VN Ren'Py Completed Her Final Request [v0.3 Final] [Chinzu]

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HER FINAL REQUEST:A young man's life takes an unexpected turn after a tragic loss, forcing him to leave behind the world he once knew. With no choice but to step into a new household, he finds himself surrounded by people who are both familiar and unfamiliar — bound by ties he never asked for.
What begins as a simple attempt to adapt soon transforms into something far more complicated. Within this home lie unspoken tensions, emotions kept in silence, and desires that can no longer be ignored. As days pass, boundaries blur, secrets stir, and relationships shift in ways that defy expectations.
Her Final Request is a dramatic and emotional story-driven journey where family, desire, and hidden truths collide — and nothing will ever be the same again.​

Thread Updated: 2025-10-20
Release Date: 2025-10-20
Developer: Chinzu
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Censored: No
Version: 0.3 Final
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Language: English
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Extras: Italian Translation*
*This unofficial port/version is not released by developer, download at your own risk.

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Adhdclassic

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His hands and arms turn very oddly. In certain angles I keep hearing little girls go hhheeeeyyyy. :ROFLMAO:
 
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First impressions:
  1. Story is somewhere in limbo. There are many issues with the scene on the train.
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    Since that's the case, why did she make it known to the MC that she was aware?
  2. I realize that the developer is just starting to learn how to program with renpy. But the inclusion of people thinking along with their actual speech was poorly done. He/she should first set his parameters to indicate thought. The dev could either set the text representing thoughts as italics or use quotation marks or smaller text or another colored text....just not the insertion of the word "thought" every time.
  3. It is quite clear that the developer is not a native English speaker. But the translation is miserable. Grammar is bad, punctuation is haywire and some lines make no sense at all. My advice? Ask someone to edit and proof read.
 
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That setup sounds like the kind of story where you tell yourself “I’ll just check out the intro” and then suddenly it’s night time and you’re arguing with your own brain about who in the house is lying and who’s just horny :unsure:
 
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Is the game supposed to be over after just two minutes? What is this? A training project? It's too short even for that. Honestly... It doesn't even work as an intro...
 
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Is the game supposed to be over after just two minutes? What is this? A training project? It's too short even for that. Honestly... It doesn't even work as an intro...
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Well, it's just a prologue. I think 'v0.01' would be more appropriate than 'v1.0'.
 
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no incest here, your mother died when u were 5. and its not even stepcast because your father is dead too and thats makes your step family not step anymore.

ill wait and see if this changes or if it gets a patch removing the dead mother part, and making the random family mc's real family. and if not ill just ignore and move along
 
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I've found bad games here before, but holy shit this was ridiculous, 1 star seems like too much for this prologue, so I'm not even going to give it one.

Everything was bad, the quality of the renders, the characters, the dialogues, I don't judge the story because there isn't one yet.

The prologue is only two minutes long, but after watching the prologue I spent ten minutes contemplating life, what a waste of time.
 
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Man, this game has a good premise but everything else is crap, no offense for a new creator but this needs a lot of work.

As others already mentioned, the arms movements are cringe, but I did likes the feet tapping and wobbling Not-Mihawk does.

The writing is atrocious, not only the bad English but the situations are awkward as hell, the girl could have stopped everything by just screaming, but she chooses to play asleep to be molested ? and then is happy to be saved, what if Not-Mihawk had gotten his sword and Killed the MC (who seems to have a MC syndrome ) for trying to play the hero?

Also we don't need 5 takes of the guy reaching Not-Mihawk to stop him, a single one grabbing his arm would be enough.
Also if he's supposed to be a famous Don what the fuck is he doing trying to molest girls in the train... it feels pathetic.

Overall, the dialogs need to be proofread or at least get some IA to run them and get something more coherent.

Chinzu getting in some comments from time to time also feels like telling rather than showing, we don't need us to be told that he dropped the bag we can see that.

I don't want to discourage the creator from his game, I do think he has a good premise but most of the game so far its bad, from wonky animation, to broken wrists to bad dialogue, this really need a lot of work.

Good luck with your project.
 
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