Jin-Woo'
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SOO... award-winning, multimillion-dollar revenue received project is Trash to you huh...
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7empest5teele
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Woah, is there an editor scheduled to fix the broken english here like in World?
Holy shiit, reading that was just comical.
At best I was laughing at things like "bring me to the outside and upside down" or something to that effect, then there is bring it on brotherfucker, and some parts that were so illegible and jumbled it reads like a dozen words were thrown in a blender and spewed out on the screen.
I would recommend an editor donating their time to just doing a once over for the dialog, or at the very least use google translator.
I like humor in novels and games, just not laughing at the dialog itself.
Holy shiit, reading that was just comical.
At best I was laughing at things like "bring me to the outside and upside down" or something to that effect, then there is bring it on brotherfucker, and some parts that were so illegible and jumbled it reads like a dozen words were thrown in a blender and spewed out on the screen.
I would recommend an editor donating their time to just doing a once over for the dialog, or at the very least use google translator.
I like humor in novels and games, just not laughing at the dialog itself.