As I nearly reached the end of the content in ver 0.4.7, I did not expect Ceci to turn into a
yandere(?). I admit that at first, I was playing it for its BDSM content, but I feel like this game also has a very interesting story. Kinda reminds me of the
Rance series. TBH, I think the author really has a talent for picking the background music. Some of them triggers my emotion when playing.
Ohhhh, thank you, you pointed out something a forgot to say previously.
The dynamic between Erin and Cecille struck me as somewhat discordant in the FemErin narrative. In my opinion, the progression of Cecille's feelings towards Erin doesn't align seamlessly with his transformation. Instead of growing increasingly resentful as Erin becomes more and more feminine, I believe it might be more fitting and emotionally resonant if Cecille's sentiments evolved inversely. That is, as Erin resists and stay true to his heterossexuality and his Hero status Cecille becames more and more hateful while in the other hand when he embraces his femininity, Cecille's hostility could diminish, replaced by a growing fondness, support and empathy for Erin's female self.
By showcasing Cecille's shift in attitude as Erin explores and embraces his femininity, the narrative could paint a more heartfelt and cohesive picture of acceptance and understanding.
While i do enjoy femdom i think femdom is more fitting in roleplay only (pretend), in my perspective, genuine dominance is best portrayed when emanating from the male counterpart only, personified by Mars in this scenario. I believe that female domination, though enjoyable in roleplay as i said before, might not align with the narrative's intent for genuine domination. Thus, I suggest a consistent portrayal of Mars as the dominant force throughout the storyline.
Regarding the Mars and Erin relationship, I found Mars' inclination toward care and affection to Erin somewhat incongruent with the desired/ideal narrative. Instead, I propose a more fitting portrayal where Mars consistently treats Erin harshly, maintaining a stance of complete control and dominance. This portrayal would solidify Mars's objective of reducing Erin to a submissive sissy slave without any form of sentimental attachment.
Sorry for yet another long feedbacks, and again you are an amazing artist and storytaller Nitrolith!
