I'd probably add a non-futa Max path before I'd add an OG dick path.
Absolutely right, you need to add a switch to the version of Max as a regular t-girl.
And so I can express a few thoughts about your game.
1) It would be good if in future updates all the "hot" scenes would somehow take place with the participation of the mc. At the beginning of the game you have quite a lot of scenes with girls "entertaining" themselves and this is normal - you introduce the player to the characters, but then the main character should take a much more active part in such actions. After all, when playing a game we usually associate ourselves with the MC, and not just watch porn with some unfamiliar actors.
2) In addition, it is better to animate only s-scenes, and not some ordinary moments from everyday life like the characters' walk, opening doors, playing sports and the like. All this takes time and resources, and it would be better to add another camera angle or an additional scene. Here i should note that you have done everything correctly, there is nothing superfluous, and this remark applies more to other games and hope that you will not repeat their mistakes.
3) And finally, regarding the text and story. There is no need to strive to write huge dialogues, where it is possible to fit into 4-5 sentences, there is no need to stretch the text to 40-50. The author's penchant for excessive pretentious graphomania can hardly be attributed to the advantages of VN. And do not forget that for many players English is not their native language, for example, although i know English well, still quickly get tired of reading large volumes of empty text, especially when i just want to relax. But again, this does not apply to your game (there were only a couple of moments that seemed drawn out to me and I scrolled through the text, almost without reading).
All of this is more my personal thoughts (not instructions) based on my familiarity with p-games and I would like you to be able to avoid the common mistakes of other developers, because your project is really very interesting (although I think you made a mistake with Max).
