VN Ren'Py Her Desire [S3 Ch.4 v0.34] [Wack Daddy]

[Wack Daddy]

The thing I enjoyed most about your work thus far was that it wasn't the typical bimbofication/dehumaniztion trope that all the other FemProtag games have. Nothing Amber did thus far was amoral or heartless. Nothing suggested she was stupid, naive or devoid of emotion.

It was almost always consenting actions between consenting individuals. Doing nothing while she watched the coaches attempts to groom her daughter was certainly a first step toward showing she doesn't actually give a shit about her family. Now you're writing Amber in a way where she can turn her daughter out to someone with the weakest blackmail scheme one can imagine?

That isn't light corruption. Seducing your family or your best friend and her daughter is light corruption. This Davis story line is everything that makes all the FemProtag games the same. Amber's just becoming another dehumanized fuck doll with no brains or emotions. On top of turning Chloe into the same thing.

Thanks for the feedback.
I don't want to spoil too much about the MC/Mr Davis/Chole future path, but...

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[Maviarab]

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Missed the sarcasm and emote huh....

 

[K.T.L.]

Missed the sarcasm and emote huh....

Yep. Sarcasm doesn't carry well on that there internet thingy.

 

[satirious]

Thanks for the feedback.
I don't want to spoil too much about the MC/Mr Davis/Chole future path, but...

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Up to this point (discounting her failure to act in the scenes with Chloe's coach) nothing Amber has done suggests she doesn't genuinely care for those close to her. Submitting herself to Davis on such lame pretext can be waived away as letting him think he's getting over on her because the submissive position excites her. Not cutting his heart out for even mentioning her daughter undermines all of that. It's not her wanting to play test new sexual experiences and exploring "Her Desires". It turning her into something contrary to what you painted her character to be.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

The thing I enjoyed most about your work thus far was that it wasn't the typical bimbofication/dehumaniztion trope that all the other FemProtag games have. Nothing Amber did thus far was amoral or heartless. Nothing suggested she was stupid, naive or devoid of emotion.

It was almost always consenting actions between consenting individuals. Doing nothing while she watched the coaches attempts to groom her daughter was certainly a first step toward showing she doesn't actually give a shit about her family. Now you're writing Amber in a way where she can turn her daughter out to someone with the weakest blackmail scheme one can imagine?

That isn't light corruption. Seducing your family or your best friend and her daughter is light corruption. This Davis story line is everything that makes all the FemProtag games the same. Amber's just becoming another dehumanized fuck doll with no brains or emotions. On top of turning Chloe into the same thing.

Do you know what the word "optional" means?
here is the definition Optional means that something is available as a choice but not required. It is left to one's discretion and is not mandatory. Now do you understand, you dont have to be blackmailed by davis if you dont want to, but if others want it, so be it, dont be a kink shamer. Options and choices is the best thing about this game, we all have our own version of Amber

 

[satirious]

Do you know what the word "optional" means?
here is the definition Optional means that something is available as a choice but not required. It is left to one's discretion and is not mandatory. Now do you understand, you dont have to be blackmailed by davis if you dont want to, but if others want it, so be it, dont be a kink shamer. Options and choices is the best thing about this game, we all have our own version of Amber

If you choose to hand waive turning her daughter out to being fetish, that is on you. As I very clearly stated. Amber's choice to let Davis think his bs plot works so she can fuck him is one thing. That you can chalk up to kink or fetish. Making Amber a mother willing to let someone do that to her daughter changes her dynamic as a mother and what that means to her as a character. She becomes just another brainless bimbo. And I'm sure that makes many happy that have wanted to see this title become just like the rest of the female protag games. I'm sure it pisses off more than a few that a female can be something more than a cock sleeve bimbo fuck doll. So far Amber and "Her Desire" wasn't any of those things. It seemed as Wack Daddy was against letting it become exactly that.

 

[Echoesinthedarkness]

also Amber already sexed Parker on multiple occasions (players choice obviously), I'd say that is quite amoral too if we talk about conventional morale.

 

[jackdanniels]

If you choose to hand waive turning her daughter out to being fetish, that is on you. As I very clearly stated. Amber's choice to let Davis think his bs plot works so she can fuck him is one thing. That you can chalk up to kink or fetish. Making Amber a mother willing to let someone do that to her daughter changes her dynamic as a mother and what that means to her as a character. She becomes just another brainless bimbo. And I'm sure that makes many happy that have wanted to see this title become just like the rest of the female protag games. I'm sure it pisses off more than a few that a female can be something more than a cock sleeve bimbo fuck doll. So far Amber and "Her Desire" wasn't any of those things. It seemed as Wack Daddy was against letting it become exactly that.

I think you should start looking for visual novels without sexual content. PG-13 stuff or lower, or just go watch Pokemon.

 

[BlenderGuy]

Was wondering if it's possible to ignore the hubby and make the wife shag everyone else in the game. Or does that restrict progress too much?

