VN Ren'Py Heritage [v0.4.2] [GeppettoPossum]

[S1nsational]

GeppettoPossum after talking about Max on here loads of times, and considering her long reign as best girl on the poll, and given how early into development the game still is, I think you might want to consider retconning her into being unavoidable.

I know a different game that was much further into development that had to retcon a few characters into being unavoidable and I think it was the fact is was so late that is was done that caused a lot of the issues.

I honestly think it was a mistake, however well intended, to make her the only avoidable girl in the entire family. Having her avoidable but the rest not, is going to be very limiting of your writing and require extra work in terms of doubling or more the number of renders needed to account for her being present or not, and later pregnant or not.

The whole family are supposed to be irresistible to each other, and they are all except Max. Yea she's unique, but even so it feels like a plot whole.

Any fears of Max using her dick on the other girls could easily be avoided by having it be optional. So much is already gifted to us like that.

I think, how I would do this, is, change the scenes where Max can be rejected so going forward she can't be rejected, and for those who already rejected her, prepare a bottleneck at some point in the game. An example "because playing with her dick is optional, have a scene where MC comes across a recently used dildo that Max used to fuck her pussy, MC smells the intoxicating scent of her pussy much as he would with any of the other girls, and goes to taste it thinking its one of the other girls toy, have Max walk in and catch him. It's revealed that it's Max's pussy that MC wants to taste, Max offers a taste from the source, the player would be unable to reject this advance. This would lead into Max and MC developing a relationship in a similar way to how it happens when she's accepted when available in the current build. Once this happens, have the when and how largely ignored, as sooner or later, once all the relationships are established and public none of it's going to matter.

 

[Only1P]

GeppettoPossum after talking about Max on here loads of times, and considering her long reign as best girl on the poll, and given how early into development the game still is, I think you might want to consider retconning her into being unavoidable.

I know a different game that was much further into development that had to retcon a few characters into being unavoidable and I think it was the fact is was so late that is was done that caused a lot of the issues.

I honestly think it was a mistake, however well intended, to make her the only avoidable girl in the entire family. Having her avoidable but the rest not, is going to be very limiting of your writing and require extra work in terms of doubling or more the number of renders needed to account for her being present or not, and later pregnant or not.

The whole family are supposed to be irresistible to each other, and they are all except Max. Yea she's unique, but even so it feels like a plot whole.

Any fears of Max using her dick on the other girls could easily be avoided by having it be optional. So much is already gifted to us like that.

I think, how I would do this, is, change the scenes where Max can be rejected so going forward she can't be rejected, and for those who already rejected her, prepare a bottleneck at some point in the game. An example "because playing with her dick is optional, have a scene where MC comes across a recently used dildo that Max used to fuck her pussy, MC smells the intoxicating scent of her pussy much as he would with any of the other girls, and goes to taste it thinking its one of the other girls toy, have Max walk in and catch him. It's revealed that it's Max's pussy that MC wants to taste, Max offers a taste from the source, the player would be unable to reject this advance. This would lead into Max and MC developing a relationship in a similar way to how it happens when she's accepted when available in the current build. Once this happens, have the when and how largely ignored, as sooner or later, once all the relationships are established and public none of it's going to matter.

Chill.

 

[Skode]

Hey dev hear me out a sec as you clearly appreciate exaggerating proportions in your art. The MC has a member the size of a family dog... you should consider cumflation. I wanna see these bellies swell when he empties his "ropes" in them if not before like Max getting stretched as Max is skinny yet MC is ultra thick.

 

[JjjjjjjjhxhxoaM]

Stop arguing abt Max and let's focus on the "bigger" issue. Give us the og dick back!! Or at least let it have a cameo in the future

 

[GeppettoPossum]

Hey dev hear me out a sec as you clearly appreciate exaggerating proportions in your art. The MC has a member the size of a family dog... you should consider cumflation. I wanna see these bellies swell when he empties his "ropes" in them if not before like Max getting stretched as Max is skinny yet MC is ultra thick.

I'm definitely not ruling out cumflation in a non-canon bonus image. In fact, it's almost guaranteed. The game already has fairly pronounced belly-bulge when the MC is deep in a girl, but I don't plan on adding canon cumflation.

Stop arguing abt Max and let's focus on the "bigger" issue. Give us the og dick back!! Or at least let it have a cameo in the future

Sort of the same answer for this one, but I'm not ruling out it being included in a non-canon bonus render. The MC's dick is still 12" long and thicker than most out there (it's actually slightly longer than 12"). His balls are exactly the same size as before. Canon-wise, though, the new one is his actual dick. I'd have to re-render TONS of stuff if I wanted to switch back.
I'd probably add a non-futa Max path before I'd add an OG dick path.

The v0.3 update includes a re-work of the first scene to account for the new dick. It still has the OG dick in the scene with Max though on Day 1. At some point I'll redo that scene as well. I eventually plan to have a toggle at the beginning of the game if you want to see the OG dick for Day 1 or switch to the new one. It's not a top priority at the moment, though.

