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As I nearly reached the end of the content in ver 0.4.7, I did not expect Ceci to turn into a yandere(?). I admit that at first, I was playing it for its BDSM content, but I feel like this game also has a very interesting story. Kinda reminds me of the Rance series. TBH, I think the author really has a talent for picking the background music. Some of them triggers my emotion when playing.
 
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Forget Cecille,Sera,Elena or erin
i rather cuck lavinia and have forbidden scandalous lovey dovey sweaty hand holding with this fine specimen
DEMON LORD MY BELOVED
hellele and goddess cant stop me from kissing your eyebrow
That's exactly what I thought! The Demon Lord is fucking handsome and charming. I don't think any woman in this game could be on par with his beauty!
 

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As I nearly reached the end of the content in ver 0.4.7, I did not expect Ceci to turn into a yandere(?). I admit that at first, I was playing it for its BDSM content, but I feel like this game also has a very interesting story. Kinda reminds me of the Rance series. TBH, I think the author really has a talent for picking the background music. Some of them triggers my emotion when playing.
Ohhhh, thank you, you pointed out something a forgot to say previously.

The dynamic between Erin and Cecille struck me as somewhat discordant in the FemErin narrative. In my opinion, the progression of Cecille's feelings towards Erin doesn't align seamlessly with his transformation. Instead of growing increasingly resentful as Erin becomes more and more feminine, I believe it might be more fitting and emotionally resonant if Cecille's sentiments evolved inversely. That is, as Erin resists and stay true to his heterossexuality and his Hero status Cecille becames more and more hateful while in the other hand when he embraces his femininity, Cecille's hostility could diminish, replaced by a growing fondness, support and empathy for Erin's female self.

By showcasing Cecille's shift in attitude as Erin explores and embraces his femininity, the narrative could paint a more heartfelt and cohesive picture of acceptance and understanding.

While i do enjoy femdom i think femdom is more fitting in roleplay only (pretend), in my perspective, genuine dominance is best portrayed when emanating from the male counterpart only, personified by Mars in this scenario. I believe that female domination, though enjoyable in roleplay as i said before, might not align with the narrative's intent for genuine domination. Thus, I suggest a consistent portrayal of Mars as the dominant force throughout the storyline.

Regarding the Mars and Erin relationship, I found Mars' inclination toward care and affection to Erin somewhat incongruent with the desired/ideal narrative. Instead, I propose a more fitting portrayal where Mars consistently treats Erin harshly, maintaining a stance of complete control and dominance. This portrayal would solidify Mars's objective of reducing Erin to a submissive sissy slave without any form of sentimental attachment.

Sorry for yet another long feedbacks, and again you are an amazing artist and storytaller Nitrolith!
 
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Ohhhh, thank you, you pointed out something a forgot to say previously.

The dynamic between Erin and Cecille struck me as somewhat discordant in the FemErin narrative. In my opinion, the progression of Cecille's feelings towards Erin doesn't align seamlessly with his transformation. Instead of growing increasingly resentful as Erin becomes more and more feminine, I believe it might be more fitting and emotionally resonant if Cecille's sentiments evolved inversely. That is, as Erin resists and stay true to his heterossexuality and his Hero status Cecille becames more and more hateful while in the other hand when he embraces his femininity, Cecille's hostility could diminish, replaced by a growing fondness, support and empathy for Erin's female self.

By showcasing Cecille's shift in attitude as Erin explores and embraces his femininity, the narrative could paint a more heartfelt and cohesive picture of acceptance and understanding.
It's not in Cecille's character to accept the fact that her Hero is weak and feminine. She has deep seated abandonment issues and wants someone strong and reliable who sees through her self-destructive tendencies. Femerin is everything she hates and she uses his feminization as a way to justify her betrayal.

Regarding the Mars and Erin relationship, I found Mars' inclination toward care and affection to Erin somewhat incongruent with the desired/ideal narrative. Instead, I propose a more fitting portrayal where Mars consistently treats Erin harshly, maintaining a stance of complete control and dominance. This portrayal would solidify Mars's objective of reducing Erin to a submissive sissy slave without any form of sentimental attachment.
I don't know, I think Mars being somewhat soft with him contrasts better with how the girls were treating him. Because Erin is very eager for validation, it's easy to earn his favor.

It's possible to not do the femdom stuff and have Mars seduce him himself post timeskip. There Mars is more dominant and scary. Maybe you would enjoy that more.
 

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I don't know, I think Mars being somewhat soft with him contrasts better with how the girls were treating him. Because Erin is very eager for validation, it's easy to earn his favor.
I like Mars having a soft spot for Erin.
He recognizes the absolutely shitty hand of cards that was dealt to him because he was as well, and wants to help him, but the ways that he can are constrained by the situation they're both trapped in. At least that's my take/understanding.
 
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It's not in Cecille's character to accept the fact that her Hero is weak and feminine. She has deep seated abandonment issues and wants someone strong and reliable who sees through her self-destructive tendencies. Femerin is everything she hates and she uses his feminization as a way to justify her betrayal.



I don't know, I think Mars being somewhat soft with him contrasts better with how the girls were treating him. Because Erin is very eager for validation, it's easy to earn his favor.

It's possible to not do the femdom stuff and have Mars seduce him himself post timeskip. There Mars is more dominant and scary. Maybe you would enjoy that more.
I for one love to be gentle to Erin, so this update was a nice treat. Would like to see another gallery update however bc I'm running out of save files at this point.
 
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At this point Erin is either gonna kill himself or gonna become a god level threat abomination. What cecile did to him was diabolic. An act of pure evil. The goddess was right about her
 
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The dynamic between Erin and Cecille struck me as somewhat discordant in the FemErin narrative. In my opinion, the progression of Cecille's feelings towards Erin doesn't align seamlessly with his transformation. Instead of growing increasingly resentful as Erin becomes more and more feminine, I believe it might be more fitting and emotionally resonant if Cecille's sentiments evolved inversely. That is, as Erin resists and stay true to his heterossexuality and his Hero status Cecille becames more and more hateful while in the other hand when he embraces his femininity, Cecille's hostility could diminish, replaced by a growing fondness, support and empathy for Erin's female self.
Needless to say, Cecille already despised Erin for not being an alpha male like she liked, the more she exploited Erin's insecurities and manipulated her feelings for her, the more her sadistic nature emerged as well as her contempt for Erin for being so little man, but the irony here is that Mars is the one who develops empathetic feelings for him and that only makes it more fuel for Cecille to hate Erin because she feels like her semen factory is being taken away.
 
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