 

[jackdanniels]

Was wondering if it's possible to ignore the hubby and make the wife shag everyone else in the game. Or does that restrict progress too much?

I avoided Vera because I think she's ugly lol, but there is a different outcome on the cabin trip and also another bunch of situations because if you follow Vera's path they become a lesbian teacher of their daughters, this is a big BS for me, well at least for me, another reason to try to avoid her. , but there is a lot of content with Vera, unfortunately. So it may have a similar outcome to the husband, content loss.

 

[Wack Daddy]

I love open discussions about the game - it does help me grow and get into the minds of players other than myself lol. So not saying anyone's opinion is wrong. If you play the game like a total slut (like I do) then that's your prerogative. Same goes with those who maybe play Chloe only. The challenge comes to make the game flow and make sense for both audiences lol.

Another point to make is, who at the start, are the most important people to her?
Brody, Parker, Chloe and Vera.
The way it has been for 2 seasons now, and will continue to be, was, if you choose NOT to go down an intimate path with one of those people mentioned, then there's possible choices and paths that will be locked from you.
On top of that, just because an option/kink is possible that might not make tons of sense for you, doesn't mean it might not for others who maybe just want the MC to be open to some f'ed up shi*t.
I've said before, this is not a deep story driven VN - I wanted it to be a slightly accelerated, bloatless, naughty fun game.

 

[jackdanniels]

I love open discussions about the game - it does help me grow and get into the minds of players other than myself lol. So not saying anyone's opinion is wrong. If you play the game like a total slut (like I do) then that's your prerogative. Same goes with those who maybe play Chloe only. The challenge comes to make the game flow and make sense for both audiences lol.

Another point to make is, who at the start, are the most important people to her?
Brody, Parker, Chloe and Vera.
The way it has been for 2 seasons now, and will continue to be, was, if you choose NOT to go down an intimate path with one of those people mentioned, then there's possible choices and paths that will be locked from you.
On top of that, just because an option/kink is possible that might not make tons of sense for you, doesn't mean it might not for others who maybe just want the MC to be open to some f'ed up shi*t.
I've said before, this is not a deep story driven VN - I wanted it to be a slightly accelerated, bloatless, naughty fun game.

You already did a lot by making everything avoidable and the plot is fair, the story is not bad. a bunch of things may be a turn-off for some and not for others, but still is an excellent AVN.

 

[Dexterward]

Nice chapter ...

Amber evolves and assumes her search for "Her Desires". There is something for everyone in this episode.

The situation you were talking about brings "spice" in one of the scenes which confirms Amber in assuming her desires. Things are falling into place for the sequel which promises beautiful things to come.

A beautiful episode which closes this second season. A regular work and which holds, as always, keeps its promises. Looking forward to the sequel ...

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

If you choose to hand waive turning her daughter out to being fetish, that is on you. As I very clearly stated. Amber's choice to let Davis think his bs plot works so she can fuck him is one thing. That you can chalk up to kink or fetish. Making Amber a mother willing to let someone do that to her daughter changes her dynamic as a mother and what that means to her as a character. She becomes just another brainless bimbo. And I'm sure that makes many happy that have wanted to see this title become just like the rest of the female protag games. I'm sure it pisses off more than a few that a female can be something more than a cock sleeve bimbo fuck doll. So far Amber and "Her Desire" wasn't any of those things. It seemed as Wack Daddy was against letting it become exactly that.

Or you can play without all the drama and just do this

 

[Hungover00]

When do the other tiers release?

 

[Wack Daddy]

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[Taker Fan]

So, the end for Chapter 2 will be here on Monday?

 

[Grubb]

I love open discussions about the game - it does help me grow and get into the minds of players other than myself lol. So not saying anyone's opinion is wrong. If you play the game like a total slut (like I do) then that's your prerogative. Same goes with those who maybe play Chloe only. The challenge comes to make the game flow and make sense for both audiences lol.

Another point to make is, who at the start, are the most important people to her?
Brody, Parker, Chloe and Vera.
The way it has been for 2 seasons now, and will continue to be, was, if you choose NOT to go down an intimate path with one of those people mentioned, then there's possible choices and paths that will be locked from you.
On top of that, just because an option/kink is possible that might not make tons of sense for you, doesn't mean it might not for others who maybe just want the MC to be open to some f'ed up shi*t.
I've said before, this is not a deep story driven VN - I wanted it to be a slightly accelerated, bloatless, naughty fun game.

Fixed your quote.

 

[GokutheG]

Fixed your quote.

Come on even on the lesbian path those two are important to her. I know it's more work so it is rarely done but I think it'd be cool to have a friendship route for characters who you don't want to get intimate with should happen in more games. Perhaps keeping it exclusive to only the LIs who are important to the mc regardless of your playthrough could be a compromise.

 

[Taker Fan]

Nice, the Update is here. That is a good Sunday evening.