Just played this, here is my thoughts on the game:
Renders: Good job dude, I can't complain. Great choice of models, and visually the game is very appealing.
Code: It wasn't buggy, but nor did it have anything special about it. Basic simple code that does what it should. Plenty of choice menus. It gets the job done.
Writing: The game has a bit of a feel like it is the same basic outline for a script as
Radiant. You got an older man and 3 younger females whose mother died. A blonde, a brunette, and a redhead. Also, you get to bang a waitress while on date with another female. This is not a bad outline, it is actually a good outline, but how well it turns out depends on the execution.
How could the game be improved in each of these areas?
Renders: Nothing to complain about here, maybe add more animations for the sex scenes.
Code: Feels a little basic, maybe add a little fluff to it and expand with some variable paths. A lot of the choices it feels like you don't really get a choice because there is one obvious good answer and one obvious bad answer you don't really need a walkthrough to know which is the bad answer. You will get a menu for instance that will be like; Tell your date that the waitress is hotter than her, or compliment your date. A choice like that is far too easy. A better choice of choices would be great which is more of a writing problem, but it is menu so it is kinda code too.
Writing: Alright I'm gonna run this past everyone. Hypothetically speaking if the game started out with a man finding a magical spellbook that now makes him 100% irresistible to all women, but then the book burns up after the spell has been cast and it is gone from the rest of the story, but the spell is active, would anything need to be changed because of this major event? I'm going to go with no... probably not.
I think some more build-up, and teasing would have made the game better. You get to smash it too easy. The women in the game tend to have the libido of perverted men. It would probably make a lot of sense to go back to the beginning and give some brief magical explanation for this as we have already gotten to the booty there is no turning back now may as well go all out with it.