 

[gabriel12345621]

I'm definitely not ruling out cumflation in a non-canon bonus image. In fact, it's almost guaranteed. The game already has fairly pronounced belly-bulge when the MC is deep in a girl, but I don't plan on adding canon cumflation.



Sort of the same answer for this one, but I'm not ruling out it being included in a non-canon bonus render. The MC's dick is still 12" long and thicker than most out there (it's actually slightly longer than 12"). His balls are exactly the same size as before. Canon-wise, though, the new one is his actual dick. I'd have to re-render TONS of stuff if I wanted to switch back.
I'd probably add a non-futa Max path before I'd add an OG dick path.

The v0.3 update includes a re-work of the first scene to account for the new dick. It still has the OG dick in the scene with Max though on Day 1. At some point I'll redo that scene as well. I eventually plan to have a toggle at the beginning of the game if you want to see the OG dick for Day 1 or switch to the new one. It's not a top priority at the moment, though.

The game is entertaining, good renderings show what others don't, the only thing it needs to make it even better is sound and music.

 

[pichonligon]

Will there be a public version of the new update?

 

[Lex1988]

We need a hero

 

[JUCJOFF]

I'd probably add a non-futa Max path before I'd add an OG dick path.

Absolutely right, you need to add a switch to the version of Max as a regular t-girl.

And so I can express a few thoughts about your game.
1) It would be good if in future updates all the "hot" scenes would somehow take place with the participation of the mc. At the beginning of the game you have quite a lot of scenes with girls "entertaining" themselves and this is normal - you introduce the player to the characters, but then the main character should take a much more active part in such actions. After all, when playing a game we usually associate ourselves with the MC, and not just watch porn with some unfamiliar actors.
2) In addition, it is better to animate only s-scenes, and not some ordinary moments from everyday life like the characters' walk, opening doors, playing sports and the like. All this takes time and resources, and it would be better to add another camera angle or an additional scene. Here i should note that you have done everything correctly, there is nothing superfluous, and this remark applies more to other games and hope that you will not repeat their mistakes.
3) And finally, regarding the text and story. There is no need to strive to write huge dialogues, where it is possible to fit into 4-5 sentences, there is no need to stretch the text to 40-50. The author's penchant for excessive pretentious graphomania can hardly be attributed to the advantages of VN. And do not forget that for many players English is not their native language, for example, although i know English well, still quickly get tired of reading large volumes of empty text, especially when i just want to relax. But again, this does not apply to your game (there were only a couple of moments that seemed drawn out to me and I scrolled through the text, almost without reading).

All of this is more my personal thoughts (not instructions) based on my familiarity with p-games and I would like you to be able to avoid the common mistakes of other developers, because your project is really very interesting (although I think you made a mistake with Max).

 

[mordelito]

Need new version now

 

[Deidara242]

Amazing update.

 

[xDarknessZ]

We need a hero, sadly i can't contribute to the subscriberstar but anyone who can i recommend, its cheap. Love the Futa. Be it male on futa or futa on male, hope there is at least another character that is a futa but the one it has is amazing.

 

[JoeBitten]

wow max is a fan favourite .. she beat the mommy bias too

 

[yoyomistro]

wow max is a fan favourite .. she beat the mommy bias too

Recently on Discord, the mommy is winning... Not surprising Max is great but the call of the MILF is too strong.

 

[HeathenJack]

Recently on Discord, the mommy is winning... Not surprising Max is great but the call of the MILF is too strong.

You love to see it.

 

[mordelito]

Release the cracken...! i mean the update.

 

[Bleacher]

I liked that they changed the shape of the MC's cock, I still like the characters and the sizes of each of them, the only thing I didn't like were the physics and the shape of the nipples and areolas, I understand that since they are big they are sagging due to the weight, but if their body in general is special and strong to hold on, then they should have a firmer shape and not sagging, from there on out everything is fine for me, I even like the detail of the bulge in Rachel's abdomen and the gestures of pleasure they have, sorry for my English, it's not my main language.

 

[DeeezNuts]

When will the public release be?

 

[HerreroA]

Version 0.3 is here!
This version features:
492 new renders
6 new bonus images
79 new animations
and ~17,000 new words of dialogue.
In addition, I will also be including 11 renders in 4K. Please wait until you finish the update to open these as they contain spoilers.

This update features most of Day 3. Unfortunately, due to time constraints I had to end the update before the full day was completed. The remainder of Day 3 will be in the next update.

Thank you all so much for your patience and support!

Per the tier benefits, the release dates will be as follows:
Roots ($8)- NOW!
Trunk ($6)- September 7th at 12:01am (just after midnight) (1 week)
Branch ($3.50)- September 14th at 12:01am (just after midnight) (2 weeks)
Leaf ($1)- September 28th at 12:01am (just after midnight) (4 weeks)
Each tier will have a separate post containing the links to download the game.
PLEASE let me know if you have any issues.
-GP

 

[mordelito]

and the link...?