- Nov 18, 2021
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Did you play through all of the maid events? there is an important scene there that explains what the final scene is about.I do not believe forcing people to watch the big bad ending is a good design choice.
Great work with the new update. Excellent stuff.
If I may, I had some questions regarding your writing which I hold in relatively high regard compared to anything else on f95.
Cecille has essentially given her all to Mars now. Mars reveals he is a demon and as long as he says pretty words Cecille doesn't care. She has lost her agency and independence. Such a character is hard to make interesting if they just revolve entirely around another actor. How do you intend to move forward with Cecille when she has...to not be insulting, lost depth? We've obviously not seen much of this new cecille, but it's very easy to make such a brainwashed, idolising character one dimensional, like the side characters that worship Mars. She's been subverting or twisting tons of tropes to be unique 'till now.
The whole scene with feeding seems kind of weird. Remember Sera punching Cecille's head off because she pushed too far? I feel as if a potential bad end there with similar repercussions against Mars could make Erin's character more convincing as if he is on the edge of massacring. As is he just seems very toothless, which I realize is the point, he is a cuck and all, but the whole story point has been that he is actually very dangerous if antagonized and Mars is playing a dangerous game and balancing act. It takes away from the suspense and sense of danger or importance if Erin always just sits on his ass and watches his would-be-girlfriend stroke Mars' cock literally right in front of him while his mom massages Mars. That's...that feels like a scene that belongs to after the reveal. It kinda cheapens everything, I feel.
Also she didn't lose her agency or anything like that, I mean, she already goes behind his back and "exposes them" to the entire world.
Even after he takes her, she'll continue to plot and try to take Vi's place ect. This is without saying the carnage that will ensue if he abandons her now.
In the Harem ending, she'll be taking charge in a big way as well. The story is not over is what I'm saying.
As for feeding scene...
Maybe I didn't highlight it well but his mother was holding him the entire time. He also doesn't have the courage to fight because he's afraid of Cecille and it is 100% against the Goddess which she's the arbiter of good and wrong.
Old Erin that didn't have the seal on him would have definitely fought though.