMurray
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Given the situation, I think it's perfectly reasonable to use "his daughter" over "our daughter". At that point, it's his daughter he's fooling around with, Amber is the audience at that point. She's not saying that Chloe isn't "our daughter", she's just emphasising that Brody is touching his daughter as opposed to literally any other woman. Both are correct, but I don't think either is wrong.
Higurashika
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It's about perception of your own child. A mother would say "his daughter" only if she's pissed at her daughter and at a husband.
TonyMurray
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I disagree. There are plenty of times when "his daughter" might be more appropriate. In this instance, the emphasis is on the fact that Brody is doing stuff with his own daughter. In saying it like that, Amber is making the link between Brody and Chloe much clearer. It's a subtlety that makes it more taboo. I know it's not (yet) what was happening, but for the sake of argument, "he's fucking our daughter" is not the same as "he's fucking his own daughter", even if they are both referring to the same two people.
Higurashika
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Okay. I just see that you don't have kids.
TonyMurray
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I do have kids actually (well, kid singular). I just see a nuance of language that you apparently don't. There's nothing wrong with that - as I said, both would be acceptable, but neither is wrong.
It's almost laughable the you would presume to speak for or claim to understand the thinking process of all mothers. Perhaps it might be time to consider that people are individuals. That individuals are more or less complex than the labels and tags the world attaches to them.
Just a thought
BenHatira
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Imo "our daughter" is pretty much what everyone would think or say in a parental way in any situation when both parents are present at that moment.
Don't split hairs here
Anyway those are just my "two cents" about whatever is going on here, i don't play that whole sharing path cause my MC is a lesbian Mommy that doesn't let dicks near her girl !
Might be a cultural/language nuance. Where I'm from (western Europe) it's perfectly common for a mother to say "your son/daughter" to her spouse. Like, "go pick up your daughter from school", while still referring to her own daughter.
I think there's arguments to be made either way, but IMO in these intimate circumstances "our daughter" just feels better.
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there are more save slots the < > to move save pages is for some reason hidden.